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Say, have you ever seen that my wife is a big boss in the Mahayana period, and at the beginning of the Hehuan Sect, she was manipulated by her senior sister? Damn, the more I look at them, the more they look like each other. This is a combination of those two books. But I like it, hehehe ᶘ ᵒᴥᵒᶅ

People watching are full of passion, [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Arriving at Tianyan Sect feels less interesting than before [face covering]

Came here to watch the video. Read more than a hundred chapters. Really nice. Poisonous. I will continue to catch up after I come here. The plot has ups and downs. The plot is different from any other fairy tales. The male protagonist struggles to survive in a tight situation. Two-line plot. No system. The male protagonist's emotional intelligence is online. There is no deliberate plot. The characters are distinct and flesh-and-blood. It's not a backdrop like other works. A rare masterpiece! The level of conception of this work is considered to be among the best among all novels. Three times in a row. Focus on. Rewards for updates! This is my first novel. It was a real success. So wonderfully written. But writing novels in this fast food culture requires some experience and skills. You can learn from other authors. PS content requires free gifts. Need reminders and praise. There are almost no viewers who consciously give you some reminders. If you don't push them. There are also free gifts and reviews. All. For example, you need to communicate with readers to get some opinions. You have your own group or something, where you can help you with things like updating updates and so on. On the other hand, the vast majority of the audience likes to watch romance dramas, as well as the superficial dramas at the service point. Interspersed among them. The bursts of desire from time to time can attract many readers to continue reading the novel. It's hard for a really exciting and serious plot like yours to have such strong appeal now. There are still very few people who actually read and follow the plot. You can also pretend to be a spoiler, for example ps this is too much and the plot is a bit boring now. In the future, the male protagonist will not be so ascetic and passive after he awakens. Something. Paint cake. Encourage the audience not to give up and continue reading. Anyway, it's about capturing the audience's thoughts and desires. Not just writing works with good plots. Otherwise, it will be really difficult to achieve good results in a long novel. This is a good first novel. So pretty. Come on. It will get better with experience.

Generally ok. But I have a question. The protagonist's master asked the protagonist to be an undercover agent without any back-up. Why do I feel like this is a deliberate attempt to kill the protagonist? [Cover face]

I feel like it's Lao Bai's trumpet [laughs evilly]. It's about Yu Fengchen's past life. Ye Xuefeng and Nangong Xian'er both appeared.

The author has his own understanding of idioms [smile][smile][smile]

I didn't expect that this was a book written by a female author [shocked] and could write well.

It's okay, I just feel like the portrayal of the heroine is average.

Just open your mouth and drive as fast as you can

There are references to Lao Bai's book, which can be seen from the name and settings. Even if the name doesn't work, I can directly see the name of Lao Bai's protagonist, but if you have your own ideas, you can take a look. It's just a bit awkward in some places. I hope the author can work harder.

So far, my writing is better than that of Lao Bai. Lao Bai's writing is too boring and thunderstorms are everywhere. Come on.

Chapter 9 Time Travel, according to the thinking of ancient people, there should be no word time travel, but soul time travel, and he said time travel as soon as he opened his mouth, making it like a second time travel. This should be changed. The beginning should be to time travel, and then later, fill in his hole according to the technique he practiced. I hope the author will see it

Is this still a tomato? It took me so long to find a novel that didn't include time travel and cheats. The author's writing style is average and the writing is very human-machine, but I can see that the author has a lot of interesting ideas and the plot is not boring. All I can say is that it's a breath of fresh air in Tomato.

Don't send girls behind, don't be green

It's not bad, it's actually quite frustrating. You can read it in Shuhuang

I finally came across a book with an emotional scene and the male protagonist is not a stallion.

It's pretty good. Isn't the score of 6.6 Too low? [Petrochemical]

Not bad, very interesting

Well written, quite interesting

Not bad for now, little idiom genius

It seems interesting so far

There's a bit more nonsense later on, but it's still readable

It looks pretty good now, keep up the good work [laughing evilly]

It's okay, but the front is more attractive to me, and the back of 230 is more drama-oriented.

It's okay, better than most books

What Lao Bai wrote is similar, I like it Come on, author, don't make short updates, and don't stop updating. I really like it, but why is the rating so low?

The subject matter is novel, the logic is smooth, and the writing style is also good. 5 Stars for encouragement.

The fantasy novel has ups and downs of plot, rich imagination, and smooth writing. It is worth reading.

Very interesting novel, 5⭐ support the author

[Face covering] Why is it only 6.6 Points? The quality of this book should be at least 8-9 at the beginning. To see the effects.