Tomb Robber: Retire After Finishing This Job

It can be seen that the author really loves Zhang Qiling. I have read so many fan stories. This is the only one who blinks and stares at people pitifully after the official becomes Zhang Qiling. It is exactly what a child surrounded by love will look like. I am really happy to see different Zhang Qiling. If our official is around Baima, he will also have this kind of character🥲

The setting of the protagonist is very novel. The game system allows two accounts to be played. One account has a very high force value but a fragile body. The other account has improved physical fitness but a much lower force value. Think about how exciting the protagonist will be in the future if he develops in this way (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

Let me show you my real thoughts, hoping to attract more people to see it. This year is the New Year, this is the Year of the Snake. First of all, I wish you all a Happy New Year! Although I didn't know the author for a long time, this article left a deep impression on me. From beginning to end, I saw Zhang Congxuan. He is a thorough, sincere, and very beautiful person. Like a little angel, he redeemed everyone. As the plot continues to advance, the character of the male protagonist is gradually enriched. From the beginning, the male protagonist only faced the characters with a playful mentality. However, as the plot continues to advance, the male protagonist gradually realizes that even if it is a game, everyone in this game world has his or her own character. Where true feelings lie. The male protagonist really treats everyone with his heart. This fanfic really left a deep impression on me. Why? Because of his setting, the male protagonist is a very full-fledged person, a very different and outstanding person. Moreover, he has loved the male protagonist and has upright views, which is in line with my values. (And the most important thing is the setting of beauty, strength and misery, which also stabbed my heart hard, and rubbed me repeatedly. I really like this setting of beauty, strength and misery, but misery is an illusion.) In many fan articles I have read in the past, the male protagonist is often a very miserable person. Either he has been deceived by the world, or he has lived a long time, lost his memory, and forgotten that he is actually a member of the world of tomb robbers. But this article is different. He gives the author a very warm background. The warm heart is due to the male protagonist being able to redeem everyone with his very kind side. And he did not suffer any substantial or fundamental harm. Of the many fanfics I have read before, I couldn't bear to read half of them when the author revealed that the male protagonist was actually part of the fabrication of the will of the world, because I couldn't admit that for such a beautiful male protagonist, everything he faced was an illusion. When I was halfway through watching it, I realized that the author had promised everyone that the game would be a game world. I was really shocked and very moved. I decided to pursue him from that moment on, because I really liked the male protagonist. His feelings were so fiery and warm, and he would neither burn others by getting too close nor burn himself out by warming others. Perhaps the most grateful person is the author, because the author works so hard to update. Regardless of wind and rain, holidays, whether he is sick or not, he insists on not asking for leave and working hard to update the article. Because the author has such a flexible and vivid writing style. Only then can we create such a vivid and lifelike person as the male protagonist. I believe that the author must be a very warm, kind and upright person in real life. Because there is a saying that goes well, the protagonist is the epitome of the author in real life. Or it's the image of the author's beautiful longing. It is precisely because the author has a very warm place in his heart and a very soft heart that he can create such a beautiful person as the male protagonist. In the new year, I hope the author can continue to update it. I will always support you silently in my heart. It's really hard to find an article you like that matches your hobby.

Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is good, the characterization is even better, the protagonist's character is also interesting, the multi-line narrative does not seem confusing, the plot is good, and people are attracted to it at once. I stayed up late to watch it. Another point is that the children written in it are very natural and cute, unlike some articles that describe children as stuttering, greasy and cute machines with clear logic, full of artificiality. Then there are the non-advantages (not considered disadvantages): Whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, there are too many psychological descriptions and demeanor descriptions. Many scenes are a large amount of psychological/demeanor descriptions mixed with a small amount of dialogue. The protagonist makes an action, A begins a long period of psychological activity, and then A responds, and the protagonist continues a long period of psychological activity... It is obviously not a slow pace, but the progress of the conversation turns makes me very anxious [face covering] Of course, psychological description is a necessary means to supplement brain flow, and the description of facial expressions coupled with the author's writing style will also make the article more delicate. However, if the amount is too large, it will cause repeated stacking of information. It can be streamlined appropriately. Overall, I can score 9.5 Points. I will take this book with me everywhere [I learned it]

