Dragon Ball: Tien Shinhan, Master of Ultimate Martial Arts

Hello author, I copied your book and published it on other platforms. The feedback from readers was very good, the profit was good, and there were a lot of payments. In the past few months, I want to buy a new car. I hope the author will write more chapters, so as not to affect my profit. Hope to know what happens!

I think it's good. Compared with those systems and Saiyan Dragon Ball books, this book is more suitable for ordinary people's values ​​​​and cultivation directions, of course, the tricks and so on. I still can't understand why I can't turn my energy into a sword. It's not bad to use it like Vegito. Since the protagonist can develop his own skills, why haven't he thought about the skills in various novels? In the follow-up, Klin and the others can also remove the restrictions on the human body like the protagonist. And the five elements🥚. To be honest, one's pursuit of the truth is lonely and slow. Maybe Wukong in the later period is a qualified martial artist, but I think Krillin is more suitable to be your partner. After all, Krillin knows how to develop tricks. He would definitely do better if given the chance. Finally, I hope to kill Vegeta, after all, he appears to destroy the race. Then eat others as food. When we arrived on Earth, the opening scene was to destroy half the city. And then actually destroy the earth. It can be said that as a real earthling, there is no reason to let him go.

The writing is very good and the plot is compact, but one thing that comes to my mind is that Tianjin Fan is not from Earth. He himself is not weak in combat, and in the later stage, his strength is above the second level. The author has not considered this

The content of the plot is very rhythmic and exciting. It is very interesting to use the Earthlings and the three-eyed bloodline to reach the peak of martial arts. It can be said that it is relatively novel compared to other fanfics. Unlike other fanfics, either the system or the Saiyan bloodline is much better. After reading too much, it becomes uninteresting. It's a pity that the progress of the plot line in the main space and time is a bit slow. I have finished watching the plot line and it has not yet reached the Saiyan part. It can be said to be a bit delayed. Basically, I went to other worlds to make up for my regrets, fight monsters and upgrades, and it was not enough. I finished it in two times. I hope it will be updated soon! ! !

The writing is pretty good, better than most other Dragon Ball fics, but... Actually the moves can be more diverse, and they don't necessarily have to follow the original work.

Dragon Ball fan fiction has a strange angle. There are very few Tianjin fans as the protagonists, and most of them are Saiyans. But the concept is quite reasonable and allows readers to experience how to train and fight in the Dragon Ball world from a non-Saiyan perspective.

Okay, good, keep working hard

It's my favorite theme, passionate fighting. The plot of the story is very natural and coherent. It is probably the story of Tianjin Fan's martial arts development. Each stage of improvement is to solve an incident that is difficult to resolve in Dragon Ball. The rhythm is great. It is best to force the ending, which is a pity. I was originally looking forward to the plot of Dragon Ball Super, but the ending is also well written and the whole book is complete.

My favorite character is Tenjin Fan. Whether he is the over-level controller Cell or the resolute stand in front of Majin Buu, he has become my favorite character. This novel makes up for the limitations of the original Tenjin Fan as a human on earth to become stronger. I hope that the author in the following chapters can let Tenjin Fan implement his martial arts will. However, I am very curious why the rating of Tenjin Fan was 8.5 When I first read this book and why it has become so low now.

I think it's a good-looking fanfic, it doesn't follow the original work, it has its own ideas, it's not holy, it's not disgusting!