Become an NPC in a Strange World

It looks good, the writing is online, and the humor is enough For a new book with less than a hundred chapters, the memory of more than twenty chapters is more or less too long (the longest I have read so far), and it may be a bit discouraging, but I have to say that the timing of inserting the memory is great. The memory content seems chaotic and fragmented, but this is exactly the effect the author wants to create. It is very consistent with the brain of a person who has two or three souls spliced together. That is, it is very reasonable. The content of the memory almost supplements the background of this novice village, paving the way for the appearance of another heroine. But what is very puzzling is that the part about memory that I want to know the most is the part where the protagonist also wants to know but has no memory. I thought it would be revealed in this memory but it didn't, so the author, you still want to interest me (pointing) In the end, the protagonist wakes up from his memory and slowly straightens out the chaotic memories. In fact, it also smoothes out the thoughts of our readers. In order to avoid repetition, some laughs are also added (thumbs up) In general, this paragraph is a bonus for readers who can read it to the end (I wanted to use a metaphor here but didn't think of it, so let's pretend I have used it (finger)) Overall, it's very well written! Looking forward to It feels a bit strange to integrate a new system. It seems that the already large world view has become larger. It can be understood that it is to improve the funnyness of the article, but it is more or less a little bit, abrupt, and superfluous (pointing fingers) Well, mainly because of the abruptness Okay, the protagonist also complained about this on the next page. . . (Lost in thought)

It's 1.12 In the morning. I just read this book. The memory is over. The author succeeded in scaring me to tears twice and once... Kids, I'm so excited. I have to catch up on my homework with my best friend later. My best friend said she is watching Korean dramas, but I don't dare to get up now... I'm so excited. Today is a very explosive day.

He seemed to hear the girl's breathing, as the girl was gradually falling asleep. However, even though he knew that the girl would most likely fall asleep and not wake up, he, who had mastered the "rules" of this space, still made no move. She just stood there quietly. She suddenly thought that every time her granddaughter was woken up from her nap, she would coquettishly ask her to sleep for a while, and she would accompany the girl quietly every time like she did now. She would let the watermelon in her hand gradually lose its coolness, and the sweet juice from the pulp would drip down her palm with the sunlight, and eventually melt into the white clouds of the afternoon. I want to cry every time I watch this episode, it's really good! Don't use the family knife to kill me <(ToT)>

To be honest, this memory is too long and feels a bit disconnected. It feels like I am reading two books. The author's writing is a bit blurry. He wrote the main plot for a long time and didn't advance it at all.

I am now in the state of reviewing. After I read this book, it was a success for me. When you read it, you may feel that the author is slow in writing, but the content is very detailed. On the contrary, I prefer the story to be slow. When the plot slows down, the character story will be polished better. She and the traditional double heroine The story is different. She doesn't appear at the beginning. The story uses the perspective of one of the parties to create a strong sense of immersion and suspense. So far, the story is more important than the emotional line. The flow is long and the emotions are naturally coming out. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. With such a rhythm of writing the plot, the relationship blossoms and I feel very hopeful. Finally, I want to say that it is really top-notch. The first chapter has been completed and the middle part takes up a lot of memories, but I recommend reading it. It supplements the background of the characters and enriches the image. The refreshing feeling when you play straight with the insider later is something you can't experience if you skip it and treat it as a side story. I'm looking forward to the author's subsequent storyline development. I was also preparing to write a novel. I suddenly finished reading it today. I saw that the second part was probably unfinished. The first part was good. I took the time to read it, but I don't recommend it.

There is absolutely no problem with the quality of the article, but the author's control of his own rhythm is a bit poor. He poured a lot of water at the beginning and persuaded many people to back down. I guess I have seen the latest. Will I check the update if I get 5 stars?

It's a really great book. The characters of the protagonist are really interesting, especially the description of the protagonist. The protagonist is a bit eccentric and a bit abstract, which I like even more. As of the 70th chapter of the second volume, there are no major problems in the whole book, and there are no major poisonous points, except for the front part. The first volume of 30 chapters of memories is a bit too long, which slightly affects the perception, but there is no major problem. Although the memory chapters are long, they lay a lot of foreshadowing and explain many settings more clearly. Overall, it is a great book. Please keep updating the author. One chapter a day is really not enough.