It's so good to watch. I love the reunion the most, even though I've already confirmed that we're not the same person in terms of age, but my heart can't help but pull closer🥰. I can't wait for all the students to meet the teacher. The half-hour moment when the protagonists cut numbers, it turns out to be a reunion after decades of separation.

It's very interesting, the writing is good, I'm not a novice, and there are no big problems with the logic so far. After searching for gold in tomatoes for so long, I finally found a good book [crying]. The content is almost all original. Although the general direction is that of Tomb Raiders Notes, it does not follow the original work. The butterfly in Qixinglu Palace is missing, and the Xisha Undersea Tomb is completely different. Even the things related to the original work have been briefly mentioned, and pheromones have appeared here. The Wang family was discovered early because of Cong Xuan, and the Zhang family is still there. They have not fallen apart, but have gone into hiding (once the identity of Teacher Cong Xuan is confirmed, they will probably be dispatched [sneaky laugh]). It really wrote a lot of details about the Zhang family (which makes me, who likes the Zhang family, really love it [admiration]). After reading this book, I felt like I was reading a novel on the level of Tomb Raiders. The characters are well portrayed and the emotional descriptions are very delicate. The changes in emotions are not sudden, but have reasons, and the actions of the characters also have internal logic. This book generally revolves around the students coming back to Congxuan one by one (large size), and occasionally interspersed with stories of getting to know the students one by one (small size). It feels like the main line is emotions, and the anecdotal detective agency is just a cover. I feel that the story in the small size is more attractive to me at present. I really like the story of recruiting students and teaching students one by one. The Zhang family children and younger brothers are very cute in their childhood [heartfelt]. Cong Xuan's trumpet has the highest strength value of 99, but his will value is low and his physique is also poor. Isn't this just the combination of sick and weak Bai Yueguang + beautiful and powerful, completely stepping on my xp and dancing disco on it. The large force value is about fifty, the will value is high, and the physique has also improved. The difference between the two phases and the brainstorming that the students will have later, it is really delicious [shy] (recently, I don't know where the Haike's ideas in the new chapter have gone, haha). In short, this kind of game + teaching students + dual-player + Bai Yueguang + beautiful and powerful misfortune, I have never seen it before. The focus is on teaching students. I really like this kind of life mentor setting [admiration], and it is so beautifully written and written so well! ! ! I love the author Ah Bai to death, please keep updating, this book will definitely become popular [blowing kiss]!

It's hard to get away with it. The protagonist, as a gamer who doesn't know the book Tomb Raiders, solved many things with very logical actions and avoided bad endings. The setting is very interesting. The writing is smooth but it seems like the author needs to write more!

The male protagonist opens a vest, with a large version and a small version. During the period when the large version opened the store innocently, the trumpet version was the teacher who raised Zhang Qiling. He is a member of the Zhang family and has a gentle personality but good martial arts. The male protagonist is as deeply rooted in people's hearts as an ink painting, with beautiful memories of Bai Yueguang.

I stayed up for a few nights to read it. The content is quite good. There are some nanny stories, but there is nothing particularly frustrating about the whole story. In my personal opinion, Chen Pi is a bit off-putting, which makes me a little uncomfortable. It's a pity that he is still there at the end. I feel like there is nothing particularly tolerable about him. , First of all, it was because he was unwilling to go back with the teacher. Secondly, even if the teacher failed to keep the appointment, he did not owe anything. Later, he insisted on going his own way and wanted to go out. There were many misunderstandings. It really felt like he had saved a white-eyed wolf. The rest was very OK, and every line was pretty good.

