The Sword Fell in the South China Sea at the Beginning, and I Laid Out the Nine Continents in the World

I have never seen Jian Lai. I don't know if the character design is written or not. But I like this story, and I don't regard it as a fan of Swordsman, just as it is. His handling style has the momentum of modern people and young people. So far, the character creation is quite good, and the plot is also very coherent. There is no deliberate mention of anything. People who don't know about the sword can also read it smoothly. I'm really looking forward to the author's future plot arrangements, and hope to keep reading for a long time (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡.

It's great. At the moment when Chen Zhenghua is unfinished, there is such an excellent fan work that meets everyone's expectations. Come on, Xiao Jiang. As an outsider, Ning Yuan carries evil in his heart, but his sword comes from good. Although he is very dishonest about his feelings, he has the charm and grandeur of a swordsman. Xiao Jiang, please don't give up on this book. Now that you've finished cutting Wilderness, you can write something original. Lotus World is free to play, the lineage of Wen Sheng wants to make up for Ning Yuan, the whereabouts of the three souls and seven souls, and the development of the emotional line. And Jiang She is still trapped in Yinghuo and has not come out. We also need to discuss how to properly deal with Chen Pingan, a man who walks in the world. There is much more that can be written. Come on, Xiao Jiang, Mingyue Songfeng comes with sword in hand [Sending Hearts]

The writing has the flavor of a sword, the loyalty of the world, tenderness like water, the joy of being fourteen in one night, the unrestrainedness of the sword coming out of Tuoyue Mountain, and the most important thing is that Qi Jingchun is in the world, the world is happy, and so am I.

To be honest, it's enough to write at the current pace. There are no systematic mandatory tasks and the protagonist's character of doing whatever he wants is the most interesting. Those who say they want to add a system just want to read cool stories, and want the protagonist to easily defeat enemies across classes without having to go around and around and kill everyone they see. That would be very boring. Personally, I think it's a group portrait article. It not only looks at the growth and changes in the protagonist's mood step by step, but also depicts the stories of other characters. It's really interesting [laughs]

The writing is very good. I felt a little aggrieved for the protagonist in the early stage, but later I felt relieved. Mr. Qi could die for those 6,000 people, but those people had to die there if they wanted him. All kinds of calculations were made frequently, and he didn't even want to lose face. This really makes no sense, and I like the character of the protagonist very much. He is a swordsman in the Great Wall of Sword Qi. He is also a person who has not lived a good life in his previous life. He must do what he wants to do, whether he is evil or good, he should be himself and be good to the people around him. The writing style is also very good, I hope to continue writing. Oh, yes, since this is a fanfic, and since all the female characters have been described, it would be a pity not to marry her.

