HP: the Daily Tug-Of-War with Snape

Well worth a look. It is a story about the mutual attraction between the heroine (Corina), who repeatedly jumps between the age of adults and students, and has no sense of boundaries due to various reasons, and the older man (Severus), who is always unintentionally flirted with and accepts bad conservatism. It is also a story about two little animals who have a certain tendency to self-destruct and redeem each other.

I like this book very much. Maybe it's not so straightforward, clear, and tender in emotion, but it pulls and entangles, like the bright white flashing on the tip of a blade, sharp and stinging, and this complexity is so attractive. I think this rating is a bit low. In my opinion, it can be rated 8.9. (Ps: I like Severus very much and have watched all the films with a score of 8 or above) Another thing I want to say is that the female protagonist in this book is more charming than the male protagonist. She is rude, absurd, deceptive, excessively vigilant and suspicious, but she is also so warm, fresh and vital.

After reading it, I am still a little bit unsatisfied. This book is one of the rare masterpieces of Tomato. Both the plot structure and the character creation are well written by the author. As a "ghost" crawling out of the abyss, the heroine has her own "evil", and through her own redemption, she also obtains her own "good". The heroine tears her soul apart between good and evil, and finally gets the future she wants to have. I really like the author's thinking and shaping of human nature in this book. There is no perfect thing in the world. Most people just sink in pain. But I think it would be better if the main text was be, although it would look very worrying. It's also a pity that Meera doesn't have any scenes later on. She probably really wanted to face danger with the heroine. The extras are also very well written. I felt uncomfortable reading them, but I felt a little bit happy and wanted to continue reading them (the Dark Lord and the Death Eaters can open new books). Let me ask again, when will the author publish a new book? [Sending my heart]

It's super cool, especially when the professor was the first to take a stab at me, especially when he was poking me secretly. I just stood there and twisted my lips. Ahhhhhh, it's too high.

To be honest, this score is a bit low. In my mind, it really has a 9 points. I can also accept the author's writing style. Among the many Harry Potter fanfics I have read, this is one of them that I can finish reading. After reading low-scoring articles for the first time, well, it changed my view of low-scoring articles. I discovered that not all low-scoring articles are bad. What does this book say? It took me three days to read it, which was quite fast. There are relatively few descriptions of the trio from the heroine's perspective. I can accept the heroine's kindness to Harry and Hermione. I think this is more in line with the heroine's character. But I still can't explain why the heroine is a character, because she is very contradictory, and I think she is a particularly contradictory person. She is not selfish enough or ruthless enough. In some ways she is empathetic. The Voldemort in this book is the strongest Voldemort I have ever seen in Harry Potter fan fiction. He is, bar none, the strongest one I have ever seen in Harry Potter fan fiction. I thought that like other fanfics, Voldemort here should be easily solved, but I didn't expect that the heroine would be so dangerous around him. It was really frightening. Sometimes I felt tired for the heroine. When I saw the unforgivable oath he and Voldemort made, I really broke down for the heroine, so much so that I thought the emotional scene between the male and female protagonists would be. There is also the emotional scene between the heroine and Snape. To be honest, I don't think they are like that kind of love. I feel more like confidants. I don't feel the spark of their love. I really don't feel it at all. I feel that they are more like teachers and friends. I don't think they are love. I think it is impossible for the heroine and Snape to have that kind of relationship. Anyway, there is no tension. It's hard for me to believe that the two of them like each other. I always feel that they are using each other. I really can't feel too much love. There are many undercover agents in Harbin beside Voldemort, but I don't have that feeling. I always feel that Snape is taking advantage of the heroine. There is a feeling that everyone can relate to the heroine, but Snape doesn't have much of a bond with the heroine. As for the other soul of the heroine, her scenes are a bit too little, and she is very involved with the heroine. She should have more scenes, and to be honest, I quite like watching his scenes. Let's put it this way, even Narcissus is easier to fight with than the heroine and Snape. (Personal opinion)

I've always thought the character of Severus Snape was complex and great, and any change in his fate or so-called redemption actually somewhat trivialized him. But the author wrote this book very well. She respected the professor's original life trajectory and wrote a good ending while being reasonable. The heroine Corina is even better written. She is a person with strong kindness, wisdom, courage, and greatness. In a way, he is the hero's comrade-in-arms. The love between them makes readers believe it more. The entire background is also relatively close to the original work, and it is not too childish. You can still clearly feel the confrontation and irreconcilable feeling between justice and evil. In the end, the author wrote really well.

