I Just Want to Stay Away from Feng Aotian After Reading the Evil Master

It's definitely good to watch, a typical master-fighter-disciple story, but I don't get tired of it [smirk] The early plot is pretty good, but the pace is a bit faster later on. I feel like Jiang Yu's original setting of a boy's soul-transportation could be changed to a girl's soul-transportation, because Jiang Yu's character is quite like a girl's (purely my personal opinion), so it's pure. In fact, I was planning to read Shen Yuan's book at that time, but when I saw that the author had published a new book, I wanted to read this one first and then catch up later [facepalm]

It's beautiful and the writing is smooth and natural. It's worthy of you. I estimate that in a few dozen chapters, when the female lead surpasses the protagonist, Lao Jiang will enter the dark room hahaha Not as good as the book about Shen Yuan and Senior Sister, the two strong characters Shen Yuan will not rely too much on Senior Sister, and will protest if he is treated roughly by Senior Sister (their emotional entanglement is quite exciting to watch), and it is also very satisfying to watch Shen Yuan's perspective without looking at emotions, and it is also very comfortable to level up and fight monsters. Feng Aotian This book is like Jiang Yu being taken care of by Lin Qingye, and your book Chasing Wife and Crematorium always hastily reconciles halfway through, which is quite speechless. The first time you escaped, you could have written it, but you made Jiang Yu rescue Lin Qingye to save Jiang Yu. The two reconciled and became Taoist couples. . . The second time, Lin Qingye said that she liked the master's body, and did it without comforting or asking the master. The master was obviously reluctant, but she couldn't tell it. She felt that Lin Qingye was very immature in terms of emotions. You only think about yourself. Originally, he was chasing his wife to the crematorium for the second time, but they quickly reconciled after meeting for a few words. Didn't Jiang Yu really have no temper at all? Accept everything and forgive Lin Qingye in just a few words? She was so sad when she was used as a substitute by Lin Qingye (you said Lin Qingye was half-joking, but even if she said it, it could still be a joke, she had already caused harm to Jiang Yu), so why should she just let it go? It wasn't that she, Jiang Yu, couldn't live without Lin Qingye, but Lin Qingye couldn't live without Jiang Yu, which made Jiang Yu feel like he was cheating.

Please give it a good review. The author of Tomato Becomes Baili is considered to be top-notch. A female video article similar to a male video (only my personal opinion), with simple logic, popular language, clear theme, and a very fast pace. The author's previous post gave me a rough look. The following are recommendations from male channel readers ① Readers of male videos who have never watched female videos and want to try female videos, recommended, suitable for beginners ② Not recommended for male readers who have read female videos but are disgusted by female videos. Reason: There are many female video routines in it. ③ Readers of male videos who have read female videos and are not disgusted or indifferent. This is me. I recommend reading them when you are bored or have changed your style recently. For example, if you are tired of cool articles, you are too addicted to dramas, or you want to watch me change into a hundred + reborn to reduce purity. ④Others will be discussed separately

Overall, it is a good work, but the flaws are obvious. 1. In the process of writing, the explanation of the flow of time is a bit confusing, which makes it difficult to understand sometimes when one looks at another time period. 2. Maybe the author is tight on time, so the whole story is rushed. Although the foreshadowing is finished, the story feels like it is not finished. 3. It would be better if the author's description of emotional changes could be more detailed. I am Xiaoya who aspires to be a good book reviewer. Please forgive me if there is any offense.

The original one from Shen Yuan is really well written and has a lot of foreshadowing. When I first read it, I was very resistant to the plot of the soul traveling to a person in the novel world. I felt that there would be a sense of confusion about experiencing other people's lives, so I could understand Jiang Yu's choice to leave. I was also thinking about how the author would come back to this emotional setting that is difficult to bring back, until I saw it When all the mysteries are solved, everything suddenly makes sense. The plot is worth considering. It can be seen that the author has polished it very carefully. After searching for countless transformation articles and seeing countless rough and brainless white articles, it is really exciting to find such a book. I regret that I saw it so early and read it all in one night. My thoughts are: please add more! Not enough to watch!