### **Analysis of praise highlights** 1. **Grand world view and kendo system** The novel constructs a multi-level world structure (such as Haoran Tianxia, Sword Qi Great Wall, Hanging Mountain, etc.), And unfolds the plot around the sword cultivation system. The protagonist Ning Yuan proves the Tao with the sword, and connects the complex struggles of forces through "laying out the world". At the same time, it incorporates high-burning plots such as "Falling on the Upside Down Mountain" and "Sword Opening Up the Upside Down Mountain", showing an epic conflict and the artistic conception of kendo. For example, in Chapter 36, Ning Yuan uses the "Innocent Immortal Sword" to open a mountain. The light of the sword penetrates the sky and the earth, causing thousands of swords to resonate. The scene is very visually impactful. 2. **Three-dimensional character creation and delicate emotions** The portrayal of side characters such as the wine shop proprietress Yun Gu (Chapter 17) is particularly touching. Carrying the pain of her family's destruction, she practiced kendo hard at the Great Sword Qi Wall. Her interaction with Ning Yuan not only showed tenderness, but also hinted at the memory of her deceased relatives. The plot of asking Ning Yuan to find the "Changli Sword" shows the struggle and belief of ordinary swordsmen in the context of war, arousing readers' empathy. 3. **Original and anti-routine design** The novel clearly emphasizes "non-nanny writing + original plot" to avoid homogeneous routines. For example, in dealing with the relationship between the protagonist and Chen Ping'an (the character in "Sword Comes"), the author did not choose the traditional defense model, but created conflicts through "antagonism between brother and sister", which not only respects the setting of the original work, but also gives new ideas. In addition, the protagonist's growth path emphasizes "speaking truth with the sword" rather than simply crushing it with force, which deepens the theme level. 4. **Ideology resonates with readers** The work explores propositions such as "the way of the world and the human heart" and "the world is different", and conveys the value of "proofing the truth with force" through Ning Yuan's kendo practice. As mentioned in user reviews, compared to the grand philosophy of "Sword Comes", this book pays more attention to "principles that make readers comfortable" and simplifies complex thinking through the perspective of sword cultivation, making it easier to resonate. World view and setting: the embodiment of sword cultivating spirit As the "No. 1 Mountain Seal in the World" in "Sword Comes", Xuanxuan Mountain is not only a fortress to resist foreign enemies, but is also endowed with profound symbolic meaning. It represents the sword cultivator's pursuit of ideals and the coexistence of regrets—the hanging mountain that is so close but has never arrived, reflecting the common dilemma in reality where people are trapped in the trivialities of life and fail to pursue what they want in their hearts. This setting combines the grand narrative of the Xianxia world with the resonance of human nature, becoming the core element of the work that attracts readers. The tension of the opening plot: the narrative logic of the sword flying over the hanging mountain The novel begins with "The Sword Opens Up the Hanging Mountain", and its plot design may draw from the contradictory nature of the Hanging Mountain in "The Sword Comes": it is not only a place that swordsmen yearn for, but also a witness to sacrifice and regret. It is mentioned that the unknown foreign swordsman used two flying swords "Red Furnace" and "Spot Blood" to break into the upside-down mountain alone, and left the word "come" after cutting the throne with the sword, pushing the romance and tragedy of martial arts to the extreme. This type of plot sets a passionate tone through the intense conflict of "breaking the situation with a sword" Core: Emotional resonance and philosophical speculation The evaluation of the plot related to the hanging mountain in "The Sword Comes" is polarized, but the early scenes such as "Send the sword and hang upside down on the mountain" are still considered wonderful. Its success lies in sublimating the "Hanging Mountain" from a geographical coordinate to a spiritual totem - the line "A little awe-inspiring in the chest is nowhere to be found in the Hanging Mountain". It combines martial arts heroics with Confucian principles and gives the character's actions a philosophical depth. In addition, the vow in the book to "wait until the spring breeze blows and go to the upside-down mountain" is not only a wait for opportunities, but also a challenge to fate, which is in line with young readers' imagination of breaking through the shackles of reality.

The wonderful pen brings forth flowers, the writing thoughts spring up, and the writing becomes a chapter at your fingertips, the flowing clouds and flowing water are amazing, the pen sweeps thousands of troops, the writing brings flowers, the meaning is profound, the stone is turned into gold, the writing is shining, every word is pearly, the rendition is vivid and lifelike, Short and concise, vivid and vivid, excellent writing style, quick thinking, erudite, talented, knowledgeable, concise and concise, flawless, full of wit, to the point, far-sighted, precise and precise, well-spoken and well-spoken. Outstanding, superb, breathtaking, majestic, indescribable, breathtaking, overwhelming, smooth and unparalleled, sharp writing, humorous, elegant, clear-cut, gorgeous, simple There is no pretentiousness, the writing is smooth, the image is vivid, the talent is brilliant, the style is elegant, the grace is elegant, the sight is impressive, the beauty is stunning, the words are eloquent, the love and the text are intertwined, the power is reflected on the back of the paper, and it is fearful of spring and autumn. How can the word "good" be so good?

