Listen to Your Rival's Voice and Be Your Rival's Man

Beautiful! The plot will become more and more exciting after coming to the magic city. I look forward to the update! Let's talk about the shortcomings first. It's a little slow at the beginning. The setting of "Listen to the Heart" does nothing to advance the plot other than flirting. It's weird that the whole story of that night can be explained in a hundred chapters. A misunderstood meme is like chewed gum after being used for a long time. It is tasteless. On the contrary, the subsequent plot progresses well. In order to defeat the original protagonist's power, the Queen of the Demon City starts a game with Zhang's family. It becomes more and more interesting, and the plot has a sense of grandeur that is gradually unfolding. And the various plot foreshadowing and reversals are much more interesting. The protagonist Gong is portrayed as very smart and charming [but it is a bit ineffective. It seems that apart from his identity, he is really an innocent young man with no experience and city government, and he looks more and more like a fucking love brain. Gong is in various arrangements, Shou is in love, it seems that everything depends on Gong to smooth things out for Shou, and eliminate hidden dangers. In the original book, Shou was as nameless as cannon fodder and was tricked to death by Xie. In this life, he was stepped on by Xie (entering the Huo family in a grand manner), but he was not wary of Xie from the beginning to the end. It's not that you can just let him jump around if you don't like him. If you want to crush a bug, crush him to death. What's more, this is a poisonous bug that can bite you to death if you don't pay attention. No one can be beaten by this soy sauce. At least I hope that Shou has something to do outside of Attack's field of vision (something that promotes the main plot, or promotes his own growth, not just relying on Attack and Rescue). Rather than punching in and clocking in to work at the company, just fall in love with Gong, just like the vase heroine in the male video. But overall it's a good review! Worth seeing! My opinion is that I hope the author writes better and better!

Five stars! Five stars! It was the first time I saw a book on Tomato that appealed to my taste. The characters of the two protagonists also really poked me. In my opinion, Xiao Pei is the one who doesn't argue with the other, but will use actions to prove whether he can do it🤤🤤🤤🤤, Xiao Pei Huo, a child who looks ordinary on the outside but is a kid who talks about everything on the inside. There is a big contrast between the outside and the inside. The contrast is so cute🤤🤤🤤 I like it❤️❤️. Every time I see Xiao Huo complaining about Xiao Pei a lot, I want to laugh. Xiao Pei novels, but he can't let the other person know that he can read minds. Hahahaha Zundu is so funny. I'm really looking forward to the moment when Xiao Pei finds out that Xiao Huocai has sex with him at the hot spring hotel. I guess chapter 40 will be soon after. Looking forward to it! ! Come on! It's so beautiful! ! ❤️❤️❤️

It's so good-looking. I haven't seen such a smart protagonist in a long time. [Laughing awkwardly]

I really love this book. It's so novel. After reading the introduction, the setting is so delicious🥰. I found out it's a serial and I was about to explode (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ). I've never seen such a book that appeals to my appetite (what an interesting misunderstanding hehehe). It's so well written, I love it so much (*'ε`*)

The setting is very good, two equally handsome men, I am very worried about whether they can do it faster, I am anxious to death, I am still misunderstanding, I have listened to it all morning, hey, this article is too new, let them go in both directions! ! ! !

I really like this kind of thing, it really pokes my XP, vocal, I immediately praised the 360-degree flying spiral. I really love rats regardless of the emotional line or the plot line. Oh my god, the author, don't be too good at writing. Update it quickly. I'm so greedy [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Why isn't such a beautiful book popular? Come on, come on, come on! Burst! Burst! It's so beautiful. The detailed logic, the intriguing plot, and the two delicate emotional lines are all unforgettable and in-depth points for me. It made me toss and turn in bed waiting for updates. Generally, there are not many novels that I am willing to follow up on. Madam, hurry up and update, I am so greedy, this one really poked me! Like like 😍

The writing is so good. The misunderstandings at the beginning were a bit annoying, but the whole plot is clear and does not affect the understanding. The young couple has been really sweet since they got together, with straight shots + mind-reading cheats, Tianke Tsaojiao, kswl. Some comments are a bit extreme about the supporting characters, but the author did not focus on the supporting characters. It is natural for the supporting characters to have their own emotional development. There is not much space to follow up and it will be considered a branch OE, right? Except for the protagonist of the original work, all other characters have a more or less gray camp feel. There is no whitewashing of the villains. It is very comfortable to watch. The young couple keeps giving out wedding candies, which makes me feel warm after eating them [sends my heart]

It looks good, good, it would be even better if you could add more [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss], not enough [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

1. I think the most attractive and eye-catching part of the book is the creation of characters. Each character has his own thinking, and the thinking is deep, and the character of the thinking character is real and delicate. I really like to see everyone's inner speculation process. 2. The progress of the plot in the first part of the novel is not sluggish, but in the later part, the plot feels a bit slower, but the description is more detailed. 3. The protagonist Gong in the previous article is an unruly and ambitious young man, but after arriving in the magic city, he seemed to be cheating, his IQ soared, and the transition was not so natural, as if he suddenly matured and grew up and became scheming. Instead, Shou's light was eclipsed by Gong in the later period, and he was suddenly compared to his boyfriend. I felt that there was a weird feeling in his heart and in my heart. Did Shou get weakened? 4. There are still some things I don't understand, such as what Chief Zhang wants to do when he recognizes Su Su. Will it not have an impact on him if Su Su goes to jail? What will be the outcome of Ms. Cui? Will she be troubled by the loss of her husband? What happened to Dwarf Potato's pair of specious CPs? Did the author just write about it on a whim? What will Xu Jiang do to CP? Summary: This book is still good. The protagonist's IQ is online, the characterization is realistic, the plot is not procrastinating, and the emotional lines develop at the same time. However, it is not perfect. The author still has room for improvement. Come on. [Praise]

