The Beautiful Machine Falls in Love with Me Who Doesn't Understand Love

Baozi who has read this book, I hope you will be merciful and don't give low marks just because you don't understand it for a moment. It really discourages people. There is no big poisonous point in the chicken wings book. Many people don't like slow-burning, so the emotional scenes seem a bit abrupt, but this is already very slow. After all, no one likes things that are too slow. I will fill in the gaps later. I hope everyone will be merciful about this favorite question. Thank you [Blow kiss]

How to say it? This book by the author has the same strong start as his last book. For me, it seems a bit tasteless and a pity to abandon. The writing style is close to daily life, but the problem is that even if the novel does not belong to orthodox literature, it is still a literary work. To be honest, the author's writing method does not make people feel very immersive. Even though the author is from a third-person perspective, there are many private things mixed in. The influence of subjective wishes on the plot can be seen. The key is that it is written and integrated into the text. Moreover, this book has the same violent opening as the author's book I read before, with an inexplicable rhythm. In fact, I was originally very interested in the previous book, thinking that the protagonist was going to hang out in the army. I thought it was quite interesting. The result was that he was discharged from the army at the speed of light. Then the protagonist's household registration problem was solved in a sloppy way. Then the rhythm suddenly changed into the sweet daily life of a young couple buying a house, and then the awakening was arranged very suddenly. To be honest, the change in rhythm and span of this book made it uncomfortable for people watching. This book is the same at the beginning. The protagonist looks like a normal person, a clear-eyed and stupid college student. However, after he picks up the heroine, the rhythm changes instantly. To be honest, the conflict and confrontation between the two people is not very reasonable. And then after the reconciliation. The plot changed in an instant, and suddenly it became very ambiguous, and then a plot was arranged to cause emotional conflicts, and then an inexplicable plot was arranged to temporarily write off the heroine. The key is that the plot is quite abrupt, and people who watch it have no sense of involvement. From the two books written by the author, I can see that the author wants to write his own ideas and does not want to apply the very common protagonist template. However, the common protagonist template has existed for so many years because it is comfortable to watch. At least when there is no problem in the plot, there will be no problem. Good for you, the plot is not handled well. At the same time, this protagonist template also has a big problem, that is, the early development is too slow, and then it develops suddenly and violently. I feel that the author incorporates a lot of negative emotions into the writing. As a positive character, unless the protagonist is writing a dark article, otherwise the description of negative emotions is a bit superfluous.

The male protagonist was a bit abusive in the early stage. I thought it was a story that the male protagonist picked up and picked up rubbish in the garbage mountain with the robot beauty. The robot beauty is responsible for selecting high-quality garbage, modifying and repairing the garbage, turning waste into treasure, and improving the quality of life of the male protagonist. This is a story that I like to see. Unexpectedly, the male protagonist punched out the robot's ideological seal of absolute loyalty to its master, and then the robot abused the male protagonist in a fancy way...

Must have perfect score.

I don't know how the heroine will fall in love with the hero in this early stage of the plot [what]

It feels good. At least it looks fine to me. Come on [Like]

It took too long to change my mentality, but it looks pretty good [laughing evilly]

Huo! Good stuff, luckily I insisted on seeing the back, [please update]

Not bad. I like this novel.

Not bad. . . .

Good-looking[laugh][laugh][laugh]

The supporting characters in the later stage are quite vivid

It looks pretty good, but it's a bit sharp

Personally I think it looks good. Like this

It's a very good novel, but it was a bit difficult in the early stages. Alas, what a pity. What a shame.

It's good-looking. Love between man and machine. It's still relatively sweet at the moment. It would be better if you update more frequently.