It's the best one I've read among the Jianlai fanfics. It captures the feeling of a general manager, but some parts are not handled very well, and it looks awkward, such as the point of time travel. Overall, the shortcomings are not concealed, and it's a quick update. I'm looking forward to watching Killing People in the Savage World.

I would like to give myself a book review, and also give a few words of truth to new readers. At that time, I started the book with enthusiasm, so my writing at the beginning was not good, just like a novice. But after I studied it seriously, it got better, and my reading rate did not drop much. Just a heads up. This is a very important point, especially for Taoist friends who have read Jian Lai. When you first read this article, or just glance at it, you will easily become more and more angry as you read it. Why? Because you will see the same characters but different personalities. To put it bluntly, it is ooc. For example, the boss Jianxian, Ning Yao, Ruan Xiu, Lao Jian Tiao, etc., In Jian Lai, they all have specific and distinctive characters. But in my book, everything has changed. Of course, it's not that it's OOC as soon as it appears, but when the characters experience certain things, they change their temperament, just like us. Unless something happens, how can there be any change? Just like when I was a child, my parents helped me learn to walk, and the teacher taught me the truth, but the meaning was quite different. But there are still a lot of readers who, after reading the book, criticized me in book reviews for ruining these characters, saying that Ruan Xiu should not be such Ruan Xiu, and Lao Jian Tiao should not be such Lao Jian Tiao. They should live in the sword. No problem. But this is not where the sword comes from. Fandom is a secondary creation. The so-called "secondary" and "creation" obviously mean, literally, to write different stories and different characters. I want to create, not copy. I think it's OOC just because I'm still immersed in Jian Lai. To put it bluntly, what some readers want to see is just what they want to see. Just like when I saw Jian Lai and Chen Pingan going to Laolongcheng for the second time, I hated that Du Mao deeply and gnashed my teeth. While watching, I thought, couldn't Chen Diao Temple make Xiaoping feel proud for a while? Do you have to rely on the old sword strip? Can't he do it himself? At that time, if I wanted to read a fanfic, I would definitely want to see the scene I wanted to happen. I understand. Feel the same. But now I am a coder. In order to respect Jianlai, and in order not to let myself down or let down the readers, I cannot copy it. I have to write something else. I believe that the swordsmen who have been following the update all have this idea. If the character's personality remains unchanged, why read my book? Isn't the manager thousands of times better at writing than I am? A long time ago, probably after writing Ning Xiaozi's arrival in the town, I was in a dilemma, thinking about whether to drastically change the main plot of the original novel. I have thought this way too. Because I also like Jianlai very much. More than two million words have been written for this purpose. I was thinking whether I should follow what some readers said and let my Ningyuan interfere a little and nanny a little, so that Xiaopingan wouldn't be so miserable. Later I still couldn't convince myself. I chose the path that I like and the protagonist of my book likes to take, and write his story from his perspective. I think this is respecting Jianlai, as well as respecting yourself and readers. I'm not praising myself. Although my writing skills have improved, my writing is not that good. I have no experience in writing novels before. Last year, I just started writing it when my mind got excited. I also like to intersperse some of my own theories, just like the manager. If you say that I imitate him, I will admit that this is nothing. You and I have both read the text with the teacher. Finally, I still want to remind you that if you finish reading, you still think I destroyed the sword... Then what I want to say is that you are just imagining, and in your imaginings, you ruined your own sword. The sword was left there, with more than 10 million words, in good condition, not stolen or robbed. Let's take a step back. Even if I fail later in writing, the combat power, emotional drama, inconsistent logic, etc., It will not ruin the sword. I just ruined the book. And this book. It's me.

I have spent more than 1,000 hours on both accounts, and this book ranks in the top 10 among the many books I have read. It is one of the two most beautiful fan works in my opinion. He is truly a fan, but he is not completely attached to the original text. In many places, it is not similar in appearance like ordinary fans, but the content is inconsistent, but the spiritual core is very similar to the main characters. He uniquely looks at the world of the novel from the perspective of the protagonist, bringing a different experience to the audience. And unlike the original works that are obscure and The Riddler, this book is very thorough and approachable in many places, but it does not fall into clichés. It still has its spiritual core and clever techniques. All I can say is praise, praise, praise. Highly recommended. But it's best if you've read the original Sword. But there is one thing to say, this book really feels like he wants to squeeze out the original work, which is that in some aspects it is already more brilliant than the original work. Come on, author, brother!