Huge! Good! Look! I haven't read Tomato for a long time and I unexpectedly came across this beautiful book. I'm so lucky. 🍀🍀🍀 In short, I like the male protagonist's character very much, and the plot setting is also very interesting! Comrade Zhang San's damn charm! October 28, 2024 Ahhhhh it's so sweet. November 7, 2024 Absolutely. November 18, 2024 It's as good-looking as ever, and it lit up a bright light on my way to review for Level 6. (Little six-year-old, please be angry!) December 5, 2024 There are three classes today, no hehe. Also, it's really beautiful. December 20, 2024 Several days have passed since the completion of the Level 6 exam. And now I'm starting to prepare for the final exam. [Stare] May 6, 2025 After saving for a long time, I suddenly remembered to watch it, and I saw that the critical moment was gone www August 31, 2025 Finished spreading flowers! I didn't expect to get to the ending in just one chapter. I love this book so much!

Hee hee hee, it looks good, the little brother was rescued from the nursing home, but Zhang Qishan didn't succeed in the end. The plot arrangement is reasonable, and I hope that the protagonist will find his true self after traveling through thousands of mountains and rivers. Be kind and righteous and never let down Gua. Everyone has a good time!

I think it's really good to read. The protagonist has a great personality and the plot is very consistent with the original world. There is no plot that collapses. I feel that reading this book is very helpful for me to learn the true meaning of what others say.

The subject matter is quite good, but the perspective of switching between the two accounts is a little confusing [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] I feel like the protagonist has traveled through time [what] [what] [what] He thought he was playing a game, but in fact it might be an illusion created by the bronze door [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] Just like Lao Itch (personal opinion personal opinion) [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

A long lost book review. After 209 days of updating, first of all, I would like to thank the author for his persistence in creating! Several books of the same type that I was following at the same time have been interrupted, but this book has always been updated every day. The writing style and logic are all online. As the plot progresses, it can be seen that the story outline is very clear and has a complete story development structure. At the same time, DaDa must have put a lot of effort into it! I am really lucky to have caught up with such a rare high-quality fanfic. At the same time, what I also like very much is that the author's writing style is relatively clear and elegant, without lengthy descriptions of appearance or embarrassing plots. Cong Xuan's characterization is also very distinct, and he is really charming. I have been close to that gentle and powerful soul in my fantasy countless times. At the same time, I also hope that everyone can live happily in that world and everything goes well (but the battle damage can be a little more hehehe... I love to eat (,,>᎑<,,)) I hope the author's current life goes well and he is happy every day. He should also pay attention to his health while writing! ! And I wish you the best to create better and more excellent articles in the future! ! I hope we can always be by your side ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა

First of all, let me say that I have never seen stolen pens. I am just here to make a living. The setting is very interesting. It allows the protagonist to integrate into the world in the form of a game. There are also dual lines of large and small characters running at the same time. The writing is very good and the plot line is okay. But one thing is that the story line conversion is not possible [face covering]. You need to see some keywords to realize that the large size is changed to the small size or the small size is changed to the large size. Otherwise, after the conversion starts, it will be marked as having reached the other side? It's just an opinion, I don't mean to say anything bad.

