The Game Is Coming: the Original Heroine Chooses to Overturn the Table on the Spot

It looks good and is pretty cool, especially the part about cooperating to earn gold coins. . But the part describing the harem and the rotten men abusing the heroine is particularly vivid. It was painful to watch, a bit emotionally abusive. Although it is quite enjoyable to watch when the protagonist goes crazy and takes revenge, but every time he goes crazy, it is easy to feel uncomfortable even thinking about the abuse described before.

Hee hee, nothing to comment on, it's so beautiful. If you go to a cruel place, people like me who don't like torture will be reminded to skip it. But I still watched it, it was so sad and I felt sorry for the heroine, but it was still very interesting. I have a lot to say about bad books, but I have nothing to say about good books, just one word, "Enter". It became more and more cruel. She thought that she was the target of the planet for the first heroine (the boss) to grow up happily (the second protagonist, the second child), and later found out that she might be Li Xing's luck. Blue Star wanted to absorb the luck of another world and let herself ascend. She is like a doll, unable to speak for herself (because her power is too small, her struggle does not cause any waves, as if she is not struggling), and all actions are in the hands of others. The reader follows and is brought into the first-person perspective. The heroine has received too much malice, and she is depressed, disgusted, and powerless, which makes people feel negative emotions. I don't want to see it.

The whole thing is in line with my taste. The heroine's strength is never false. The author initially wanted to write that her strength is worthy of her suffering, and the feeling of positive and negative balance is more objective. However, after the feedback from readers, it is now more subjective. The painful memories are much less, but I can feel that the heroine deserves it, both ⭐⭐. The writing is still good, 1⭐. And there is no word for "breast girl". The ratio between men and women is normal, ⭐. The current progress is in the early stages, and the impression is okay. Regarding the "National Destiny", the full text has only a few paragraphs. The heroine did not help the country without exposing herself, but directly and forcefully helped all the people to obtain game gold coins (no loss to herself) by performing show-off operations, and she will destroy them and cause global disaster in the future. The props for sexual disasters (which have an effect on oneself but have little effect), focus on helping the people rather than the country. Although I like pure lone wolf novels, I can still accept this kind of description. It makes me feel that the protagonist is really kind to the best of his ability rather than aloof and kind, ⭐. The lightning protection point is that the heroine has a younger brother, and he is a good younger brother. I haven't written much about it at the moment, but I'm not sure whether it will be a thunderstorm or not, so I will deduct 0.5⭐. Overall rating 4.5⭐. Abandoned, personal rating 3⭐, I didn't change the rating because I am a novice author The parents plot is related to the main plot, so there are a lot of descriptions, and the more it is written, the more clear it is: in the beginning, boys are favored over girls, but in the end, the preference for boys over girls is all because of the female protagonist (not). . . . Well I don't like the complexity of this character. . . The plot of the younger brother is very inexplicable, and he had to write it. The author even gave him a trick, but it has no effect on promoting the plot, the heroine, and the parents. It is probably because of the low word count. At the beginning, the heroine hated her parents but not her younger brother (this hatred is the kind of hatred that we don't owe each other), and then as the plot progressed, she started to feel guilty towards her parents - it was all me who caused them - The above are my highlights. The rest of the plot is okay. Anyway, it is okay for the heroine, and the abuse of the girl is not included. The writing problem is that the author does not want to write a light tone but cannot control the tone. The male and female supporting characters have different opinions. (Only the ones I saw)

It's not bad. The game has a very Western fantasy background. The author's writing style feels like the female protagonist novels I've read before [laughs]. However, punctuation marks are occasionally missed (commas are the most common), which makes the reading a bit weird. Although I can segment sentences myself [eat melon], it's best for the author to fix it when he has free time. We are still in the preparatory stage before the invasion of the game. The heroine is amassing money wantonly and the nine tribes are playing games quickly and accurately, which is quite satisfying. The description of the past life is too real and cruel, with ruined etiquette and social unrest. It makes people itchy with anger. I really want to put the capitalists on the street lights [go crazy]. But there is no need to be so detailed when describing the humiliation of the heroine in the stinky male harem. In short, I am still looking forward to the development of the plot after the official invasion of the game. I hope that the Stinky Man can be offline soon [angry][angry][angry]

Don't deliberately leave negative reviews without reading a few chapters, okay? . . . I've been following this book for a long time, starting around chapter 300. It's the only game I've read except for "Invasion of Wine" and "Ace of Spades". I really think it's very well written. I always talk about torturing women and torturing women. I really haven't felt it. I feel sorry for Yue. She originally had a very good family but she was always being cheated. Seeing that the revenge that should be avenged is basically done. The plot behind the foreshadowing is pure and refreshing. If you want to read a pure and refreshing novel, the heroine can't bear a little hardship. If you can't bear a little tiredness, don't read this book. The heroine is essentially a lone wolf gambler. I'm convinced. I'm very picky about books. I think the characters in this book are well written. I hope Yue will be happy every day and become stronger and stronger.

