Honkai Impact************

The writing is decent. It is not a system harem story covered in Honkai Impact. It has its own goals and actions to achieve it. Strictly speaking, this is indeed a more honest Honkai fan story. There are not many plots based on Honkai characters at the moment.

The protagonist's personality growth process is very good. From an ordinary person to an Otto-like Kevin with a little bit of Alley, it is very ordinary [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. There are no problems so far, and the characters are not OOC. I hope the author can cheer up💪[send heart][send heart][send heart].

A masterpiece! I really like Kevin in it, I like every single one of them. The ancestor is not too OOC. The scene where Kevin Kaslana transforms back into a larvae was so sweet that my heart almost melted. Also, this strange mixture of feelings is really funny.

It's well done in the fanfic, I haven't read much of it, time goes by relatively quickly, and the plot is relatively compact, but maybe too much plot will feel a bit boring? Maybe it's because I haven't read much. Apart from anything else, the writing is very good. You can see the author's efforts to describe a real world and narrate it, but it is a bit slow (I haven't read much). To be honest, it is a bit tiring. After all, it is very tiring to describe and understand everything. A world, as a writer The author is very capable. Maybe I don't know much about this way of writing, but it is very true. It infected me and I abandoned my own ideas and chose to substitute. I am not qualified to comment on my hard work, so the above can be ignored. In short, come on, in the fast food style life, this kind of spirit of being able to give up the faster pace is very valuable, come on

It is a very interesting book (although I think 4 and a half stars is more appropriate). Of course, the premise is that you can read the inappropriate change in the early part. Although in the final analysis, you want it all but it is not handled well (I have never seen it handled well, and even if I think it is not satisfactory, others will find faults, so there is no explanation), and there are a lot more typos and omissions in the book than other books. However, I prefer the views on different organizations and individuals in the book. Human nature is complex and three-dimensional. We cannot directly evaluate its black and white, but determine whether we accept its practices and results in different aspects. The same is true for reading books. So far, I think only the early stages of the book are considered poisonous points, but compared to other books that also write about taking everything in the second collapse, it is actually enough. As for the ones that are not consistent with the original work, I suggest you read the plot a few times (it is exactly the same as the original work, right?), And read the fanfic just for different plots, or write one yourself and read it. And what Otto is bragging about is actually because Otto has so many positive expressions in the book (if the gender were changed, they would call for a harem). In summary, it was actually surprisingly good. Seeing that there were so few comments, I thought it was very bad.

It looks good, except for a few typos, and there are nothing wrong with it. And I'm quite curious about how the author will write the subsequent plot? If you can make a full circle while sitting, I think this perfect score must be straight.

I just want to rate it a little low. To be honest, apart from some problems with the writing style, this novel has no problems with its general logic. It still feels very good.

The growth of the protagonist is visible to the naked eye, which also makes up for many regrets of the original plot. The description of emotions is not too stuffy or too dull. Various challenges to interpersonal relationships can also give a glimpse of the fun of the original characters in their daily interactions. It's just that I couldn't stand the way I dealt with an enemy (I retreated anyway). To sum up, it would be 9.5 Points (if you don't feel that the handling method is inappropriate, it would be 9.7 Points)

Not bad, very good, very to my liking. I hope the author will not stop updating [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] (Please) [almost crying]

I don't know what those people who wrote negative reviews are thinking. Anyway, I think he is very good because he makes me feel real. Although there are a lot of typos, he is very interesting, so overall he is very good.

The author's plot design is very good. I had a lot of fun reading "Saving Regrets". The parallel world makes the whole plot more interesting. I read this book very well. I read more than 600 chapters in three days. I can give it five stars.

I objectively believe that the author's understanding of Beng 3 and his character creation are relatively accurate among all the fan fiction. Compared with those cool versions, there are more details about the protagonist's step-by-step growth experience, and the fresh characters are more realistic and harmonious integrated into the original work.

It was quite uncomfortable to watch at first. After all, it was difficult to accept that the protagonist's character resembled Otto's. But as I watched, I began to accept it. A selfish male protagonist seems good too. The work is very thoughtful, the plot tension is sufficient, and the characters are well developed. Except for Chapter 25, which is a bit toxic, there are no other problems.

The images and settings are basically consistent with the original work, and the author can just write according to the current rhythm.

The overall story is very good, the story line is complete, and it has gone out of the weird direction of Honkai Impact Sanli. The only problem is that the update is too slow, and it is not enough to read. I saw the latest chapter in three or four days. I am very disappointed in you, the author. Not even the production team dares to take a break like this. Please update more soon! ! !

It's good-looking, but it's a pity that it has a single heroine [crying]

Although I have only watched it for a while, I must give it a five-star rating. As for the plot of Xilin, this is the most satisfying ending in my fanfic. The other ones, whether they are Chef Xilin or not, all have an inexplicable sense of weirdness. In the name of rescue, they finally become k423, although they finally become Aquan... I don't know what to say. Anyway, the author wrote it very well.

There is a vivid protagonist in this book, and the author has created it very well. I have seen too many mindless novels. In terms of character creation, this one can be said to be at the forefront among the novels I have read.

The current situation is okay, there is plot logic, and the characters are three-dimensional, but why do I feel that there will be a harem in the future?

A very good Bengsan fan, don't be misled by the ratings, Haokang [Like]

It's great, I love it, I want to read the story of Kevin and Mei Yi

The content is smooth and basically good. But it's just that, after watching it for so long, I still don't know what the heroine did. It's useless, and I haven't experienced anything with the protagonist. We just lived together with the protagonist since childhood, nothing happened, and suddenly they told each other that they liked each other and wanted to get engaged.

The book is very good. I hope there will be more love between Kevin and Vita. So good, so good! I finally got candy.

This book can be said to be the most detailed Beng Beng Beng fanfic I have ever read on Tomato. Ms. Vita is the best in the world.

Is it okay to keep updating? I want to watch Kevin and Vita! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

There are indeed a lot less typos, and there are no problems with the plot so far. There is no OOC in the character and it looks pretty good.

Not bad. There aren't many that I like to read. I still like this one. I hope the author can keep writing it.

Okay, watchable. It can be read in fan fiction.

Looks good! Do you know how highly a person who doesn't like reading romance would rate this book? ! Only now do I realize that it's not that I don't like romance, I just don't like industrial sugar! The characters are well developed and there is no OOC! The plot is lively, interesting and not clichéd! It doesn't break up the official pairing, it conforms to the official character relationship model, so there is a warm charm between the characters! We won't marginalize any character just because we write about which pair of CPs! Original protagonist and heroine! The rest is to read the introduction!

It's really good to read, I like the character of the male protagonist, but I think the plot before the Second Honkai Impact was a bit boring, and Siegfried in the later period was a bit... Other than that, it can be said to be the best Honkai Impact Santo manga I've read in the past two years. The last good one was Su Shixiu's, but this book is really good and I've been reading it recently [Like]