The main text is finished. This is a very good article, but I don't know why the rating is so low. In fact, I have known about it for a long time but because it has not been finished, I have never read it. CG and SS are very close to each other. The relationship progress is also gradual. The two people redeem each other, never falling in love. CG also gradually integrates into the world and becomes a flesh-and-blood person with friends, relatives and lovers. Ggad is also together, too. It satisfies the love of my parents. SS is not OOC. In my mind, he is not silent when facing people he cares about. When he meets people with common topics, his silence is based on the pressure and guilt he carries. Yes, in fact, the appearance of CG has lightened his burden. When everyone was in panic, there was still someone who could accompany him and take some time off from the busy work (not counting). Anyway, the teacher wrote well. I like it so much. Wow. Two people who don't know how to love have found the place where my heart belongs. Their hearts are dark and selfish, but they know each other's darkness and sink into it. Curiosity is the beginning of love. It's like they have layers of shackles on them. They use curiosity to unlock each other's secrets, and in this they attract each other... I love you so much, no one can understand me.

It was clear that he was very firm and protective of himself before, but later he got involved, and got involved deeply. Even though he knew he had a secret, he was still very careless and was forced to explode. He didn't know whether it was the effect of the blessing elixir or a side effect.

This HP rebirth article really amazed me! ✨ The heroine is not the traditional "Madonna" or "heartthrob". She returns with the memories of her past life. Her eyes have the transparency to see through the world, while retaining the gentleness and sharpness that a girl should have. 📖 In that turbulent magical world, she is no longer a passive bystander, but has grasped her own destiny. Watching her repair her regrets and uncover the conspiracy step by step, her sense of determination that "I will never let tragedy happen again this time" is so poignant! The author describes the magical world in great detail, making Hogwarts feel as warm as home. Whether it is the interaction with the original characters or the unfolding of the original plot, they are all handled just right, with online logic and sincere emotions. If you are also looking for a HP fanfic that is both in-depth and warm, this one is definitely worth picking up! Powerful

It's very interesting. As long as you get through the confusing part at the beginning and see where you get the notice, it will be fine. The subsequent parts are very interesting. I hope the author will work hard to update it. The ending must be he [blowing kiss] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

It's a rare fan novel that is not OOC and has different plots and characters. And the heroine's character is no longer the cookie-cutter "Little Sun" (I don't mean to say that Little Sun is bad). Reading between the lines, you can feel the author's understanding and love for each character in Harry Potter. Although the plot in the later stages is relatively depressing (I had a vague understanding of the thoughts of many characters when reading it, but it cannot be denied that this is a rare novel in which character motivations do not conflict with logic).

It's good-looking. After reading the main text, I feel that the heroine is indeed like a weed, which cannot be burned and chopped down. Very resilient. The character of Dumbledore is well written, but I don't like it. I feel that Dumbledore is more calculating than the Dumbledore in my impression, and he has to calculate everything, but there are also things that he did not calculate, such as Winky as a house elf. But I think that if the writing is good, people will be more beautifying the characters in their hearts. But Dumbledore wasn't perfect. He is not a Wei Guangzheng character in the full sense. Loved it.

The heroine is very good, and I like Mera very much. The relationship between the two people is my favorite part, but it's a pity that I can't stand it. I have read one hundred and seventy chapters now, but I am still getting sleepier as I read... And many times I can't understand what is going on, and it feels a little bit like the Riddler. My writing skills are not good and I don't know how to describe this feeling, so I can only regretfully choose not to read it. I still give it a four-star recommendation. After all, the relationship between the heroine and Mera is really great, maybe it's just not suitable for me to watch.

By chance I came across a long novel that I read smoothly. The later part is better than the first part. It's not a cool novel. The heroine tried her best to survive. It was not easy for her and Snape to be undercover under Lao Fu. They relied on each other miserably. Fortunately, Fu died very neatly in the end.

The pull between Snape and the heroine gave me a very exciting feeling, and the heroine didn't lick Snape very much. They both felt equal. I still hope to torture the male protagonist more, and will G·G come out to meet A·D later? I look forward to it just thinking about it [laughs evilly]

I finished reading it in one go. Although the heroine always said that she seeks advantages and avoids disadvantages, in my opinion, she is really a brave and kind-hearted girl. She will feel guilty for taking over her sister's body, and will also affirm Hermione when she is sad... Because she has been imprisoned in the early stage, she has always relied on instinct. After studying in the academy, she met friends and gradually enriched herself. I really like the relationship between the heroine and her sister. It would be nice if there were more pages. I really recommend it, I don't know why there are so few reviews.

