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Woohoo, as a Tongmo cook, I haven't seen such a good Tongmo article for a long time. I'm really happy. Without OOC, it is slightly different from Tongmo, so as to show the characteristics of the protagonist, the language is humorous, and there are many "warm" and funny little daily routines. If I update it, it will be two chapters a day (although I can't read enough, but I'm bragging, hehe). Really, the author is great, I cried to death, it's so good! You must keep writing! Love you so much! Mwah!

If nothing else, at least the characters are written in a non-ooc style The changes to the original plot are very natural. Whether it is directly or indirectly rescuing the characters in the original plot, it does not feel abrupt or character-breaking. (Written by Momo Tou, it's really, really, really cute) (Covering his heart) (Satisfied) The writing about Tong Mo is really good. Ghosts can be said to be eternal existences, so there must be a knife called lifespan. When dealing with this knife in this book, I saw the most real Tong Mo who is different from the usually cheerful Tong Mo. Even if he retains a trace of emotion because of the fusion of souls in other worlds, he is still indifferent in essence. When I was lamenting the departure of his "friend" a second ago, Momo Tou could always bring me back with his joy. I'm looking forward to the next development. The current Demon Slayer Squad has a favorable impression of the team, but it is gradually increasing. I look forward to how much this will change in the future. (Quietly at the end) (The ending must be he ah ah ah ah ah ah ah) (Crying bitterly)

It's good-looking. The main character is Tongmo Benmo, who is cynical and seems innocent and ignorant. He has a cheerful, lively, clear and silly personality (bushi), so he is not disliked [shy]. Momo Tou likes to listen to what he wants to hear, and is no longer picky about food. He is afraid of food poisoning. I was quite pleased with the type of dim sum I chose to eat. There are always some interesting behaviors in Momo Tou, which make people laugh and feel a little moved. The plot is compact, smooth, and just right. I feel sorry for Momoko. Her story is as tragic as Komaji and the prostitute brother and sister [crying]. The fighting scenes are also very well written, and the writing is beautiful. It is one of the best Demon Slayer doujins I have ever seen. [Love][love][love]

This book is definitely No. 1 Among the fanfics of the Demon Slayer villain camp that I have read. Although it is said to be a time travel, the protagonist's character is closer to Tong Mo himself - quite scornful, and has the feeling of being disliked but not knowing it. There is also the nihilistic compassion and extreme indifference of the "leader". Does the current plot look more daily? Something lighthearted (for the protagonist). For a ghost like the protagonist, life is almost infinite, so the people and things he encounters are just passers-by in the endless life (life span is judged by a small knife). Tong Mo's indifference, innocence, and cruelty are portrayed more deeply in this context (which is quite to my liking) That's good [laughs]

A very nice book [Blowing Kiss]. I thought Tong Mo's character would change a lot, but compared to the original work, it doesn't feel OOC in terms of look and feel. It can be regarded as another version of the original work [Sending Hearts]. The plot design is also very interesting. Tong Mo just obeys his heart and makes natural actions that can change many things in the original work. I really admire the author for such an excellent understanding and creation of characters. This book is so perfect....! ! ! ! [Love][love]

The novel title caught my attention right away. At that time, I thought it was about a theme like rebirth or return. Did I really have a good relationship with others? It turns out he traveled through time. All I can say is that the author's writing style is really good. I personally think it fits the character very well. There is some OOC, but it's so small that it's completely unnoticeable. The only fly in the ointment is that I personally feel that the term time travel is a bit forced. I think it is too forced to use other people's identities to travel through time. Although the character design is very good, I still like the leader, and I hope to see other development lines about him in the fanfic. This article is really very comfortable, and the description is also very consistent with the character, but every time I think that this is not the real leader, I still feel that the stone in my heart has not landed. Personally, I prefer child grinding. Please give it a try🙏But the author seems to have written about this aspect, but I really don't have the brain to understand it. If there is, you can explain it. It feels like it is being slowly assimilated, but if the body is not the soul, it still feels inappropriate. If it is like that kind of merging (?) Where the souls merge into one, I feel that it should be much better. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. It doesn't have to be done, the author's writing is perfect. But in short, the overall sensory experience is still very good, so it still makes me watch it now. I have not read the comics, so I am curious whether the early characters were imagined by the author himself. If so, then his imagination is too big. I really admire it. Every character is so lifelike. Now we are getting close to the plot, and suddenly I feel a little reluctant to know that someone is leaving. I am very curious about how the plot will go next. Come on🌹

