At the Sword Qi Great Wall, I Split Hanging Mountain with a Sword from the Start

I have never seen Jian Lai. I don't know if the character design is written or not. But I like this story, and I don't regard it as a fan of Swordsman, just as it is. His handling style has the momentum of modern people and young people. So far, the character creation is quite good, and the plot is also very coherent. There is no deliberate mention of anything. People who don't know about the sword can also read it smoothly. I'm really looking forward to the author's future plot arrangements, and hope to keep reading for a long time (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡.

It would be great if the author has a plan for the protagonist's growth. No matter what the protagonist's temperament is at the beginning, he can still grow later. However, there is one thing. The protagonist's temperament (in the early stage, especially before arriving at Lizhu Cave) contrasts with the author's temperament, which makes it particularly extreme. The protagonist's early growth is understandable, but the author's replies to other people's dissatisfied comments are full of temper, with a "you don't like it, the problem is yours" look, and also a "I am the only one" arrogance, which is very affecting the senses of readers who often read comments. I don't know if the author will refute this point of view again. I will only give an objective explanation with subjective suggestions. This can be a suggestion or something else. How to look at it depends on the author's subjectivity.

On this day, there was a foreign sword cultivator in the Upside Down Mountain. No one knew his name. They only knew that his two natal flying swords were stunning and stunning. One was a red furnace and the other was stained with blood. After the foreign sword cultivator got drunk at the top of the city, he went to the wilderness alone, slashed the throne with his sword, and left in a dashing way. Only the two words "came here" were left on the city wall.

It's great. At the moment when Chen Zhenghua is unfinished, there is such an excellent fan work that meets everyone's expectations. Come on, Xiao Jiang. As an outsider, Ning Yuan carries evil in his heart, but his sword comes from good. Although he is very dishonest about his feelings, he has the charm and grandeur of a swordsman. Xiao Jiang, please don't give up on this book. Now that you've finished cutting Wilderness, you can write something original. Lotus World is free to play, the lineage of Wen Sheng wants to make up for Ning Yuan, the whereabouts of the three souls and seven souls, and the development of the emotional line. And Jiang She is still trapped in Yinghuo and has not come out. We also need to discuss how to properly deal with Chen Pingan, a man who walks in the world. There is much more that can be written. Come on, Xiao Jiang, Mingyue Songfeng comes with sword in hand [Sending Hearts]

If you can't develop a clear mind in sword practice, what kind of sword cultivator are you?

The book feels well written. One sentence in the book is that it will get better and better if you read it carefully. But I feel that the heroine is not good. Anyway, that is the case at the moment. At the beginning, I remembered that the author said that Chen Ping'an and Ruan Xiu were a pity. Why not now? Anyway, my summary, Jiang Yun has become the second female lead, and even this identity will be lost. There is no intention to prevent the male protagonist from opening a harem. I also feel that it would be a pity if the male protagonist does not accept Ruan Xiu, but I feel even more regretful and uncomfortable now. You said that Ruan Xiu traveled a million miles to meet the male protagonist. Did Jiang Yun not come to the Great Wall of Sword Qi? It happened to be the right time to read it at night when I was going to bed. I felt uncomfortable all night. The book is a good book, but now I am very angry and uncomfortable. I want to rate this book for my own selfish reasons. I am sorry to the author.

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The beginning is so messed up that I don't know why the protagonist is pretending like this. I really think he is invincible. I haven't watched the rest of it.

This book is really good, especially the story about Lu Bu fighting for Diao Chan and Sun Wukong. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was really too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like being there, and the character descriptions are spot on! [Adoration]