The first four hundred chapters are very comfortable to read. It is a refreshing novel and it is also the only novel I have rewarded on Tomato. The author's life style is fully reflected in the novel, with emotional drama and human atmosphere. The disadvantages are 1. The protagonist does not grow much in the text, and there is not much difference between the protagonists in Chapter 100 and Chapter 500. 2. The author likes to make sense too much and uses a long length to express his opinions. This does not mean that novels cannot make sense, but there is a difference between telling the truth and leaving blank space for readers to feel for themselves. But despite his flaws, he will still chase after

The writing is very good, the writing style is very good, but, can it have two female protagonists? When I read it, I thought I would lose to Xiu Xiu, but I didn't expect that I would lose to Jiang Yun. Jiang Yun is very good, he belongs to the kind of Bai Yueguang that people bury in their hearts when they are young. I hope it will have a good ending.

After reading it for a long time, I forgot to rate it. To be honest, it can be said that it is the strongest fan on the whole site. It is long and still maintains high-quality writing. It is different from ordinary cool articles. The magical foreshadowing of the time buried in the early stage is willing to do everything in the cracks and dead situations to help Mr. Qi survive. This journey is really touching. "Because he is Mr. Qi, so it is worth it." I hope more fellow Taoists can read this fanfic. Life is not always smooth sailing, but the characters we love will not become heroes because of tragedy. @The bright moon was still there Thank you Teacher Jiang for your persistence and dedication

I haven't read Sword, but I can tell something from this book. The protagonist has a lot of personality and is very chivalrous. In the early stage, he gave me the impression that he would live a new life and die. He would fight if he didn't accept it. Maybe I look at it more rigorously. In my philosophy, whether it is martial arts or fantasy cultivating immortals, there are bullshit principles and constraints. Strength is the principle. The protagonist gives me a situation where I am not strong. When I have a backer, I feel how invincible I am. Even if I ignore things and fear that my heart will be broken, I can't be so tough. No. Regardless of whether it is speaking harshly or drawing a sword, it gives me a very strong feeling that I am the biggest in the world. It may be because the novels I read are basically very strict. This is my point of view. It is not recommended for reference. Everyone has their own opinions. What I said in the book is reasonable and what you said is reasonable. So who is unreasonable? Overall, the book is pretty good and the writing is good. It's worth reading. The protagonist's character is not very good, he is not rigorous enough, and he gives me a sense of recklessness in doing things.

There's nothing to say, it's fine. The writing is excellent. There may be flaws but definitely not many (actually I haven't found any flaws yet [shy]). It creates a vivid world of swordsmanship. Whether it's the ups and downs of the plot or the characters, it makes people's hearts beat. Each character has its own personal charm. The author's writing is really good. I'm honored to read this book. I hope I can take care of myself. Please add more when it comes to the body. [Blowing Kisses] [Flowing Kisses] Regarding the emotional lines, I can only say that she deserves to be a female author. (But I don't know if it's because the author is a female author, so she writes emotional lines well, or because the author herself has delicate and rich emotions, so she writes so well. Anyway, most male authors' emotional lines are a mess, or they don't write at all.) It's not easy to see such delicate emotional lines in male videos. Sansheng is lucky.

The characters are described in popular and real-life terms with distinctive personalities. Among the popular online novels, it stands alone, giving readers a strong sense of involvement. I sincerely recommend it to more friends who like this book and the author.

