Pokemon: Nobody Understands Evolution Better Than Me!

What you wrote is too naive. If you are writing this before the alliance has developed, you can say that you hate this Pokémon and people don't understand it, but it is impossible for the alliance not to know these secrets that can evolve Pokémon. How could the alliance not know about it in every region?

Just like that! In the first part, the plot is too awkward in terms of characters and speech when adults turn into children, and then there are too many purely daily Pokémon talks. This kind of writing is more suitable for a small group of people. The other thing is that you write about life according to the Pokémon world view. In fact, the introduction there is rich and colorful enough. They went from being afraid of Pokémon in ancient times to accepting them as partners later, so I personally think that this direction of yours is a bit redundant.

Looks good, come on

It's just so so~ I won't mention that you can use evolution stones to evolve~ Those evolutions caused by you were all discovered by the protagonist...

It's actually very good, but the dialogue is a bit literary 🤦

I opened a book at random and unexpectedly found a treasure novel. It's really good to read. You can tell that the author's writing style is very solid and the content is well conceived. It's a very comfortable Pokémon novel.

It's beautiful, I really like Menas [Sending my heart][Sending my heart] I finally saw this kind of daily elf writing with Menas as the initial elf.