I finished reading it in one go. As an old bookworm, I feel that the writing and pace are okay. The biggest highlight is the protagonist's character and decisive means of killing. Even though the female protagonists in the early female pornographic novels were very strong, they were always trapped in the vicious circle of "reasoning". They would always make the truth clear before making a ruthless move. Compared with the male pornographic novels, if I want to kill, I will kill them, and if they have a bad influence on me, I will also kill them. In comparison, it is quite frustrating. Because I mainly listen to the villains saying a lot of mindless things, and I get tired of it after watching it too much! This article absorbs the essence of killing quickly. It kills really fast and doesn't even leave it overnight. It looks really comfortable! From a plot point of view, it is still relatively novel, and the writing does not hold it back. It is just that the narrative rhythm needs to be improved a little bit. I can basically keep up with it, but occasionally some parts will be a little confusing. But it does not affect the overall reading, it is already very good for new articles! In fact, when a type of article already has its own benchmark, it is difficult not to learn from it after reading it, because your mind will subconsciously think that this article did not give me such a feeling. I'm really looking forward to the future development of the story ~ [Sending my heart] I have been following it for a while. The writing is stable and the plot is interesting. It is attractive for people to follow the series. I look forward to the subsequent stories~~ [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Nice! ! ! ! ! ! Really, it's good-looking. It's also a game invasion, but it's a completely different type from Xunge, but both are good-looking. Moreover, the authors of these two books seem to be the first novels. Are all new writers so scary now? They are all such geniuses. I hope this book will not go downhill from now on, but will keep going up. The more I write, the better! ! !

The heroine is really awesome, very resilient and bloody. Even if she is suppressed and bullied in every reincarnation, she never gives up on herself. She saves herself from desperate situations again and again. She is her savior. Some comments say that there are too many descriptions of the sufferings of her previous life and it is not satisfying enough. In fact, I think it is these descriptions that make the heroine's character more three-dimensional and her soul more radiant. It also makes this book thicker than ordinary cool novels.

The writing style is the same as that of "Searching for Songs while Drinking Wine". It's very interesting. The writing style of the second Tomato game invasion type is so good. However, if you can't accept the hardships the heroine endures in the early stage, don't read it. Hatred is the motivation for the heroine's revenge [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

It's very good-looking and very enjoyable. The heroine's actions are crisp and neat. She kills when she can and the enemy appears in seconds, leaving no hidden dangers. All the abuse points mentioned by the author don't matter to me. It is abuse when the heroine is injured and unable to resist. After the heroine is injured, she continues to become stronger and fight back, doubling all the damage in return. The damage is just the way the heroine came. (Han Xin's crotch humiliation, Yue King Gou Jian lay down on the firewood to taste his courage) The way up is piled with corpses, that is the coronation ceremony of the heroine! Ps: Even in her previous life when she was being chased and intercepted, the heroine killed everyone she could, making her enemies gnash their teeth with hatred.

It's so beautiful, it's definitely a hit reserve. Nowadays, everyone will compare it with Xunge. I feel that this book will not be worse than that one in the future. When the time comes for everyone to advance this book, they will directly mention the name of the heroine! I hope the author will keep updating. The author's writing skills and imagination are also very good. I like it very much! It would be great if there are more than a thousand chapters that can be read slowly. The author must work hard!

It's great, and I finally found a replacement for the same type of article. (Both books are very good, so I don't want to mess with them.) The heroine is the most powerful one I've ever seen in a revenge novel [face covering] I really enjoyed reading it. The only fly in the ointment is that some long sentences should be punctuated, otherwise it will affect the reading experience. I tied it in one night. I feel that the author's plot is very fast-paced and has almost filled the pits dug in previous lives. It is well received. [Blowing kiss]

It's good to watch, don't believe it when you abuse a girl. After all, she was the heroine who was robbed of her luck in her previous life. It's normal to be suppressed in her previous life. The heroine who came back has a firecracker temperament and doesn't tolerate anger at all. Revenge doesn't take overnight. She can kill immediately if she can, but slowly tortures her. She is well versed in the art of last-ditch attacks and long nights of dreaming.