It's very interesting and light-hearted and has no flaws. I hope that I can deal with the relationship with the Demon Slayers in the future, such as getting rid of control, or gaining true feelings through the relationship with the Butterfly Sisters, but I don't have to be too used to the Demon Slayers, and at the same time, I keep myself happy. After all, ghosts are also transformed from human beings. There is no psychological burden at all after eating a few Japanese [smile][smile][smile]

It's perfect, it's delicious, and it's not OOC at all. I don't know why the rating is low. The plot is very interesting and attractive. It has been on my must-read list of fan fiction. It is completely different from the fan fiction I have seen before with confusing narratives. This book is relaxed and relaxed, making people smile. Although it is short, it is full of meaning. It is a great children's story, and love comes from the auspicious forest. Looking forward to the future development, this fills the gap in Crocodile's description of Tongmo, and it also puts an end to the regret.

It's delicious, and without any CP, you can eat it as a CB (except for the official CP, the original CP has not been removed) and there is no OOC. The characters are very good. Don't look at it when drinking water. Sometimes, there will be some natural places that make people want to laugh. Drinking water will make you cough. Well, all in all, it's a great recovery (many people were saved where they died in the original plot), it's delicious, and I'm a bit curious about the ending, but it should be a gentle ending. After all, the protagonist of this book, Mo Mo Tou, is a gentle person. Although he is still a guy with weak human nature, he has persisted in that little bit of humanity and gentleness for hundreds of years. He is also a kind of gentle and tough "person". But if he still goes to hell this time, many people will be willing to pray for his afterlife.

Although he is dressed as a child, there is no OOC performance at all. It is better to say that "when the child learns about the plot", the character of the child's unintentional fun is very natural. I would like to call it the best book written about children on various platforms [Blowing Kiss], and it does not have a female protagonist, so it is not a loss at all! After reading it, it basically counts as the redemption ending for all members of He. However, the author did not write it bluntly, which is praised. The ending also has no heroine. Although I feel that it could be darker, but now everyone understands the dark situation, so I won't force it.

I've read about a dozen of them, and the writing is okay. I don't see much in the plot yet, and the characters are still very toxic to me. The character design is the same as that of Tong Mo. It can be said that they are almost completely assimilated, with only less than 10% difference. It can be said that I write novels from the perspective of a child. Time travel only allows me to be more involved and not be so repelled [face covering] It's just my personal reasons, so I give you five stars.

I rarely read fanfics on Tomato, but this time I felt the writing was pretty good. As a time traveler, it is not too OOC. All the characters maintain an anime-like character design. There is basically no major collapse or one-sided bias. I still like it. I don't know why, but I'm more tolerant of the moral treatment of comic book fans than real-life stories, and I've found a youthful feeling. After reading it, I felt unsatisfied. This is the best Demon Slayer fanfic I have ever read, but I have never read any other long Demon Slayer fanfic. Anyway, after watching the ending, I felt very unhappy. There is no such thing as a banquet that lasts forever, and we will always part ways. Lament

I really enjoyed watching it👀, it's very good-looking, and suddenly I felt like the protagonist is so good, why doesn't everyone like him? If my friend was like the protagonist, I would definitely like him. I don't mean anything else, I just like this kind of person with a cheerful personality, and I'm familiar with it Ahhhh, it's so beautiful! ! The teacher never seems to deny that he is my wife😱. . . It's scary to think about it😨. . My hands are shaking as I type this sentence. . . Teacher, teacher, your writing is so good, I have fallen in love with it! ! ! (≧ω≦)/

Very good fanfic, it makes me spin and jump ヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉ Judging from the current content, there is nothing OOC about the character, and the protagonist's personality is also very suitable for Tongmo, and he brings out the character to the extreme hahahaha (ಡωಡ) From now on, it seems that Tong Mo has formed a bond with both the Demon Slayer camp and the Oni camp. I am curious about which side will win in the end (｢･ω･)｢If Tong Mo goes to the Demon Slayer camp, many demons may be incited to rebel, right? (ง ˙O˙)วIf you are still in the ghost camp and Tongmo is about to die, you can already imagine Shinobu and Saneya (plus some others) crying and sad after killing Tongmo (›´ω`‹ ) Or maybe there are two endings? One ending in the demon camp and one in the Demon Slayer camp. It is said that if Tong Mo is in the Demon Slayer camp, he will choose to be a ghost in the end. I can already imagine what Tong Mo will do after seeing the reincarnation of Tanjiro and the others |･ω･｀) Anyway, I am looking forward to it (ºº ) I hope it will be updated soon (๑°3°๑) Please give me more extrasヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉ

"Because of some miracle that we have no way of knowing, he awakened abilities that he should not have had, gained some human emotions, and also foresaw his own end..." "So, the established destiny has since deviated." "Everyone has a new future." (Words from the protagonist in this book) This is another brand new story different from the original one. Everyone is so familiar and vivid in the world, writing a new future. Thank you to the author for carefully weaving such a beautiful dream (the author is God!!!!!)

The content is good, the structure is clear, and there is no system. It is a very good second-generation fan novel. There are almost no shortcomings. If you want to talk about the real shortcomings, then it is basically posted at night. You can only read it the next day and not be able to grab the first update [smile]

Sparacine~~ ˃̶͈ ꇴ ˂̶͈! It is a very exciting and innovative book. The emojis are very vivid and the plot is running on a happy track. The daily life and fighting are great! Tong Mo is in need of beating and cute, and the other ghosts and everyone in the Demon Slayer Squad are also very fun ₍₍٩( ᐛ )۶₎₎♪It's very long and satisfying (it would have been better if it was longer. He accompanied me through two days of fishing, and then I was exhausted. ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა Brandished a small leather whip to beat the author(っ`-´c)_ﾉ┳═┻

Ah, I like it very much! The character of Tong Mo is well written. There is no OOC and it fits the character very well. There will be small changes and it is within the acceptable range. It is really cute to watch Tong Mo's daily life. He is full of harassment and making good friends. He is full of energy every day and is hated by others without realizing it. It is really fun hahaha

The funny CP-free story saves the original characters. It's overall good-looking. Although it was a bit exaggerated and embarrassing at the beginning, I don't know if it's because I got used to it or because the writing style became more natural. It started to look better. Overall it's quite funny and light-hearted. It's harmless at times. There is no highly overlapping main process to save people. The teacher has written a lot of new content. However, those who like to watch a protagonist with a three-dimensional outlook should not think too deeply about it. The protagonist is considered a half-villain. He likes his colleagues and does not stop them from harming and cannibalizing others. He also eats the bad guys he encounters and those who want to go to the new world. As long as you don't claim that the protagonist is a great and upright good person, I think it's fine.

Such a cute article, I feel that the description is very close to Tong Mo's heart... He is almost inorganic and indifferent to everything, but he always shows his innocent side. It doesn't feel OOC at all! In a sense, it may be read as a child's story (?)

Why are you so cute, Mo Mo Tou... I don't feel OOC at all, and the changes to the original plot are very natural! It's an amazing book. [Love] It's really exciting and I'm looking forward to the future development more and more! I particularly like this book! It's not as overly exaggerated as other fans. Good and reassuring Will grinding your head in the later stage make the blue flower of the other side miserable? After all, many of the original characters have survived and become pillars. In the later stage, it will be very difficult to fight, and the chance of winning is very low. I'm also looking forward to what kind of sweet words Tongmo will use to coax Butterfly Ninja and Zhuzhu after he is caught, or will he admit it directly and generously?

It looks so good that I'm flying everywhere [top post] [crying] This book is a masterpiece of Tong Mo. It has a perfect plot and character description. Some of the characters are not OOC. I especially like to see how the two ghosts Yi Wo Zuo and Tong Mo get along with each other. Really, it's really nice (can I say it, okay) All in all! It's very beautiful! It's in my top three list of villain stories in Demon Slayer. Come on, no matter the ending is be or he, I will always follow you!! Don't mess up, absolutely!

