After Returning to the Parallel World, I Became Stronger

In terms of roles: the main CP's way of getting along and the deputy CP's understanding of emotions can be said to be similar to group portraits. Whether they are the protagonist or supporting characters, they are indispensable. They all have their own personality characteristics, their own joys, sorrows, joys, and spiritual sustenance. In terms of plot: it is relatively smooth, with ups and downs, various conflicts and narratives coexisting, and a lot of foreshadowing and foreshadowing. Although there are still some shortcomings and potential plots, it can also leave room for readers' imagination. The plot is indeed good, but there is still room for improvement. The writing style needs to be improved, and the character development can be more three-dimensional and full. However, as a first attempt, it is not easy to persevere, and the rewards are indeed many. Description techniques, opening layout, etc. Can be gradually explored and improved in the next new work. Finally, I would like to give myself a thumbs up. The road ahead is long, but with the characters in the story accompanying me, it will definitely be different and exciting! [Laugh][laugh][shy]