It's an excellent story about a heroine. There is no abuse of the heroine. The evil god has been plotting against the heroine since her first reincarnation. The heroine has won the previous 98 times, so she found a stud man in her previous life. In addition, he has been plotting against the heroine since she left the house, causing the heroine to be so miserable. Both Xun Ge and Xun Ge are excellent in their own way. In fact, it is difficult to avoid similar plots in this same type of novel, especially that one which is so excellent. Almost all the authors and audiences who write about game invasion have read that book. It is normal for some plots to have a strong sense of déjà vu, but it can also be seen that the author has tried his best to reduce the impact of this book. Relatively speaking, the heroine in this book kills non-blood enemies more decisively. There are former partners who have been polluted in this life and were killed by the heroine. This plot is quite interesting. The author did not write about this in detail, but this is a plus point for me. It's a bit like a virgin, the kind of protagonist who draws a sword to help when there is an injustice, but the author is determined not to let the protagonist encounter too many such plots in order to create a decisive and decisive killing, so you can rest assured to watch it. Because the protagonist was once a "god", the kind of righteous god who loves the world, all the plots are very reasonable. Not completely a lone wolf, he has followers (but he doesn't seem to be able to write in detail). The younger brother really cares about the protagonist. His parents used to love the protagonist, but they were tricked out a lot. In addition, they are inevitably partial to his younger brother. I didn't pay close attention to the grandparents. The protagonist is no longer related to them by blood, but he will send money every month and use his skills to protect them. There are fewer references to the relationship with the official than in that book. I haven't cooperated with the official much so far, but I was tricked by the official in my previous life. The novel begins to unfold, and later introduces the quick travel game, world consciousness, unknown, and spoilers. The heroine is the son of fate, but she is the second son of fate of Blue Star. The previous one is well protected by Blue Star. The heroine is a shield. Blue Star's world consciousness is currently playing famous villains. The position of the consciousness of the other side is unknown, but it doesn't feel good to me. I look forward to the continued development of the world view in the future. Later, I started to take my official revenge, which was pretty good.

I really like this novel. The heroine never gives up when she encounters a desperate situation. I don't think the heroine is an evil woman. If I encountered something like that in the heroine's previous life, I would have gone crazy early. The heroine's evil is only directed at the people who actually hurt her. I really feel sorry for the heroine. I really can't imagine how painful the heroine was when I saw the things about the heroine's previous life. It's a very good book and a very good heroine [love] [love]

The protagonist Ye Lingyue has a mysterious identity and bloodline ("ordinary" human race/Blue Star God + all races of the royal family + Beili Creation God + extraterrestrial demons + imperial star royal family), a lone wolf with no cp, 99 reincarnations in the past and present life, and double-opening of large and small accounts (everything is within his own plan). He is decisive and shows no mercy to the enemy. He has a fast pace of revenge. He has experienced darkness but still insists on his own destiny. Conscience, not a holy mother, nor extreme destruction of the world, not blind cheating, even if Lao Yue is robbed of everything, she can still make a comeback by herself (the author has given her a strong core instead of just a "plug-in"). The emotional entanglement with her parents and family, and the allusion to the dark society, there are a lot of foreshadowings laid in the early stage, but now they have been filled in, the logic is smooth, it is really good to watch ! (｡>∀<｡) Personally, this is the best-looking game invasion article besides Xunge! The worldview is really rich and complete [Like] As long as the author sticks to this rhythm and writes, this book will really be good.

Very good! The heroine has a very good character, which shows that the author also has a very good character, otherwise he wouldn't be able to write such a protagonist. Although it was written after Xun Ge, I personally think that this book is better written. I hope the author will continue writing like this and not be disturbed by noise.

Cooler: No CP*Lone Wolf*Game Invasion*Rebirth*Revenge*Upgrade*Learning Skills*Not the Holy Mother*Decisive Killing*Writing Style Funny and Humorous*Many Smells*Gold Coin Cracked Version*Grand World View Lightning points: The heroine has a lot of family members and the relationships are complicated. The family treats the heroine badly, but they are also very good to her. In terms of family relationships, they have always cut off the relationship between the heroine and me in front of the screen (probably more than 200 chapters). Luck is low in the early stage * Pets are enemies from previous lives * Some enemies keep being resurrected * I feel like the heroine is being targeted by the whole world A grand view of the world

Full marks, highly recommended, it feels like seeing another game coming, it's really great! The heroine harvests gold coins from all over the world and is fair and honest, never being wronged again. This kind of revenge story is really cool. The previous heroines were really miserable, and they were not aggrieved. They just suppressed them first and then rose up, vividly showing the strength and wisdom of the heroines. Strong recommendation