The writing style is very good. It is enough to open a single book. I hope the author can write it to the end. I don't know if the author will see it. Regarding the relationship line, I still hope that Jiang Yun can also have a successful relationship with the protagonist. I really like this girl. Of course, I don't mean to hate Ruan Xiu. Ruan Xiu is also very good. I just feel that in so many fanfics I have read, there are many cases where Ruan Xiu is the heroine, but Jiang Yun is really real and only exists here. This is my first book review, please bear with me if there are any inconsiderations. Regarding Jiang Yun, it is just my selfishness. I believe that the author also tried very hard to bring this little girl to life at the beginning. I wish the author many good reviews and many new books. I just feel that it will be difficult to read an original character like Jiang Yun in the future.

It's good-looking, very good-looking, and has the flavor of Jian Lai. It's a very good fanfic. First of all, I have read the original work of Jian Lai. How should I put it? I like Jian Lai very much, but I don't like Chen Ping'an very much. Jiang Hu, or Four Worlds, written by General Manager, is very good. Many characters are very vivid and have their own thoughts and principles. It's like a storyteller telling stories instead of writing them. Although the world's hearts are down and the world may be full of calculations, there are still people who are tinkering with things, and there are still people who are willing to sacrifice their lives for righteousness and be benevolent. Why I don't like Chen Ping'an? It's mainly because it's hard to say how he feels to me. Everyone says he is a mud-legged person, but is that true? The original book gave me the exact opposite feeling. He is not a mud-legged person, or he is a fake mud-legged person. Behind him is Mr. Qi, a literary sage, a sword holder, and even the founder of the three religions. Everyone is staring at him, everyone is looking forward to him, just like the son of the chairman working at the bottom, everyone knows it, but is he really an ordinary office worker who comes to work? No. So he wears the skin of a mud-legged man, receives attention from the upper class, and talks about the principles and sufferings of the world. There is a kind of hypocritical person who teaches people how to be human. I'm not saying that the logic is bad, nor that there's anything wrong with the protagonist's growth, or that he's grown from a mud-legged person to a mountain man. But this kind of destiny, or this kind of predetermined growth, I feel very bad and very uncomfortable. So I like the characters in Jian Lai very much, including Mr. Qi, A Liang, Xiu Xiu, Ning Yao, Wen Sheng, and the boss Jian Xian... But I only dislike Chen Pingan. Maybe there is something wrong with the writing by the manager, or maybe I am being pretentious. But it doesn't matter, there are a thousand Hamlets among a thousand people. Everyone has their own opinions and ideas. This is good, very good. Finally, I am very lucky to read this Jianlai fanfic. It is very well written, really good. Even if the protagonist is an alien demon, even if the protagonist sacrifices his life, he can still draw a sword for the injustice in his heart. The protagonist can draw a sword for the loved ones around him, which is very good. Likewise, Xiuxiu didn't become a god, and Ning Yao was still Ning Yatou. These are very good and make up for the regrets of Jian Laizhong. It made me happy to watch. Finally, I hope the author can continue writing and write a sword that is equally wonderful but different. That is great kindness. Finally, I wish Xiao Jiang to be happy and young forever.

Yes, I like reading it, especially because there are too few fanfics. He wrote another protagonist, not from your Chen Ping'an perspective, and there is no camera feel.

Haokan, although I haven't read The Sword, it is one of the best novels on Tomato, and the author's writing style is still good.

It's more beautiful than Jian Lai, with both literary talents and pitfalls. The main thing is that it fills in the skills. The active characters are much more comfortable than Jian Lai. The writing style of the emotional part is a bit like modern romance, with many love stories and a long story. Unlike the original text, there are always a few or two key points, and the rest is like sending a sword for a million miles...

I really don't know how to rate it. This book is very good, and the writing style shows that the author is very good. The author must have put a lot of effort into writing this book. The emotional line in the front made me feel deeply. Although it is a bit inexplicable, this is the point of Jianlai, but must I make up for Jianlai's regrets? The character Jiang Yun was written into my heart and made me empathize with her. I read it at night and felt uncomfortable all night. Being able to suffer like this proves that the author has written well, but I still feel a little bit in my heart. As I kept moving this book in and out of the bookshelf, I finally chose to put it on the bookshelf and wait for good results. Having said so much, I just want to say a few words for Jiang Yun. Regarding the author's choice, although I feel uncomfortable, I choose to respect it. I hope this book will get better as it gets written.

