Pirates: Angel Navy, Revolution from the Start

Yoxi, you are worthy of being the person who dares to write about the DC-Marvel hybrid universe. There is no one else with such writing skills.

The angle is very good, the protagonist's scoundrel spirit is very good, emmmmm, slow to warm up, wandering around to attract people in the early stage, the talent is quite good, but I don't pursue improvement. The plot looks quite relaxed, and it is a pity that the battle with the Golden Lion is not described in detail.

This is one of the better books among Pirates. The combat power is not broken, and the character description is also very good. The overall idea is well grasped, and it doesn't look like a random harem. At least there are not more than 200 pictures. It is worth reading. That troublesome author should find a reason to deal with Momosuke (purely malicious)

This work is very good. The author has a thorough understanding of each character. It feels very immersive. Come on, this book has the potential to become a hit. The author has his own choices in his books. I think you should respect it even if you don't understand it.

As one of the few pirate fanfics I've read that I've read to the end, overall it's quite enjoyable.

(Young readers have their own opinions. If you have any objections, please don't criticize me, because everyone has different preferences.) The Invincible novel and Navy-oriented novel are indeed acceptable according to my taste, and the author's settings for the second creation of One Piece are indeed OK. Among the pirate novels that I have memory of, I have read some pretty good ones, and it can be ranked in the top three (good-looking pirate novels with memory). When reading a second creation, you must avoid the character settings of the original work, otherwise it is better to read the original work directly (in the book review area, I saw that some settings of the original work were incorporated into the book. The second creation is exactly the same as the original work, so there is no need to call it a second creation). The author's character settings are great, as are the settings of the world's government and navy, and the settings of the Five Old Stars are also okay (the author also explains the characters and the like in the article). The plots are coherent (the foreshadowing and the like are relatively shallow, but I think the invincible novel is using my brain, so I will watch the suspense), and there are no obvious pitfalls, and the plot can be said to be very good. Summary, recommended reading, if you have any objections, please don't criticize me [crying] I'm just a novel reader [crying] Thank you everyone [almost crying]

It's quite good. This is the only One Piece fanfic I've finished reading. The others gave up after reading part of it, but this one is okay.

Author, we like you. The protagonist will do it if she doesn't accept the mother's will. The three views are OK, the characters are OK, and the plot is OK. There are many female characters but they don't feel obscene and I like it very much. I didn't expect Sha Ge's sexual transformation. The result is very interesting and reasonable. It is really rare to write a pseudo-harem so well. It's really good that the writing about so many girls is not vulgar at all. Lingling and Akainu have become more humane when written about them. To be honest, I originally hated Akainu:) Although Kaido is not a good person, he has not yet formed, and the relationship between Kaido and Big Mom is quite good. He still has selfish motives, but overall it is still okay, and it is very qualified as a free fanfic. I haven't finished watching Wano Country yet and I don't know who Oden is (I know about Yamato and that helper, but I skipped it if I'm not interested in it. I really can't watch it and I only know what's going on). Can anyone tell me about the rest of the story? Oden doesn't have much of a role. If you don't mind, you can watch it. It won't affect you if you skip it.

The setting is very good, I hope there is no censorship, and the character's personality is also very stable. I feel that many villains are made much more amiable, emmm, and even very righteous, maybe it has something to do with the portrayal of Michael.

The author's writing is wonderful and the story is also very exciting. Only after reading a book do you know whether it is good or not? Some of the failures in it were turned into wonderful works by the author. You must read it! You must read it!

It's really exciting! It was refreshing to me, and the whole story seemed logical. Then, what I like most is the characters created. When I read, I can feel the overall personality of the characters, which is vivid and realistic.

After reading it, I am a person who can be particularly immersed in the plot. This novel really gave me a sense of the picture, as if I saw everything happening around me, so I read it slowly.

Both of the author's books are very good. Whether it's the Marvel book or this one, they are the most enjoyable of the same type of fan fiction that I have ever read.

There are less emotional scenes, the character portrayal is actually quite satisfactory, but the plot is smooth and natural, and all the pitfalls are filled. If I were at the starting point, I could only give 60 points, but this is Tomato or 100 faints. There is not too much fighting and killing, which is pretty good even if it is ordinary.

It is a very creative online novel that tells the wonderful experience of the protagonist. This book has won wide acclaim from readers for its unique perspective and humorous narrative. The plot in the book is vivid and interesting, and the various challenges and adventures experienced by the protagonist make people laugh. The author skillfully integrates profound themes into light-hearted stories, making this book not only funny but also worth thinking about. Highly recommended to readers who like fresh reading experience.

It's very good. What I want is this kind of character that doesn't exist originally, rather than becoming a supporting character in other fanfics. That would change the image of this character in my heart and make me disgusted. This book is very good.

The content is well written, but I hope the author can improve some details. The author has also briefly touched on the few battles in the past, which could have been used as a highlight to make the combat power more concrete.

The writing is good, but the battle plot feels a bit boring. The character design cannot be said to be 100% restored. I can only say that it is about the same, but it has a unique flavor. The new protagonist is not out of the ordinary.

The writing is beautiful and smooth, the grand atmosphere is vividly displayed in the author's writing, the characters are vividly portrayed, and the plot is brilliant. As soon as you open the book, you will be surprised and shocked. It is unforgettable and must be five stars!

Very perfect narrative technique, first-class writing style, smooth writing, and good details. I especially like the rival scenes, haha. The scenes are indeed grand, the story line is also very good, and the characters are well created.

A very interesting book. The writing angle is quite novel and very funny. The rhythm is very strong. Just don't know how to remove CP? I haven't seen it for a long time, but I still like it.

It is true that the combat power is fair. The protagonist Michael is very strong and the other supporting characters are not overpowered. Although the author has his own personal opinions on some characters, there is nothing surprising. Any setting is allowed so that the novel will not be cliched.

I have been following it for a long time. I personally feel that it is very good. Whether it is the creation of characters or the plot, it is excellent in every aspect. I respect the original work and the original plot has not been changed because of the addition of new characters.

All the logic and plot of the entire novel can stand up to scrutiny. The plots are connected one after another, and the characters are very full. It feels as if this person really exists. Basically, everyone starts laying the groundwork when they appear on the stage, and waits until dozens or hundreds of chapters before they are slowly revealed, which is the so-called filling in holes.

This book was written rather thoughtfully. In fact, I have tried to write novels before, but there were always problems such as unreasonable plots and unrealistic plots. Because I have experienced it myself, I am still willing to take a few minutes to evaluate this book and give encouragement to the author for his hard work.

From my personal point of view, this book is top-notch in all aspects. The plot is tight, every foreshadowing is reflected, the writing is humorous, the characters are three-dimensional, and most importantly, the conception angle is rare.

This book is really a rare good book for Tomato. I would like to call it one of Tomato's top five. It has a rigorous conception, a compact plot that is not too distracting, and a truly outstanding logical thinking and pit-filling ability. The characters are described vividly and delicately.

This novel is really good to read, the plot ideas are very good, all the holes dug have been filled, and the character who was not very fond of the original novel has become less disgusted with him after reading his plot. I really recommend it.

The writing is very good. It is different from the plot-oriented pirate novels. It can be seen that the author really wants to write something of his own. There is a lot of foreshadowing. There are no omissions and some details can be studied. It is good. I look forward to the follow-up.

Oh yeah, I finally caught up with the author! I really like this book, so I keep telling myself that I must read it in one day! In addition to the good story, the author's writing style is also very good. The language, manner and psychological description are very good. I will continue to follow it.