The Outcast: The Path to Unifying the Arts of Magic

I've always been curious about why the aliens are so powerful, why they can't defeat ordinary people's armies. For example, if they are fast, they rush into the army and kill a few thousand, then run away, recover and then come back to kill. Isn't that okay? Don't talk about siege, just Fengping's fire element, he can directly escape for hundreds of kilometers, burn your granary every day and run away, how can the ancient army fight, and the speed behind him to support Wugensheng

To be honest, the more I read, the more I feel that my ideas are unclear. Many things are obviously easy to solve, but they have to go in a big circle. Moreover, it is clearly stated that he has a firm heart to practice Buddhism, but the setting of softening his heart when he sees a woman crying makes people speechless. Isn't this just like a scumbag that I treat you well and want you to fall in love with me, but my employer won't like you? It is also said that the protagonist hates people like Zhang Chulan, but the characters of the protagonist and Zhang Chulan are quite similar, which is funny. In summary, isn't it the second Zhang Chulan who has a God's perspective and uses everyone around him in order to practice Taoism? Selfish, arrogant, shameless, but because he has a God's perspective, he just pretends to be better than Zhang Chulan.

I think it's quite interesting. I saw someone in the comment section saying that the protagonist's ability fluctuates up and down, but I think it also depends on what the counterpart is like. Moreover, this is a novel, but the outline is around Under One Person, which does not mean that it will be written according to the plot of Under One Person. I have almost read the latest chapter of the update. I feel very happy about Chen Duo and Ma Xianhong, and then there is Tian Jinzhong in the front, who saves the people who should be saved and then punishes those who are mean. I feel very happy

There are too many typos, and Taoists pay attention to self-cultivation. It is understandable that the protagonist is arrogant. After all, he is a genius, but the description in some places is a bit too arrogant. The characters are a bit OOC. After all, Feng Zhenghao is considered a tycoon, capable of bending and stretching. Is the writing a bit OOC? There is still room for improvement, come on!

Regardless of whether it's an inner demon or not, I can't help but give it two stars.

Generally speaking, I don't feel much about it. It doesn't have the meaning of serious cultivation. It is too far away from the original work, because a person is essentially a process of life cultivation, not martial arts training. There are too many bells and whistles.

I feel like the protagonist's strength fluctuates up and down.

One chapter ends with a phone call with Master Tian, ​​and the next chapter begins with a conversation with Feng Zhenghao

The content is not very rigorous First: Although the Taoist monks have good ideas about making ends meet, they have really made it through looking for trouble when they have nothing to do, and they also arranged some ambiguous plots for the protagonist with several marginal characters, which really makes Monk Erzhang confused. Second: Completely establish the image of the company's top executives as villains who are greedy for power, and the logic problem in Biyou Village is even bigger. Author, guess why the aliens have not been disclosed to the public for a long time. Not only is the company involved, but also the aliens know that the harm of disclosure is far greater than the benefits (refer to the X-Men series). Third: It's a bit different. If you say it's a cool novel, it will make people feel uncomfortable in the later stage. If you say it's not a cool novel, it still has some elements of a cool novel in the early stage, and some irrelevant conflicts are added to some important plots, and they have nothing to do with the main plot, which makes people feel uncomfortable. Finally, I would like to say Happy New Year, come on, author

I can only say that I can barely make do. I have inner demons as soon as I practice martial arts. Does it mean that I have to suffer from heavenly calamity as soon as I practice physical training?