Tied. This is the only thing I have read after watching Game Invasion. It is a very novel subject matter. Many book reviews talk about abusing the heroine. In fact, this is not the case. This is part of the heroine's growth. It is also the spiritual motivation for the heroine to move up step by step in the early stage. The memory of her past life is a little bit. It inspires the heroine to move forward, and the author has buried a lot of foreshadowing. It is clear and coherent, and the heroine was not so miserable in her previous life. The author has laid a lot of foreshadowing here. The writing in this book is really powerful, the kind of power that touches people. It's very good to watch. It's a bit too much to say that the heroine is abused before finishing it. The author has said before that you can skip it. If you can't see the heroine's bad life, you have to watch it. Should I say that it's just looking for trouble?

It feels so good. Men see menstruation, and women get nervous. This is the nemesis of depression and the alarm clock of vegetative people. It is so beautiful that the five-guaranteed households in the village miss and love the widow. It is so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth to the Qiantang River in Yancheng. It is so beautiful. God is my rose, which illuminates my dark life and makes my life meaningful. I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so beautiful that I cried. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water😍

Looking forward to it! I like to see the heroine not letting go of any enemies! I was very tired after watching the scenes. The scene was very noisy, urgent, and weird. I don't know how to describe it.

So far it seems to be good, the heroine has a revenge, she is not a perfect person, but she is not a bad person either. Face difficulties, struggle hard, and never admit defeat. Those who were able to upgrade their F-level talent to SSS level in their previous life were definitely strong, hard-working and enterprising people. Hopefully, past life descriptions will be directed more towards the perpetrators rather than the victims.

It's such a pure Dark Rebirth revenge story, but the past life was so miserable that there's nothing to say about it. It's the first time I've seen such a tragic protagonist with real feelings, but she's so crazy and strong that she doesn't seem to need my pity.

It's very good-looking, and the female channel has no CP. This book can sit at the same table as the book "Zijiu Xunge" (Stacked A: Personal feeling, radish and cabbage, everyone has their own preferences). The world view is quite huge. Although they are both game invasions, the subsequent story development is completely different (this refers to the world view). The similarities are that the Baoers have suffered a lot, but they will never give in and attack fate with all their strength. Come on, you will definitely win, the rebel will never admit defeat! In this book, Boa's revenge is very straightforward, because there are too many enemies and there are resurrections. If you are not careful, there will be rebirths. There are shady things behind the rebirths, but I believe that Boa will make the evil god kill all the enemies. The author is very considerate. Of course, I can also see that I am very helpless. There are so many tricks (there is a story behind every rule, and there are tricks behind every author tip).

In terms of setting and framework, this is a good author. In terms of execution, there are flaws. He is an author who has not yet mastered the rhythm of refreshing writing. It seems that people regard the tingling feeling as "feeling good" and the catharsis when writing articles as "feeling good", and they are not able to restrain themselves for the sake of rhythm. This sting refers not only to the suffering of the past, but also to revenge. The cool point of a cool novel is "getting". Revenge can be regarded as a cool point, but it is also a negative emotion. Some negative emotions can make the cool point even better, but if it is out of balance, the negative emotions will continue to accumulate and cannot be released. Therefore, a large number of readers regard novels that are clearly supposed to be enjoyable novels as sadistic novels. Another misunderstanding is that this acquisition is not the acquisition of skills. There are too many skill descriptions. If you want to write about a lot of skills, you can't write long; if you want to write in detail, you can't write too much. Writing skills also requires inspiration. The author has too many inspirations and is unwilling to give up any of them. However, the sense of gain from this thing has marginal benefits. Listing too many will cause reading difficulties. The abuse points are too long, and the skills are written too much. They are not in the category of what should be written. What should be written is just inappropriate details and unbalanced rhythm. In fact, I am quite looking forward to the unfolding of the world view of the game, and I am also curious about the heroine's life experience, but what can I say, I feel stuck while reading. The smoothness and detail of the writing made the emotional rhythm of the novel off, preventing this novel from taking it to the next level. But the author does have the ability to conceive an explosive article, and the future is promising.