DaDa's writing style is very good, the characters are three-dimensional, and the overall plot is also step-by-step. It can be seen that DaDa has put great care into it. To be honest, I usually only write a few words in book reviews, but I feel that if there are only those few words, it will be a bit unfair for DaDa's efforts, so I am going to write it carefully this time. The main reason why the writing style is good is that the large-scale text has a very graphic feel, which makes people unable to help but indulge in the text. I always have a bad taste in reading articles. It is easy to feel boring after reading them and skip to them at will. However, I did not skip a chapter of the large-scale text! This is very strange to me, and it also shows that the writing is very good! Not to mention the three-dimensional character image. I think everyone can see it. The protagonist is vivid and vivid, and the other characters are not OOC at all. This is really good, and it is also very important and rare for me. I would like to mention something off topic, if Xuanzi has a specific image... I want to make an appointment with him ૮(˶ᵔᵕᵔ˶)ა, after all, I really like Xuanzi! The overall plot is very good. I can only say that it is seamlessly connected. The switching between large and small is very smooth and does not feel stiff at all. It feels like it greatly explains what I like very much: the protagonist serves the main line, and the supporting characters also serve the main line! To explain, there is no brainless main plot, and the protagonist does not have an aura that affects other characters too much. Everything is fought for by the protagonist, and there are no brainless supporting characters for the protagonist (of course, Du Wei is not counted!). Everything is natural, and there are no major changes in the plot. Is there anyone who really doesn't like the kind Mr. Xuan? Overall, it's very reasonable. I really like the teacher's characterization. It just keeps my XP stuck! Zhang Congxuan is a very responsible teacher and a model of teacher ethics. I can't imagine how happy it would be to be his student (*ෆ´˘`ෆ*)♡. It's my first time to write such a long book review, and I'm not used to it, but I think the teacher's writing is really good. I can't describe it with my current knowledge, but if I have to describe it... Then I'll just give a brief praise to Xuanzi! His personality is very good, just like the newly melted river water in early spring. At first glance, it seems to contain ice slag, which makes people feel intimidated. But when you get along with him, you will find that the water in the spring river is warm. The tenderness he inadvertently revealed was like the tender green willow branches in spring, blowing over people's hearts with a gentle breeze; in fact, he probably didn't know that every time he cared about his students, it was like an iceberg melting, and the long-term ice and snow on the mountain turned into He listened to the tinkling mountain spring, and unknowingly nourished his heart as it flowed down. He probably never thought that he was actually a beam of light, illuminating the path of others. I hope he has a good ending, and God will bless him! (Crazy hint, HE, HE, HE!!!) I can't imagine how lovable Xuanzi would be in real life. He must be God's most perfect work and Nuwa's favorite child! The author greatly created it and how long he admired it before he was willing to release it for us to see! Big praise! Xuanzi is the most perfect! Please update more often, I will be waiting for it! But... Why don't you create a QQ fan group... In the end, I will always love Dada and Xuan Zidi! Thank you very much for cooking! !

Such a gentle story, I felt a bit disappointed after reading it. Switching between small and large accounts, because the large one only talks a few words, I always feel that the small one will be very abusive, so when I switch to the small one, I have to exit and watch something else to take a break. But actually it's okay, the author handled it very well, and I can't recall anything that particularly abused the protagonist. Every character is very distinct and everyone is very good. The protagonist is like the sun, illuminating many people and saving many people, but the whole story is like a drizzling evening, foggy and wet, whether it is the twists and turns in the trumpet, or the students in the large class who have lost their teachers for many years. In fact, I like to read the kind of crematorium novels where the dead come back to life and meet again, but this one is different. Everyone in this one is so nice, but because of various Various reasons, step by step towards the determined destiny, alas, although the big and small characters are interspersed, so that the heavy feeling of powerlessness on the small one is buffered by the large one, but it still makes my heart feel blocked. In fact, this is already much better than everyone's situation in the original book, but the author has created the characters very well. I feel heartbroken when everyone is hurt T∧T,,, but it is indeed a very good book.