Although the emotional drama in the first half is relatively cliché and immature, the business war in the second half is pretty well written. Although some characters are a bit difficult to understand, the flaws are not outweighed by the flaws. I didn't feel like giving up halfway through the book, so it's considered a good book.

The score is low, it is definitely a good book, the writing is very good, the more you write, the smoother it becomes, the plot is not brainless, the relationship progress is not inexplicable, the storyline is not boring, it is definitely above average in this monotonous routine article, it makes people's eyes shine. Come on, author, I am looking forward to your other articles. As expected, you will be my treasured author! ! ! In the past, great writers were everywhere, but now good writers are hard to find, and good authors are even harder to find! ! ! Come on! ! !

I can't see enough. When will you know you've admitted the wrong person? It's uncomfortable to watch. Hurry up and have a sweet love. [Shy][Shy][Shy][Shy] The author, please come on [Blow a kiss] Yes, the author looks familiar to me. It turns out that I have also read two other books by the author.

It's very interesting. It's my first time watching a mind-reading movie. There are very few misunderstandings between the protagonists. Huo Qiao's arrogant little temper really poked me. In a word, good!

It's very good-looking, the character design attracts me, and the character is really likeable. Brother Pei is very sexual, and the interaction between the two is really awkward. When will I know that it is Mr. Huo that night? I am so anxious, and Bai hope is so annoying. I clicked on the homepage and found out that I had read the Hua Jian book. Sure enough, this type of book is the one written by the author that most impressed me. Come on! Breaking news!

It is still very good-looking. The score of more than 8 points is probably due to various things in the early stage. It is a novel that starts low and moves high. It starts to move high after about 60 chapters. The brain is online. It is worth reading. Don't give up on a good article because of the early stage. Although I was cursing at the beginning, it is really good now.

When I first read the novel, the plot was really ridiculous, but it was really good-looking. I stayed up late at night and finally felt better after watching it. And now that the relationship between the two has finally become clear, I humbly beg the author if the relationship line of the protagonist Baobao can be as sweet as it is now, and don't abuse it! I'm afraid😱I accept all other plots, but the main CP love line really just wants to be sweet. (I just want to express my fear of mistreating the author. I don't mean to criticize the author's writing style.) In the end, no matter what the author Baobao writes, I support it. It looks good and I like it.

The plot is very interesting, the characters are rich and full-dimensional, and it is very addictive to read. Anyway, I have been furious for more than 50 chapters in more than two hours. The confrontation between Xiao Pei and Qiao Qiao is super exciting, and the atmosphere together is also very good.

This article can be read with your mind in mind. It is particularly touching. Why do you like to attack? . .

It's a very good book, the characters are very three-dimensional, everyone has their own personality, the plot is not procrastinating, the rhythm is tight, and the character design is good. The only thing I am not satisfied with is Shou's mother, who hurt so many people who were good to her and didn't get any punishment in the end.

Good to see, love to read, if you don't find me in the comment area, please don't panic or get lost, because in the blue days, I am studying in high school

I've finished watching it. It's very interesting. The plot is ups and downs, but it's not sad at all. Slap-in-the-face literature and the law of truth will never go out of style, Erha Ba's General Attack and Cold Beauty Suffering are very good! ! ! This article also has the ability to read minds (Gong). Gong travels through time. From the beginning, he recognized his own clash. Later, he solved the misunderstanding and joined hands with Shou to confront the protagonist of the original book, Gong Shou, and changed the fate of himself (cannon fodder) and Shou (villain). Sisters, hurry up and get into the trap૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა

I really like Huo Yao's arrogant little temperament. The setting that Pei can hear the other person's voice is very cool. (But it would be scary if someone could hear my voice in real life, hahahaha.) It's still very cool to read the article.

For me, this book is an unexpected surprise and an unexpected encounter. It made me truly feel the extreme pull and emotional collision between boys, a real two-powerful relationship, full of tension.

No, but I really want to read the story of Xu and Shen. I feel that their story is a love story that is boring after a little bit of abuse. Woohoo, can you let me see it [I'm about to cry]

Super super pretty! Just love this kind of pull! The author is so talented, hahaha, it made me laugh to death! [Send heart][Send heart]

Big praise! And it's so cute! !

It looks good, it looks good, wow, wow, so interesting [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Super pretty ♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥, cough, that's right. You don't need to write so finely when coughing in some places [face covering] [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

The large writing is so beautiful! I loved Bo Lin before! I'd rather write more modern writing. I really like the sweet pull and talk about any minor misunderstandings right away! How great!

Although the previous episode was emotionally stupid, it was overall very exciting.