Seeing it now, I feel that I breathed out in my chest when I read the book. The many rules of Jianlai and the great romance of Jianxian make people love and hate them. This book lacks some rules to teach people and has more heroic spirit unique to Jianxian. Every character is portrayed with flesh and blood, the daily life of the dim sum shop in Old Dragon City, the game of Lizhudongtian and not only for... Mr. Qi's sword-fighting for a bit of awe-inspiring aura in his heart, and the current layout of the Great Wall of Sword Qi, all make people yearn for it, but I still can't figure out Ning Yuan's emotional context. The emotional drama is well described, but Jiang Yun's emotional drama in the front is too pure love, and Xiuxiu in the back has a feeling of white moonlight and cinnabar moles, two? One? It's a pity in the end. Swallowing dates wholeheartedly, a few humble opinions

The overall plot is very good, it is still a fanfic, and the writing style is the best I have ever seen in a Jianlai fanfic. The story line is also closed, and the plot can be changed in a different direction. It is a very good article. The author will update soon! Come on!

The writing is very good. I can only say that it's a pity that Jiang Yun is unnecessary. Haven't we already made her into the heroine in the previous articles? The author must solve my confusion [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

This book is really good. Although the plot is a little lacking in writing, it has the flavor.

This is a novel that people can't help but read. The main reason is that the protagonist is well established, the emotions are relatively detailed, and the writing is good. Many of them are hidden. After reading a lot of lesbians, you can wash your eyes.

Very good, but it is a pity that Xiao Jiang has not been able to spend more time with the protagonist than Miss Ruan. This makes me feel a little heartbroken. Although it is a red line that Xiao Jiang took the initiative to cut off, due to emotions and reasons, she always got to know the protagonist earlier and gave her sincerity to the protagonist earlier. The protagonist also treats Xiao Jiang more sincerely (at the beginning, he just plotted against Miss Ruan). Unfortunately, the author has not written about Xiao Jiang and the protagonist together yet. There are only ambiguous moments that leave readers with sugar and expectations for the next time. Every time I see plots such as seeing Xiao Jiang again in Huangliang Blessed Land and eating ginger, I always think that the two of them are about to become a real person. There is love. When people finally get married, the author always writes them apart (not to say that Miss Ruan is not good, Miss Ruan is indeed difficult to reconcile in the original work, and the book is clearly marked as a double heroine, but it still makes people feel happy but a little regretful. It is not unacceptable, but it is because the sincere Xiao Jiang and the protagonist always get together less and stay apart more, creating sweet moments. There is very little time (compared to Miss Ruan), but I always feel uncomfortable in my heart. However, the author's writing style is really good. The action scenes are refreshing and have a bit of the original style, and the writing and drama also make people smile knowingly when they read it carefully. Although the author's description of the emotional connection between the protagonist, Xiao Jiang and Miss Ruan makes people sigh that Xiao Jiang cannot be with the protagonist. The two characters are together (not yet, but they may be together later), but it also makes people immersed in the sweet interaction between Miss Ruan and the protagonist. I just hope that the author will write more about Xiao Jiang in the future, and I really don't want to leave a trace in this book like Miss Ruan in the original work. Come on, the author, the writing is very good!

After reading this book on my trip home, I felt very relieved. There are real people in the book, and it can be seen that the author spent a lot of energy on portraying them. As for the emotional drama, since I am relatively traditional, I would like to comment that there is no need to write it in such detail, especially the details. As a carefree boy, I will feel ashamed after reading it. Finally, I wish the author the more he writes, the more people will read it!

Not much to say, you will understand it after reading it, it is a well-deserved good book.