Fortunately, the overall look is very good. It's just that the author gets so mad when he writes about memories in the early stage. Memories are indeed written in a stinky and long way. Appropriate memories are good seasonings. Too many memories are a bit unbearable. The first page says that you can jump directly to Chapter 45, but if you skip the plot written in the early stage, there will always be things you don't understand. Shouldn't it be the beginning that attracts readers? For example, when writing about other people's pain in memories, there is actually no need to insert too much other people's pain before the game was born, because in the early stage it only involved the female protagonist. I plan to read the rest and use it as a reference if anyone doesn't dislike it. Apart from the criticism of the reminiscences, the overall story is good. When I read the first chapter written by the author, I also realized that many readers are not willing to read the reminiscences (including the feedback from many readers in the subsequent paragraphs). In fact, it can be adjusted appropriately when revising the text in the end.

Finished Chapter 65 It's super, super good-looking, although there are some minor shortcomings, such as sentences that are too long, some ideas and expressions inserted too abruptly, skills that are too long and cumbersome, etc. But I personally think that the core of the heroine can completely make up for these points. Maybe the heroine in the previous life was indeed miserable, but it is precisely because of these experiences that she has shaped the heroine's unique and sparkling soul. Write this out and remember that hatred is necessary. Look in the comment area, some of the plots that everyone is concerned about have been changed. As long as the enemy does not die, the heroine's rotten wounds will never heal, and the heroine needs to carry these hatreds forward. What I personally really like about the heroine is that she did not become a puppet of hatred and desire. In fact, ordinary people would basically go crazy after experiencing such a thing, but the heroine just struggled and danced. In her previous life, she was hunted by countless people, and she lived like a rat, and she killed a lot of people. After being reborn, I was not completely controlled by hatred. If it were me, I might destroy the world and take revenge on society. But the heroine still has reason and compassion in her heart. Already aware of the vastness of the universe, I still pity the green grass and trees. There is still a lot I want to say, but due to my lack of language skills, I have not expressed it. The writing may be messy, but the overall point is that the heroine is a very good person. In fact, I personally hope that the heroine's revenge on the enemy can be described in more detail later, or there may be several special torture skills, such as the body being cut into pieces, the soul being burned by fire, etc. In short, the sins the heroine suffered must be recovered from those people a thousand times. Skills can be summarized in a more streamlined version, expressed in a simpler language in brackets at the end, or placed in a paragraph comment area, because it is too long and some people still can't understand it. Overall, it's very interesting and interesting. Come on, the author, keep writing, improve your writing, and it will become more and more popular.

For those who say abuse of women in the comment section (definitely not a complete summary, but almost) First of all, it is impossible for people to have inexplicable hostility or particularly strong hatred towards anyone or anything for no reason. Only if they have enough reasons, they would want to kill a person, and the sufficient reasons must be based on the blood feud. The author's memories make up for this very well. Nao Shuang Li Xing, the author has said that you can skip it. If you really can't stand it, you don't need to leave negative comments here and mess with the sense of existence. ) I confirm that these are two completely different works from the one on the top list. If you want to read the same beloved daughter as the one on the top list, please just click Exit and open the work you like. [In addition, I don't want to start a fight. If anyone comments, I am not a soft persimmon. Secondly, I just love to watch strong women who are forced out of desperate situations, and the crazy feeling of being so hateful that they kill their enemies so much that they can't even burst out the blood mist. I just love to watch plot twists and turns and twists, I just love to watch story lines that I can't guess, and I just enjoy the tension brought by the unknown. The feeling of oppression and threat is that I admire the heroine's growth like a fire in exchange for injury, I like to see flesh-and-blood characters with rich and full emotions, I like to see the reality of human nature in the apocalypse, I like to see intrigues and interests above all else... Finally, I feel sorry for the heroine's past pain, and I resent her current embarrassment. I admire her growing up in a desperate situation. I rejoice in the moment of tenderness she receives, and at the same time I celebrate her escaping from the shadow of her original family... In the end, I am also very much looking forward to the splendid, magnificent, and wonderful fireworks that the heroine will bloom in her world and her life... [This time, no matter who is responsible for the game or how big the game is, she, Ye Lingyue, will tear him to pieces and then trample him under her feet so that he will never see the light of day again. (Not original text)] [Excellent authors should have the excellent ratings they deserve] (The following contains spoilers) Those painful memories in the early stage are foreshadowing. You must read it [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It's pretty good and interesting. I always clicked on this book before but didn't read it much. I read the title too quickly and mistook it for a time-travel novel. Because the content is very monotonous and boring. Sister, I am so good-looking [crying] There are too many plot descriptions of abuse, and the revenge process can only be described as unsatisfactory. There are faults and advantages in the family relationship, which makes the protagonist waver and torture the heroine's mentality. Most of the plots tend to be sadistic, which is not that satisfying. The protagonist has to go through many difficulties and dangers to find a good or bad road in a dead end.