All Beasts Attackshiquan Family

The language is very wonderful, and the description of the environment is admirable. Very fantasy flavor. And it perfectly integrates fantasy and the world view of the beast. At the same time, it also fills in some loopholes in the original comics of Quanju. At the same time, many of the words in it can be copied down as good words and sentences. The author's literary skills are very solid.

This fan work is undoubtedly a masterpiece. It uses language ingeniously and skillfully integrates fantasy elements with the world view of the beasts. It shows the possible appearance of the world of beasts in a higher "realm". It reflects the author's unique ingenuity and deep understanding of the original work, and brings a unique experience that is different from other reading works. The middle plot not only fills in the blanks in the original comic, but also creatively resolves some inconsistencies in the original work, making the whole story more complete (no spoilers). There are also comments from the parallel world, Duochu is ecstatic [laughing]

The author's writing style is excellent, and the writing is smooth and smooth, but after reading too many gorgeous words, I felt really tired. By the end, I felt like I had heard it all. The science student said angrily: "So literary? Do you want to take the postgraduate entrance examination?" [I almost cried]

In fact, the main point of all the beasts is love and friendship, but I feel that the settings are insufficient. This book makes up for certain settings such as training levels, and other places should be closer to the fantasy world. It doesn't seem to be poisonous at the moment

It's beautiful, with gorgeous diction, elegant language, and a very novel plot. But what I'm writing is a novel. There are too many details and descriptions of the environment later on, which is not conducive to the advancement of the story (it gives people a very ink-blot feeling). You must pay attention to the details. Come on.

In terms of plot, I think it's pretty good. I hope the author will never make it unfinished, and the more updates the better.

It looks good [laughing] But why are there no scenes of Xiaoye outside the dream [what] And how long will Uncle Jie be unconscious in the dream [What] Does Uncle Jie have to get married [crying] Those who like it can forget it. Those who don't like it really don't want Uncle Jie to marry [crying] (Those who watch the live broadcast are very interesting to chat with [smirk] I suggest you do more [you taste it carefully]) Also, Uncle Jie must not get married! Definitely not!

Feeling pretty good so far.

Great, come on, come on

The description is detailed and very beautiful. [Sending Hearts]

I don't know when or what month I will be able to see book ratings [shy]

Aba aba aba [eat melon]

It looks good, I love reading it, author, cheers [blowing kiss]

It's very beautiful. Is the author a liberal arts major? (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The author writes well, keep it up! I also hope the author can write more, otherwise it won't be enough!

It's very beautiful and novel. I hope the author will do more basic work in the future. [Blowing kiss]

Wow wow wow wow wow wow!

Come on, it looks great!

Very good, really good

It's very nice, but the words are a bit short. If you have time, can you update it a little bit @Lushihantu? If you don't have time, forget it.

It's very beautiful and novel. I hope the author will do more candy in the future [blowing kisses]

It's a bit sharp, but not too heavy, and the sensation is not intense enough. It's not uncomfortable for people who are sensitive to my emotions. It feels almost [shy]

The writing is very good, and it can be regarded as my enlightenment work.

Very nice, five stars.