One Piece: The Silver Falcon Admiral Is in a Bad Mood Again Today

Yoxi, you are worthy of being the person who dares to write about the DC-Marvel hybrid universe. There is no one else with such writing skills.

The angle is very good, the protagonist's scoundrel spirit is very good, emmmmm, slow to warm up, wandering around to attract people in the early stage, the talent is quite good, but I don't pursue improvement. The plot looks quite relaxed, and it is a pity that the battle with the Golden Lion is not described in detail.

This is one of the better books among Pirates. The combat power is not broken, and the character description is also very good. The overall idea is well grasped, and it doesn't look like a random harem. At least there are not more than 200 pictures. It is worth reading. That troublesome author should find a reason to deal with Momosuke (purely malicious)

This work is very good. The author has a thorough understanding of each character. It feels very immersive. Come on, this book has the potential to become a hit. The author has his own choices in his books. I think you should respect it even if you don't understand it.

As one of the few pirate fanfics I've read that I've read to the end, overall it's quite enjoyable.

(Young readers have their own opinions. If you have any objections, please don't criticize me, because everyone has different preferences.) Invincible and Navy, according to my taste, it is indeed acceptable, and the author's settings for the second creation of One Piece are indeed acceptable. Among the pirate novels that I have memory of, I have read good ones, and it can be ranked in the top three (good-looking pirate novels with memory). When reading a second creation, you must avoid the character settings of the original work, otherwise it is better to read the original work directly (in the book review area, I saw that some settings of the original work were incorporated into the book. The second creation is exactly the same as the original work, so there is no need to call it a second creation). The author's character settings are great, as are the settings of the world's government and navy, and the settings of the Five Old Stars are also okay (the author also explains the characters and the like in the article). The plots are coherent (the foreshadowing and the like are relatively shallow, but I watched the invincible novel to use my brain, so I went to watch the suspense), and there are no obvious pitfalls, and the plot can be said to be very good. Summary, recommended reading, don't criticize me if you have any objections😢I'm just a novel reader😢Thank you everyone🥺

It's quite good. This is the only One Piece fanfic I've finished reading. The others gave up after reading part of it, but this one is okay.

My evaluation of this book is that the overall connotation is similar to Ron's, but the literary talent is slightly inferior. The beginning to the middle are a bit bland. There is a knife in the later period but it is not big. It is similar to Invincible. I can't guess what happened in the past that the old thief Oda did not draw. It is more reasonable, and the author can do it. At least for me, a cloud pirate, it is quite comfortable to watch. Not all the pirates are killed with one stick, and the final battle is not just about the protagonist and being recruited into the navy to cause trouble. The pirate version of the world is united and the people are united.

The setting is very good, I hope there is no censorship, and the character's personality is also very stable. I feel that many villains are made much more amiable, emmm, and even very righteous, maybe it has something to do with the portrayal of Michael.

Author, we like you. The protagonist will do it if she doesn't accept the mother's will. The three views are OK, the characters are OK, and the plot is OK. There are many female characters but they don't feel obscene and I like it very much. I didn't expect Sha Ge's sexual transformation. The result is very interesting and reasonable. It is really rare to write a pseudo-harem so well. It's really good that the writing about so many girls is not vulgar at all. Lingling and Akainu have become more humane when written about them. To be honest, I originally hated Akainu:) Although Kaido is not a good person, he has not yet formed, and the relationship between Kaido and Big Mom is quite good. He still has selfish motives, but overall it is still okay, and it is very qualified as a free fanfic. I haven't finished watching Wano Country yet and I don't know who Oden is (I know about Yamato and that helper, but I skipped it if I'm not interested in it. I really can't watch it and I only know what's going on). Can anyone tell me about the rest of the story? Oden doesn't have much of a role. If you don't mind, you can watch it. It won't affect you if you skip it.