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This book still has great potential. It is expected that it will not be lower than 9.1 In the future. The subject matter is also very novel and quite creative in the transformation circle. If you are tired of reading urban transformation stories, check it out. The post-apocalyptic transformation novels are still very good. I am a little dissatisfied with the protagonist. She was not affected by the protagonist. The protagonist was so weak at the time. The school beauty didn't take advantage of it [smile][smile] In addition, the technology can be described in more detail and the weapons are not very powerful. This needs to be improved. Try to combine some scientific theories. The system can be described in a more spiritual way. About the system, try to have more early scenes. The characters of the system should also be playful and cute. This is good. It can be said that this book is very good-looking. I hope it can be updated to 20 chapters. The word count is too few (~￣▽￣)~

I personally think that the early and middle stages of this book are pretty good, the descriptions are quite delicate, and there is one highlight. Well, just my personal opinion (if you criticize me, you are rude): the author pays tribute to many famous novels, such as: The Lost City of Strange Beasts, The Way of the Weird Immortal, The End of Ten Days, God Slayer, The Lord of Mysteries... This one really poked me [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] It may be that the author is not good at describing battle scenes. Many places have been omitted, which greatly reduces the enjoyment of reading. In addition, in the later period, the plot collapsed a bit and was suspected of being unfinished [Punch Out][Punch Out][Punch Out] The focus of the plot is a bit strange. In the later stage, it neither fully reflects the power of technology nor the powerful combat power beyond the earth, solar system, etc... And there are some holes that have not been filled in. Let's just think that the author has left blank spaces for art. Although there are some minor flaws, this novel is still worth reading [Like] [Like] I hope the author will continue to work hard and create better works [Blow a kiss] [Like] [Like] 2025.9.21 15:45 Share a little bit 1. The content of becoming a hundred is also possible. I believe that many people come in because of this label. However, I need to remind you that the author does not describe the in-depth bonding between the two girls. The sexual part is only a side touch, but there are still a lot of sweet parts! There is no need to give up just because there are no posts; [Like] 2. However, there is no link to female abortion in sickly white hair; 3. There is also the final plot. Although it is difficult to evaluate, I have to praise the author's imagination; 4. In the end, the heroine's mechanical body was disassembled, which poked me inexplicably [face covering], but it was a little stiff, and the transition from front to back would have been nice if it were more natural. (If you have different opinions, yours is the main point)

It seems that it can be added to my bookshelf at the moment, but I don't know about it later.

Nice, the weak beautiful girl with white hair is awesome ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з

It's great. I love watching it. As a child, I love going to kindergarten by car.

What about stickers? I came here just for Lily and Tie Tie. Only then did I realize that the focus has always been on disasters and upgrades!

Except for the classic beginning, which is a bit discouraging, the rest is quite interesting. Keep up the good work, author! O(^▽^)o "Wonderful Later"

Anyway, it won't be finished. Let me give you a rating first. If you like Lily and leisure, you can take a look. Remember, you don't have to take it seriously.

It's very interesting (｡･ω･｡), ​​thank you to the author! ! ! (=^▽^=)

For the sake of never ending

It's not bad. You can strengthen the area where he lives, especially the firearms and weapons installed on the gate. In the later stage, you can also add some mechanical creatures.

It's awesome, I love it, the author is so cute, I must come twice

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's so annoying to finish it in such a short time.

Okay, I just felt confused when I saw it

It's a really good book, but it's too short\(//∇//)\

The author of super nice [Admiration] will update soon [laughs]

If you are interested, you can resist it, the toxicity is not low [Petrochemical]

Come on, author, come on!

Technology and the apocalypse are really invincible [face covering]

There's a bit of a jump in the back

Please write more next time

The content is very good and the plot is innovative.

It's okay, the content is great, but it's too short

The subject matter is okay and the writing is good.

Good looking. Love watching. Very short. May 23, 2025 06:51