It's good-looking, with two parallel lines, and the protagonist is a kind of gentle Bai Yueguang [laughs] A lot of Xiao Zhang likes it even more, but sometimes the subject is unclear and I don't know who I'm writing about, it's a bit messy, and it's a little difficult to read, but the flaws are not hidden, it's a very good fanfic

[Learned] is really good. It's rare to see such good tomb robbing fan fiction! [Sending Hearts] This book has many advantages [loving], the characters are very rich, the protagonist is very calm and gentle (especially his students and the clerk), the little brother is not so bored after being influenced by the protagonist, there are also Zhang Haike, Zhang Hailou, Zhang Haixia, Chen Pi and others, each has its own characteristics, but they are very clingy, [laughing] Especially the big one and the small one, they have different personalities (their nature is the same), but after experiencing things, I feel like I have grown up all of a sudden! Who knows? When I was in the trumpet, I was still a little kid, but when I was in the big one, I grew up... (Old mother's mentality) [Blowing a kiss] The plot is also very rich. The small one is purely about raising cubs and following the plot. Although the large one is a little bit sharp (I almost cry), I really like to watch dog-bloody jokes ([awkward laugh] especially stand-in jokes, etc.). Who knows, the inner drama of those store clerks is so real, they can be called the emperors of brain-boosting! The big one keeps following the plot, going to the tomb, and constantly linking up with the trumpet's plot. It doesn't completely follow the original plot. This is what I like better. It's very novel [laughs], and there is no broken plot, and the plot is forced together! [Understood] Not only that, the two lines of the big and small are interspersed, but there is nothing that makes me feel abrupt. The author has a relatively deep foundation in handling this kind of plot, and it will not make people feel confused! The protagonist's skills are not invincible, they are all acquired one by one, and they are not brainless. The world view and the force system are not broken. Overall, it is sweet [heartfelt], sour and sweet. I really recommend it! ! ! I hope the author will update soon [top post] [please update] [please pay attention]... Hee hee hee ~ [laughing] I hope the author will keep up the good work and work hard to update, and keep updating [please update more] [please update more] [please update more], but you must ensure the quality, and you must not abandon it if it is unfinished! Now I wish the author great blessings, may the book become a big hit, and thoughts of writing may flow from him! [Sending Hearts]

There are two protagonists, Modern and Zhang, running in parallel. The overall rhythm is quite comfortable, and it won't be messy due to cutting back and forth. Currently, the plot is more daily. Although it does not involve the underground exploration part, the daily training of apprentices is quite good. I haven't found any poisonous points for the time being. However, the Modern plot has not been developed yet, so I am looking forward to waiting and watching~

It's good to watch, but the visual switching is a bit too frequent at the beginning. Many times, when the big one reaches the climax of the plot, it cuts to the trumpet. The trumpet side is really exciting, and then it cuts to the big one, which feels like it has stopped abruptly. And then there's a little bit of abuse [crying]

This book is different from previous fanfics. It is a story in which the protagonist meets the Zhang family and the Nine Gates at two points in time through the game system. It can be seen that the author spent a lot of thought on the conception. I think it makes up for many regrets of the original work. It makes my heart warm~~

One of my favorite fan fictions in Stealing Pens, which is closely linked to each other. Sometimes, the expression is not clear, and it takes a few more pages to see who is speaking and who is referring to. A very good one to prevent readers who read ten lines at a glance.

