Dragon Ball: Extreme Martial Arts Tianjin Rice

Hello author, I copied your book and published it on other platforms. The feedback from readers was very good, the profit was good, and there were a lot of payments. In the past few months, I want to buy a new car. I hope the author will write more chapters, so as not to affect my profit. Hope to know what happens!

I think it's good. Compared with those systems and Saiyan Dragon Ball books, this book is more suitable for ordinary people's values ​​​​and cultivation directions, of course, the tricks and so on. I still can't understand why I can't turn my energy into a sword. It's not bad to use it like Vegito. Since the protagonist can develop his own skills, why haven't he thought about the skills in various novels? In the follow-up, Klin and the others can also remove the restrictions on the human body like the protagonist. And the five elements🥚. To be honest, one's pursuit of the truth is lonely and slow. Maybe Wukong in the later period is a qualified martial artist, but I think Krillin is more suitable to be your partner. After all, Krillin knows how to develop tricks. He would definitely do better if given the chance. Finally, I hope to kill Vegeta, after all, he appears to destroy the race. Then eat others as food. When we arrived on Earth, the opening scene was to destroy half the city. And then actually destroy the earth. It can be said that as a real earthling, there is no reason to let him go.

The writing is very good and the plot is compact, but one thing that comes to my mind is that Tianjin Fan is not from Earth. He himself is not weak in combat, and in the later stage, his strength is above the second level. The author has not considered this

The content of the plot is very rhythmic and exciting. It is very interesting to use the Earthlings and the three-eyed bloodline to reach the peak of martial arts. It can be said that it is relatively novel compared to other fanfics. Unlike other fanfics, either the system or the Saiyan bloodline is much better. After reading too much, it becomes uninteresting. It's a pity that the progress of the plot line in the main space and time is a bit slow. I have finished watching the plot line and it has not yet reached the Saiyan part. It can be said to be a bit delayed. Basically, I went to other worlds to make up for my regrets, fight monsters and upgrades, and it was not enough. I finished it in two times. I hope it will be updated soon! ! !

The writing is pretty good, better than most other Dragon Ball fics, but... Actually the moves can be more diverse, and they don't necessarily have to follow the original work.

Dragon Ball fan fiction has a strange angle. There are very few Tianjin fans as the protagonists, and most of them are Saiyans. But the concept is quite reasonable and allows readers to experience how to train and fight in the Dragon Ball world from a non-Saiyan perspective.

Okay, good, keep working hard

You can write well and have your own ideas

It's my favorite theme, passionate fighting. The plot of the story is very natural and coherent. It is probably the story of Tianjin Fan's martial arts development. Each stage of improvement is to solve an incident that is difficult to resolve in Dragon Ball. The rhythm is great. It is best to force the ending, which is a pity. I was originally looking forward to the plot of Dragon Ball Super, but the ending is also well written and the whole book is complete.

I think it's a good-looking fanfic, it doesn't follow the original work, it has its own ideas, it's not holy, it's not disgusting!

My favorite character is Tenjin Fan. Whether he is the over-level controller Cell or the resolute stand in front of Majin Buu, he has become my favorite character. This novel makes up for the limitations of the original Tenjin Fan as a human on earth to become stronger. I hope that the author in the following chapters can let Tenjin Fan implement his martial arts will. However, I am very curious why the rating of Tenjin Fan was 8.5 When I first read this book and why it has become so low now.

Take Bulma or give it to Krillin, as long as it doesn't go to any prince, what's the name of that guy? I suddenly forgot

Come on come on come on come on

Please give it a good review. So far I haven't read it, it doesn't have any bad points, which is very valuable for fan works.

Very good, but we still need to strengthen the limiter of Tianjin rice

You can talk about Tianjin rice in different time and space

It's very good. It's a novel about Tianjin rice cooking pig's feet, punching Beerus, and starting a prosperous martial arts era on Earth. The finale is that Raditz was beaten to death by a farmer's family when he came to Earth.

Dragon Ball is pretty good among fandoms, but why are there so few people watching it?

The book is good. Good luck to the author. I hope the author will write better and better!

It's just a chopstick joke [laughing evilly], it's not enough to watch at all

It's pretty good, but it's just a harem. Of course, it's mainly about fighting.

I still prefer this kind of Dragon Ball that gets stronger step by step, and the main character doesn't wander around and is more stable than Da Te [laughing evilly]. It's best to take Bulma too. Dragon Ball Z hasn't started yet. It wouldn't be a waste if I don't take it. The only shortcoming is that it is too verbose. I hope it can be improved.

It looks good. Only Tianjin rice like this can be regarded as Erlangshen.

This is the first time I've seen it from the perspective of Tianjin fans, it's pretty good

It's pretty good. It's hard work writing, so I'd like to give it a good review.

It seems okay at the moment, but why not upgrade the four body coupons, then dozens of people will be separated to practice faster.

It looks good. I love watching it while standing upside down.

This book is okay

It looks good. I love watching it. Come on.

Why don't you bring fish to Karin the Immortal? Fairy beans are truly bug-level props. The Bobo of the Celestial Temple is the most mysterious. [Sinister smile]. Can you stop smiling lightly all the time?