After reading it for a few days, I finally finished it. It gave me a very shocking feeling. I have read a lot of HP fanfiction. This one gave me a very different feeling. Corina is like a flower rooted in the mud, struggling upward. She just wants to live. No one has taught her how to live. I hope she can continue to live her life in the future that readers cannot see. I also hope that everyone can struggle to live the way they want.

I read it twice and the teacher wrote it so well! Corina's transformation is particularly real, from a selfish person who only cared about her sister at the beginning to a savior with a lover and friends. Although she keeps saying "I only care about myself", everything she does is helping others. She could say to Dumbledore, "You want to trap me with Harry," but in fact it was herself who trapped her. Although Corina is an adult, she is an unsocialized adult. Others learn magical knowledge at Hogwarts, but she regains the ability to love and trust at Hogwarts. She learned viciousness and selfishness from her adoptive father, as well as the Unforgivable Curse and alchemy knowledge, while her two children, Harry and Hermione, taught her acceptance and friendship. This is actually what Corina needs most. At this point, Corina is still a child, too. There were several times when Corina could have slipped into the abyss and become Dark Lord 3.0 Or completely turned into Voldemort's lackey, but it was precisely because of the people she met at Hogwarts that she was drawn by fate to stay on the light side. I like the teacher's description that crows' feathers shine brightly in the sun. The most painful thing about Corrina in my opinion comes from the fact that she can see the silhouettes of dead people. The ability to prophesy (or reappear in past lives) is both a blessing and a curse. It gives Corina the opportunity to save, but also forces her to face a choice: Is the changed future really more perfect? Can they be saved if they don't develop according to the previous life. Corina saw only fragments and silhouettes. She only saw the pearls but not the silver chains connecting them. This makes her seem to have to do the "trolley problem" and put the fate of others on both sides of the scale at the most painful time. The alchemist may be the best at equal exchange, but when the two parties to the exchange become her familiar friends and teachers, Corina cannot make a simple decision now. She had obviously predicted her fate, but she was forced to join in it and was wrapped up in her destiny. She could obviously leave everything behind, after the Sorcerer's Stone, after the Chamber of Secrets, after the Triwizard Tournament, but she chose to stay every time. From the first moment he was persuaded by Dumbledore to stay, in the end he chose to stay. This is the process by which Corina learns friendship and love. The egotist sacrifices himself for others, which is her tragedy. But fortunately, when Corina was trapped in the torrent of fate, there were still people on the shore who reached out to her. This is her chosen friend and lover. What she changes is not other people's past, but her own future. There are two if lines I want to watch ① Snape rescues Corina who was imprisoned in the first life. Corina, who is sensitive and good at disguise, will pretend to surrender and wait for revenge when she meets a man who knows everything about her. ② Corina, who entered Hogwarts normally when she was 11 years old, was ostracized by Slytherin because of her parents. How does she treat the people around her? Hey hey hey hey hey I like the teacher's works so much! I particularly like the heroine in your novel, who is like a poisonous weed, trying desperately to grow and survive, pretending to be harmless, and seeking revenge on everyone who hurts her. When they met, Corina and Snape were like two different people. One was a bit crazy and liked taking risks, while the other had become rational and calm. The sparks created by the collision of these two personalities were particularly interesting. The teacher wrote a great ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧I will always follow you! Will brush it again tomorrow!

In the first half, the writing style is childish and relatively plain, but the second half is very exciting. The kind of struggle, resistance, hesitation and firmness is very contradictory. In particular, everything Tom did when he returned to time, the impact he had on the heroine, and the mental journey of struggling in the darkness were particularly wonderfully written. Human nature is really strange. Even if it sprouts in the darkness, it is still the light of freedom. Can see the strong self and desire for freedom. There is also Snape who travels through time to save the heroine, but the heroine who has not experienced those struggles cannot let down her guard. She thinks she is being controlled and arranged again, but she longs for the warmth of love. She can never feel at ease, but she is unable to give up. I hope that in the second half of her life, her incomplete self can be gradually improved through love and tolerance, and finally save the two of them. This article shows the growth of people under different circumstances, reaching the same destination through different paths, and the background ultimately determines the ultimate future. This rating is too low, maybe the first half of it is really lacking in writing skills, but it's not a loss after reading it.