This is really my favorite article this year. I feel so lucky to have met Cong Xuan. I have never read The Pirates before, so I never read the spin-offs. I almost got into this article and couldn't get out. Cong Xuan is really a gentle, strong and worthy person [crying] [crying] [crying] and I feel that the author is really sincere and must have written these words with love. I really like it Although I have reviewed it, I still want to review it again It's really my luck to meet Congxuan. I have forgotten why I clicked on it, maybe it was for the beauty of the fake knife, right? It's a pity that the author finally used the real sword. I feel that this article is really special and completely different from other derivative articles. First of all, it is very novel, with both large and small sizes, and the interweaving rhythm of the timeline is well controlled, so that it will not be confusing to read; secondly, even those who have not read the original work can understand it. Finally, I feel that many other derivative works are clearly filled with the smell of OC writing from the introduction, forcing relief and hair cutting, with a sense of boredom and uncomfortable superiority, but this one does not have it. Cong Xuanping calmly made the choice to sacrifice himself for a better ending just to have a "clear conscience". He did not deliberately exaggerate the sacrifice, and was still worried about whether his sacrifice would cause a psychological burden on the students. He did not treat any student badly. He lost one life to reunite Xiao Guanfeng with his mother, lost two to protect Hailou from entering the bronze door, lost one to give Hai Xia tattoos, died once of heartbreak because of the nameless No. 16, And finally lost his last life because of Chen Pi. Sincerity for sincerity, nothing more than that. Because from Congxuan's perspective, he himself may not feel cruel at first because the game is indifferent to his own life and death; but when he saw No. 16 Die in the end, he lost his life, and his emotions collapsed, he realized how heart-wrenching that faint sense of self-destruction was. His sincerity and love for the so-called "game characters" can be called unreservedly sincere. He has a weak relationship and lost his parents. Before entering the game, he was cold and carefree, but he did not hesitate to give his sincerity and love to others, but he did not dare to hope for anything in return, just like he could not believe that the students really loved him and did not rely on his force value and some skills obtained through the system. Xuan is cold on the outside but hot on the inside, but he is cold on the inside. He is not shy about giving sincere care and love to others, but he seems to be able to withdraw at any time. He does not dare to completely entrust his body and mind, and does not believe that he can rely on others. When I watched the scene where he sacrificed his life to save Pema, the BGM that always came to my mind was "Lhasa Snow". I couldn't think of the reason at first. I just thought it was because the melody matched the same place. Later, I thought about the lyrics, "Can't you let go? The expectations are very shallow, and the legendary love is always beautiful and far away." Mysterious Lhasa is buried with mysterious legends. Is Congxuan one of them? And now I feel like crying when I listen to the melody, it has such great stamina. Just like the snow falling quietly, I just thought it was beautiful at first, then I felt sad in my heart, and then I realized that there was already a pool of cold snow in my heart. The sadness is very light but long-lasting, slowly seeping out the intensity. Then we will continue with three brushes, and maybe four, five, and six more brushes. I really can't get out www Cong Xuan is really a gentle, strong and worthy person to be loved, and I feel that the author's words are really sincere and must have been written with love. I feel that this article attracts me so much, perhaps because of this sincere love. I think I have read quite a few novels, but this is the first time that I feel like this one is as deeply moving as this one. Anyway, I recommend it, it's really beautiful!

Go, go, go! Now it looks like there should be no CP, super nice [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

The writing is really good, but it's too little. Please update quickly. The writing is really beautiful. I recommend you to read it again (?) It's really too little.'

It's been a long time since I've seen a piece of stolen writing with such a plot. The characters and personalities are well drawn, and occasionally there are some small laughs, which are humorous and interesting. And I really like this kind of protagonist with a gentle personality and a very high strength value. I like it very much. Among the many stolen articles I am reading, very few can write in their own unique style. This book is worth it!

It's so good to watch, the plot is smooth, and the content is rich, lively and interesting. I was attracted by the introduction when I started reading it. First of all: this article is not a combat type, it has a bit of a long-flowing feeling. The content of the next copy is not very much that I have seen so far. The characters are very full and distinct, especially our protagonist Zhang Congxuan. His old-fashioned image is very good and he guides students step by step. Really beautiful [admiration]

The plot is really novel, but Chen Pi is really annoying. The protagonist is too gentle and soft-hearted. It would be better if the story pace is faster. The Zhang family is really good like this. There are petty officials and the others. And their favorite teacher

The writing style is natural, the plot is not awkward, and the emotional descriptions are delicate and impactful. The reason is that it is too easy to use, but it is a bit forced when used too much later. Another problem is that there are too many parts that emphasize the beauty, strength, and misery of the protagonist. The last plot of the trumpet is obviously very strong, but it is a bit uncomfortable to live a miserable life. I read the first fictitious fanfic on Tomato. The threshold was set too high, which made it difficult to find fictitious fanfics of the same level on Tomato [face covering]