Transform into a Slime Tentacle Monster and Lead the Girl to Kill the Apocalypse

You should go to a certain dimension, it's more suitable for you, but you can't let go here [eating melon]

For a first-time author, this article is good. At least the context of the article is clear, and the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine is okay. Of course there are some shortcomings. Although the background of the story is very clear, the world view is relatively thin at present, and the characters and environment descriptions are slightly less. If the villain is a rich second generation, this is acceptable. After all, it needs to have supporting characters to set off the protagonist and promote the plot. Overall, I think it is still okay and worthy of my five-star encouragement. By the way, the author also has too many typos. Although it does not affect the overall reading, I still try to be as good as possible.

The subject matter is very novel and very interesting. The main reasons for giving it four stars are: 1. This symbiosis model is acceptable. It can be seen that the author wants to write a single female protagonist. But I can't accept that you have traveled through time. Why not bring some memories of movies like Venom? You have to explore, of course I can reluctantly accept it 2. From Chapter 1 to Chapter 21, how many times did the protagonist take action? If I remember correctly, the protagonist took action once, and he just woke up and was stunned, and attacked with a knife. Basically, he was writing about the heroine. I want to see the possession battle. To be honest, I quite like watching the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine.

Good-looking, really good-looking The brainless rich second-generation villain is a little bit poisonous, but everything else is pretty good.

I feel that the combat power has increased too fast. I saw that now, the strongest combat power is level 5, and then the protagonist has reached level 3 in just a few chapters. I even have a feeling that this book is almost finished [laughing and crying]. If it's Wudiwen, just pretend I didn't say it

The character is still too weak. The male protagonist should be given the ability to fight alien beasts and absorb the energy of the alien beasts. The more he fights, the more powerful he will be [eating melon]

There is no pure land in the comments [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's good to watch. They live and die together, and they are still in a parallel relationship. Although I expected to win in the ending, I still didn't expect it to end so soon. It seems that the author has never been in love (bush). When will the extra story be released? I still want to watch it.

The speed is very fast [laughing]

The author can refer to the game Prototype to enrich the form of the male protagonist [Send Heart] The overall novel is acceptable.

The subject matter of the book is novel, and the characterization is a bit thin. I have also read many reviews of the book, and everyone has summarized it very well. I hope that the author will continue to hone his writing skills and it will be an interesting book in his spare time. Keep up the good work [laughter]

There is still room for improvement.

I read it in one go, it's quite interesting. In fact, the author can write big stories and even change the form, but in the end the pace is too fast and I can't keep up with hh, but the overall innovation is still great, the single woman is not ambiguous, full marks

Symbiosis mode is not a symbiosis. It was tricked into it.

I like the venom setting

This novel is quite good. Don't stop reading it just because of its low score. I highly recommend it to old bookworms.

Okay, not bad [like]

If you like watching it now, give it a good review first

It's a bit lacking, it's just too little [smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

Good, you know

Are there any tentacle clothes in there?

It's really good-looking, but it's a bit lacking.

I still have to practice, four stars encouraged me to slip away

This book is quite good, you can read it

The concept is very good, the plot is very immature, and the official descriptions of villains and people are too concise. Keep up the hard work and hope to improve it more.

You can write more carefully and don't skip too many plots. The writing style needs to be improved. The content is very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It's beautiful, I love watching it, I watch it every day

Add more scenes between male and female protagonists

Very good for me

Not bad, it looks pretty I think