I stayed up all night to read it. The author wrote it very well, especially the love story between parents in the if line, which made me very sad. The feeling of powerlessness of two people from different camps under the rule of darkness made me feel depressed. The younger sister in the text is really miserable and I feel sorry for her! ! ! [Cry]

I think the author wrote it very well, both in the characterization of the male and female protagonists and in the handling of the plot, and the ending is very satisfying. There are still some extra chapters that I haven't finished yet. After I finish reading them all, I would like to review the reading experience of the full text carefully. However, compared to the two people's tug-of-war in a certain part of the extra chapter, I still want to see some sweetness ~ In short, the current rating obviously underestimates the gold content of this article.

No, why is this book rated so low? ! I almost missed it, oh my god! [Almost crying] I'll definitely get a 9 when it's finished! I have read a quarter of the updated part so far. As long as the rest of the book is of this level, this book will definitely be ranked high among Tomatos fandoms.

This is really a rare HP long article. It can be seen that the author's writing skills have improved in the second half of the article, but some parts are not understood. Moreover, the heroine's soul is so broken that she made a Horcrux. What impact did it have on herself? What happened when she threw the ring away in the end? Did she not die in the end or did she die because a Horcrux was resurrected? The faults do not hide the faults. I hope the author can have more emotional dramas and tug-of-war in the next BG. It is still very interesting.

Very surprised! It feels completely unreasonable that the rating of this Sri Lankan textbook is so low. Among the thousands of HP articles I have read, not to mention the top three, it will definitely reach the top ten. The writing style in the early stage is still a bit rough, but it can be seen that the progress has been very fast. The second half of the article is already excellent, but it is tied with the author. It is a bit uncomfortable. Hungry∽∽Fanfan∽∽.

It was a very delicious article. I clicked on it three or four times and stopped at the section where I just entered school. The foreshadowing was a bit long for me, so I didn't read it several times. This time I came across the recommendation again, and I suddenly had the idea to start reading it from the first grade entrance branch, and ended up watching the end in one go. My wife's writing feels like she is getting better and better. I have read hundreds of Sri Lankan articles, and this one could be ranked in the top 10 in my heart. Thank you for my patience in clicking on this article yesterday, so that I did not miss this good story in the end. Thank you to my wife for writing this wonderful story with great care.

It's very interesting. The low rating is just because few people have read it. I think the rating of this book is no less than 9.3

The five-star review is for the heroine. The heroine really has a kind of beauty that attracts me. Although she is not very strong, her character of never giving up is very refreshing aaa

I finished all the pursuits in one day. My wife's writing was really great. It was very interesting for the two of them to play each other [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] After reading it, let's talk about the ending! I read it bit by bit, my wife wrote very well! The image of the heroine is very three-dimensional, she is not attached to the teachings, she is tough and very smart. The undercover part is really depressing, but Corina's methods and ideas are really perfect. It is a true confrontation of wisdom, not a direct cheating. Anyway, the wife's writing is really good, the wife has made great progress, the foreshadowing is also very good, and the details are handled very well (Ahhhh, I am running out of words, I don't know what to say) [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart] I refreshed it once in a few days, and I have forgotten some details.

(To be clear in advance, I have read this book, but not on Tomato.) The setting is quite eye-catching. I almost forgot about it. But I remember that the heroine was tortured miserably by Voldemort later on. The heroine is basically always hurting, always hurting. Anyway, it's okay.

This is the first time that I feel that the extras are better than the main story. Although the heroine in the main text rescues Mera, re-raises herself and has an emotional scene with Snape, I prefer the heroine in the extras. She struggles to survive and herself. Tom comes back and thinks he can still control the world. Instead, he dies again because he is arrogant and does not understand the word love. At first, I thought he would use Voldemort. The devil's body was resurrected, but I didn't expect that in the end, it would be alive through Harry's body. Inside, I saw little Barty's guilt for the heroine's deception, as well as the entanglement with old Barty, and the feelings for his mother. They were all just for self-identity, and the heroine's intolerance for Harry, as well as killing Black and deceiving Voldemort again just to survive. I don't know how to put it, but I can see my own shadow in the heroine. Seek yourself and work hard to live.