Hogwarts: Harry Potter Proposes

As we all know, whether a cpHP book is good or not depends on the Goblet of Fire. To be honest, I was disgusted that CP did not dance as the lead dancer in the Goblet of Fire, and this part falls into this category. However, the self-righteousness of two children caused this incident, and the result is still good. I have been struggling for a long time and give it 5 points. In addition, this book is not a domestic book. From a grammatical point of view, it is a translation from abroad. Therefore, there are a lot of vocabulary errors, which may make you a little confused. In addition, the sophisticated party may not like it. The CP has been completely removed and the plot has been greatly changed. However, it is thrilling, heart-warming, and has a unique flavor.

The writing is very nice, and the author is quite good at portraying the characters. Harry and Hermione officially became boyfriend and girlfriend in their early twenties, and Harry even directly became a billionaire, a total of 4 billion galleons, which is now about 900,000,000,000. Maybe the entire magic world doesn't have that much money, so it feels like it's a bit exaggerated. And as a Chinese, I may not be able to accept Hermione's "kissing ceremony" when meeting everyone, especially when kissing Ron. Well, maybe it's a precious friendship, not much understanding, but respect. Overall, this book is worth picking up for Hach supporters. By the way, it would be better if the author's writing style could be improved. I think you can refer to "The Love Tribulation of Auror Malford". Come on, author.

How come this book has no traffic? It's an excellent book! The more you write, the more exciting it becomes Excellent, excellent, excellent tomato juice. The amount is more than 1,000. What a magical tomato.

Maybe it's because I have a good affinity with this book. In my mind, it really overwhelms any fan fiction with the same theme (I've read almost all of them). The author's description of the relationship between the two is really touching. It's not like other articles. It has fluctuations and twists and turns, and it deeply penetrates my heart. There are some shortcomings - there is a little translation accent, and some mistakes are really heart-wrenching. Hermione said that she was invited to the ball and the author wrote that she was proposed to! I really jumped up and my heart was tugged together at the time.

The characters are well drawn and the writing is Haha. It's very Ness's book.

What can I say? If you feel awkward or don't understand the directness of Westerners, forget it. I think it's a bit abstract, okay, but in fact, the original book is abstract, and it's still a very good book. Let's read more later, [Chigua] [Chigua] But I think this machine is really good at flipping the book and explaining a lot. It's really pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's very interesting, but I didn't understand it at first

Will Harry and Hermione get back together [crying]

Author, each family has four of these King's Sword rings, and Merlin only has the fifth one. Is this what he means? [What] [What] [laughing] The dozens of chapters I have been reading lately have been too depressing. When can I change the atmosphere group? [Thinking]

It was obvious that my emotions were fluctuating wildly as the writing progressed. Please update soon!

700 Photos, no follow-up? Why hasn't it been updated yet?

Haha's writing is very good.

It's a pretty good fanfic, at least I feel comfortable watching it.

This book is very good, keep it up.

It's amazing that no one has read this book.

Very good, cp haha, the characters are good, the update is fast, not worse than the original work

Come on! Very well written! [Praise]

Foster father, you have lost my will.

It looks better as you go to the back, come on!

The first part is a bit like a machine translation, but I didn't expect it to be so good after dozens of chapters! Haha super sweet! ! ! Worth a look! ! !

Very interesting, the plot description is very detailed and full

Wonderful, you can take a look

4 Stars, lest you be proud,

Was it translated from an external network?

Very good, but you can watch the haha ​​CP