It's so beautiful, the memory section could be a separate book [face covering] It was indeed a slow start when I went there, and the writing was pretty good, but there were too many irrelevant plots, and the main plot didn't start to advance until around chapter 75.

It's really well written, but it's a bit verbose. When I looked up this section of my memory, I realized that I had written more than 30 chapters [face-covering]. It's worth reading and watching. It's true that it's slow to heat up. It's so slow that the second heroine (suspected) appeared in a short section.

This memory is too long... After reading it, I felt inexplicably confused... But it's really pretty…

The memory part is so long...... Maybe if you split the memory part and insert it into the plot, it will feel better [face covering]

Reading this novel, I always feel a bit familiar, just like the book I read before called The Fraudster Girl is also a lily novel, Weird World, but the author is not updated. They said that the author will wait until he finishes writing, and then publish it all at once [face covering]

It's a pretty good book, but it's really slow to catch on. It's been so long and it's not yet time for the game to be launched, which reminds me of the next door🍍There's a game book with millions of words and the plot hasn't been published much yet ()

Warm reminder, the first part of this article is a bit... Occasionally off topic. Most readers feel that the description is too detailed, so please choose to read with caution. (Although it is indeed off topic, it's okay for me who likes to watch comedy + upgrade streams to kill time) It's indeed a slow burn [Sending Hearts] I saved 200 chapters and finished them in one go, Haokang!

To be honest, I can't imagine how many people were persuaded to quit by such lengthy memories in the early stage?

I sincerely hope that there won't be such memories in the future.

Ah - author, do you know how I feel? Worse than eating a fly.

Good thing, but the previous memory chapter looks a bit painful, and the author is so short.

Don't skip the memorization part. It explains the world view and explains the background. It's also very beautiful.

The background setting is rich, and many people complain that the plot is dragging, but I actually quite like it. The setting is detailed enough, so there are many details, the atmosphere is very strong, and the character relationships are also very interesting. It doesn't seem hollow at all, I just feel it's not interesting enough. Chapter 70 of Super Long Memories was actually the most enjoyable part for me to watch. Basically, my brain was analyzing it while I was reading it. At the end, when all the clues were gathered together and the truth was restored, I really felt a sense of accomplishment. It would be a pity if all of this was lost in order to "accelerate progress" and "develop the main line". . It's been a long time since I've read a novel and it's the first time I've seen such an interesting atmosphere, depressing and humorous at the same time.

It's quite interesting, with very little main plot. The first 80 or so pictures are all side memories. If you don't want to read it, you can skip it. It has almost no impact on the rest of the story.

One memory can encode more than a thousand pages, so you can be considered a Tomato Nanpowan.

The memories of the first part are a bit messy, and due to the update speed, these foreshadowings haven't been used yet [face covering], but it's good to watch! Come on, author!

Even though the memory chapter at the beginning was a little hard to understand, I almost gave up, but it becomes more and more interesting later on. It's best not to jump. At present, Yu's character image is quite full, and another heroine appears later, a senior sister who seems to have become a god. Will review after finishing.

Chapter 100 took me a day to talk about the setting, but the character development was good.

Looks good, but the memory part is too long

It's a very slow-burning novel. It's best to read more at once...

In fact, I think the writing is okay, but the length makes my eyes hurt. After writing almost 80 chapters, the main plot is just a little bit [currently in progress]. In fact, the language can be more refined. Personally, I think it's okay [I've learned it]. I'm just wondering if there are any similar books to recommend🌚.

I feel like the writing is pretty good and more to my liking, but I feel like not many people will read it. It just ended too hastily, and I felt like the author couldn't continue writing [crying]

The plot is pretty good and the writing is good, but it's too slow [crying] Fake, fake, it must be fake. How could it be that the crow just evolved and ended immediately [crying][crying]