The Smiling Mask

To summarize (with spoilers) I have now read Chapter 179. The book is still being serialized. Please don't comment if you guess wrong. No heroine, no CP. The author updates quickly and basically updates daily. The protagonist is a neutral camp and has not joined any organization. The background of the protagonist is unknown, but it is known that he is miserable. The psychology is a little twisted. The first few dungeons are fast and basically end in a few chapters. There are still a few pitfalls to be filled. The person who controls the protagonist's dungeon blindly guesses that it is related to the clown element. There is a plot in the dungeon where the protagonist penetrates the body of a girl and changes into someone else's appearance, and it is quite long. The author's writing is good, but the plot is incoherent. The main plot has not been explained clearly in more than 170 chapters. At present, it feels that the main plot is related to the person who controls the copy. It is recommended to set up several important supporting characters. The only important supporting characters seen now seem to be Little Red Riding Hood and Wong Tai Sin. For characters that have nothing to do with the plot, it is recommended to use physical characteristics as names. For example: the man with glasses and the woman with long hair. It can be read as a daily novel. It will probably take a long time to finish. It is currently non-toxic and recommended.

When this book becomes popular, I will be the elder statesman.

Personally, I think it's pretty good-looking. I haven't seen the poisonous part yet, but maybe I'm still too new.

I love reading it, the writing is good, and I love the author!!! Love the author!! Love the author! (Say important things three times) 🥰

It looks good, but it has no beginning or end.

In my opinion, it's pretty good-looking, and there are no major flaws so far. Good luck to the author! [Top post][Top post][Top post][Please update]

This is a sandbox novel. The protagonist is a cheerful comedian, very funny. If we can keep it that way, we have a bright future

I want to be the first to review this book! 😘😳 Why doesn't the author update it? ⊙ω⊙But it doesn't matter. The author can read more other books, learn from experience, accumulate more knowledge, and do it again (under the conditions the author wants to write). However, I think the author may want to open a new book, and it is okay to open a new book. After all, I am a novice, so I can understand it. I tried writing it and found that it was not good. After all, I am not a talented player. If the author doesn't want to write, he can still be a bookworm. As for the storyline, 1 (under the conditions of writing, I will give my personal opinion) may be too confusing, and the idea is good, but the details are not grasped well; 2 gives people a monotonous feeling when written; 3. There is no need to suppress the protagonist's force too much. I think it's okay to give him a moderate amount; 4. You can design several more important characters; 5. The supporting characters' force does not need to be too suppressed. It seems to lack the feeling of burning passion_(:3″∠❀)_; 6 The more important point is that it does not resonate with readers (after all, people's thoughts are different and they are all independent individuals. It is really difficult to resonate with readers) But the author can write so much, which is already very impressive👍

It looks good, but it's not good enough.

Great author, come on! ٩(*´◒`*)۶