The Arbiter from the Future

The first time I posted a book review, I found the dusty orb out of boredom. "The rating is unknown, and the number of people online is unknown." Although it was not the first time I saw it, I still picked up the bead with the mentality of testing the poison and looked at it carefully. In my opinion, it is a jewel, but it is restrained because of its lack of luster. Although it cannot be called a rare pearl, it can still compete with others in this magnificent library. During the reading process, I personally felt that there were some shortcomings. For example, the detailed description was not enough, the relationship between An Yi and other people was sometimes a little abrupt, and sometimes the emotional transition was not fluent enough. I hope the author will continue to work hard to improve his writing power and literary talent. (There are some questions here: when An Yi planned to avenge Wu Hua, although he didn't find the lynx for the first time, he didn't care anymore. Another example is that An Yi repeatedly said that he wanted to kill the spiritual ape, but in the end he left it alone. Although this can be regarded as a strong man's disregard for everything and being arrogant in the world, it still feels very awkward. I personally feel that the handling is not "perfect") Of course, as a novice writer, the author's writing skills are not mature enough (he needs to update more), but it is much better than other types of novels where the preface and follow-up words appear from time to time. Regarding the plot, I personally suggest adding details or using some abstract techniques (scenery, symbols, blank spaces, hints, etc.). I sincerely hope that the author will not write those bloody plots, but can be classic but innovative. Anti-conventions or subtitles are more popular now (the author has dealt with the details that were often criticized as a reader in his own books). Rather than writing blockbusters, I hope to write a good story and a group of vivid characters. Of course, not all authors are from well-off families, and many are forced to make a living. What kind of works they write depends on their personal wishes. Maybe I should be the first review of this book, but unfortunately I'm not good with words and I didn't know what to write yesterday. So the above is my impromptu review. I hope that more and more authors will get better and better, get rid of "single-player" as soon as possible, and turn "potential good books" into good books! 👍

Dear author, please keep there no heroine, no ambiguity, and let the protagonist be happy alone. Many good-looking novels are ruined by the role of the heroine 🤦 🤦 🤦

It's okay, I like the character of the male protagonist very much, he is domineering yet graceful [Admiration] The content is step-by-step, the writing is good, but I just hope there is no female protagonist. If there is a female protagonist in this type of plot, it may cause discrimination among readers. The plot line may not be grasped well and it may collapse later 🤔 🤔 The most important thing is that I feel that other people are not suitable for the male protagonist. Of course, these are just some suggestions. I hope it can provide the author with some ideas (don't blame me if I'm wrong [awkward laugh][awkward laugh])

It's really good-looking, very good-looking, recommended.

Come on! The content is very interesting, it suits my taste anyway, I like it very much! (ꈍᴗꈍ)

I also found gold in Daben.

It's well written and enjoyable to read, but I don't know why not many people read it.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Personally I feel pretty good

Logical and vivid protagonist