Oh my god, this is really the best fanfic I have ever seen. The protagonist has a clear and super strong image, and later becomes a little bit of a group favorite (ok, maybe I am just bored and have no energy). It's so cool. Emm is written in big letters very well, there should be no cp, right? Kotonoha and Shinobu are indeed cute and beautiful, but I don't think Tomo can be with them, but I don't think so. Who doesn't want to play with a beautiful sister~ All in all, it's still great in my opinion! Speaking of whether the forward swing is too big, the main plot hasn't started yet. I really want to watch the third brother in Mugen Train and then Tongmo comes to cause trouble! I really don't want to see my eldest brother die [crying] [crying] Big cheers for the author! Almost one hundred chapters

Good looking. This non-original child has a much higher moral sense than the original, but he is not a good person either. Although the final ending is a bit both necessary and necessary, it is consistent with the logic of this book. There were a lot of twists and turns, but it was quite casual, and there was no twisty and painful plot where the left and right brains were fighting each other. The protagonist was consistent in his values ​​from beginning to end, and it seemed very smooth and comfortable. There is a small amount of free heart to prove the children's piano line. The main plot is the daily life of Tongmo. It was a bit boring in the early stage, but it was much better in the later stage when familiar characters appeared. Moreover, I think it made people feel more comfortable than the original Crocodile with some of the subtler details. For example, the Flower Street Chapter was a low-key book for me.

Originally, I didn't want to see the setting of the soul traveling through another world and the fusion of Tongmo's soul. I felt a bit uncomfortable. But these two are really integrated in a sense! There is no obvious discomfort like a dove occupying a magpie's nest. Just by looking at him, you will think of him as a real child! There may be a little bit more in the front, but the story behind makes this setting insignificant, because it's so beautiful! ! ! (It's so funny!!!!!!!) And it's actually more like Tong Mo's soul being swallowed by someone from another world, rather than being taken over by someone from another world… The plot is very smooth, and everyone is very cute. After watching it, I feel like everyone is recommending it, especially this group of ghosts... Is this the charm of top-notch fandom?! Originally, I had no interest in Yiwo Zuo! I actually felt a little cute... (Tongmo is still the cutest😈) It's so well written. It's obvious that the entire story was written just to fight Tong Mo, but the remaining characters are still able to exude charm like crazy. Chef, I worship you ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Wow, what a great book, it transformed Tong Mo from a chaotic and evil fun-loving person into a good and evil one. The story of breaking the wall and letting the wandering girl choose the future is really the first time I have seen this kind of plot. Great, this kind of plot

If you like demon slayer, don't miss it! ! ! It's really beautiful (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ This is the only one that I've finished watching in its entirety, most of the others I didn't want to watch until halfway through. I feel so good watching it, please give me more, teacher! I really like the grinding head created by the teacher, it's super cute! ! !

It's very good-looking. All the characters' personalities are quite consistent with the original work. The final ending is very good. For those who like children's portraits, there is no strong cp in the article. It's super good-looking. The plot line in the article is super complete. It's clear to read. The article is very transparent and engaging. Sheng, I watched "Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba" from junior high school to college. I didn't expect that I would fall in love with the leader after being a mediocre spectator. This article gives everyone a good ending. It is really fun to read. The author is so talented [shy]

It's really super, super good-looking. The more I watch it, the more I get addicted to it. I beg the author not to stop updating it and not to be a eunuch! ! ! [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, let me see the ending, please [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] I was scared by the previous author, ahhhhhhhhhhh [crying][crying] Beautiful and beautiful 😋😋

Objectively speaking, this book can be rated as a five-star book. The plot has a tight rhythm and a well-organized structure. The characters try to be as original as possible and not OOC. It has both a relaxed and tense atmosphere. It can be used when it is necessary to use the sword, and when it feels good, it is also very refreshing. It is highly recommended to read. But from the perspective of a Tong Mo single player, I still have some regrets. The first point is that the "time travel" setting makes me feel grudge. Although I feel that this is completely Mo Mo Tou himself, I still feel a little inconsistent with the setting of "already mastering the plot". The second is that this Tong Mo with feelings and a little bit of humanity is indeed very cute and fresh, but the reason why I know how to cook Tong Mo is probably because of the coexistence of coldness, cruelty and innocence in the original work. I always feel that Tong Mo should die in the ending, but I am not used to this dumpling-making ending (www is weird, maybe I am a BE lover, or maybe I am a BT who likes to watch self-promotion and being tortured). All in all, the writing is good, the structure and layout are also good, and the ending shows that the author is very careful. The one star missing is purely because I felt a little inconsistent when reading the story with a cook filter.