Although this novel does not deserve 5 stars, I still gave it because it is Raisin. (I am not saying that I am biased, but I am comparing Raisin's previous novel with this novel) I've read "Twin Girls" countless times, so I'll start with my evaluation of this novel (save the comments): It's very good, except that the author's mentality collapsed at the end of the writing, which caused the plot to be awkward. It is indeed a standard novel about young white girls, and it is in the genre of cultivating immortals (of course, I still recommend the author's previous novel, and this novel is indeed better than the previous one). What follows is my detailed insight: I think one of the few highlights of this novel is its plot arrangement. For example, the memory and rebirth of Jiang Yu (the heroine) are really unexpected (after all, as a fairy tale, innovation is often what makes it interesting). Of course, the biggest and most important problem in this book is the author's mentality. (It's hard to say this, it's best to read it, especially at the end of the novel) Finally, let me summarize: this book is still interesting. As a lesbian writer, it has all the stickers it should have (there are a lot of them, but it is very stable). Except for a few minor flaws, it is still good. Also, raisins, join Aha, contribute your joy, you will make the messenger a joy

I have to say, because there are very few books that I have finished reading, this book can be said to be at the top of the books I have finished. As for the plot, it ranges from dull to tense. Although it is not superb, it can still be enjoyed with confidence. In terms of characters, both Jiang Yu and Lin Qingye left a very good impression on me, but can you give me a spin-off about You Qi? (I want to read this kind of salvation article) Finally, I still want to say something! Thank you to the author for bringing us such a wonderful world. I have always believed that the world in every novel exists, and the author just tells their story. Thank you.

What I like most about Raisin's books are two things. One is that the author insists on finishing the book even if he knows that the quality of the book may not meet expectations, which is very happy. The other is that the author will link up the characters of his previous book, so that it gives a nostalgic feeling of meeting old friends. This book is indeed not as good as the previous one, but in my opinion it is pretty good (I read half of it, and then I went to see Gu Baixue, and then finished the rest. The main reason was that I really lacked the desire to read on, but after seeing the linked characters, I came back to read the rest)

The imagined cliché crematorium and the bloody pursuit of the wife have not appeared (so far) Instead, there is a very rare mutual understanding and a two-way journey. After 100,000 words of paving the way, the relationship between the two smoothly and naturally turned on the right track before it caused an irreparable mistake. The writing is precise and easy to read, and the rhythm is perfect.

Well done, the only controversial point in this book is that Jiang was imprisoned by Lin for two or three hundred years, and his soul was broken by the play, but he finally got over it. To be honest, I thought he was going to torture me again (I personally think that I still need to be tortured here, otherwise it is really difficult to understand). The whole book is relatively sweet, and there is no knife. Be careful when watching, don't let the day pass by (finished in one day...)

I think the emotional line is still very delicately written. From the previous book, I have read a lot of articles about cultivating immortals. I feel that the author's writing about cultivating immortals is still lacking. It is a bit uncomfortable to watch. I feel that it would be more reasonable if it was changed to a martial arts background. The author's writing style is very good.

Compared with the author Shen Yuan's book, although the author said that he spent less energy on this book, he also used fewer knives. It is indeed worth reading. 1The plot is more daily than the previous one, with less ups and downs. Although the change in the emotional line is a bit abrupt, it has come full circle at least. In my opinion, it is better than the previous book. Here I would like to quote a comment: Harm is not fun. You will understand after reading the book. 2 The heroine is more likable than the previous one, Senior Sister, but this may be because I don't like reading sadistic stories. The protagonist waits for 200 years, which is a bit stiff. I feel that the author's writing power was not strong enough at that time. 3 I hope the author's articles will get better and better ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧

Okay, I am also a close reader of this book. Let me tell you. The two female protagonists are quite distinctive. The transition from hatred to love is not abrupt. There are some minor flaws in the plot, but they are all made to highlight the characters. When they are sweet, they are very sweet, and when they are sharp, they are very sharp.

Yes, it's pretty good. Those who say they accept You Qi and want to have a harem should go watch male videos. Do you understand Shuangjie? Do you understand Pure Love? Go watch male videos about your fantasy harem. Do you have to have a harem in pure love? It's really annoying, I recommend watching male videos!

This book and the previous one are both just beginning to read. To be honest, this one is not as well-written as the previous one. Compared with the previous one, this book has a lot of illogical logic and a lot of poisonous points. It has almost the same framework as the previous one. It doesn't matter to me, but it is really a bit discouraging for new readers. In addition, I feel that this book should be a be and it should be finished with 500,000 words. Please read it and cherish it.

The early stage (before 100,000 words) was not very good, but it became better and better later on. Mainly because of Jiang Yu's inner activities, I felt the same way. I also had similar experiences and similar entanglements. All in all, it's a good book and very interesting!

It's a good Lily Cultivation novel. The author's description of Cultivation is not very good, and the relationship between the protagonists is reasonable and unreasonable. However, the explanation at the end makes the cause and effect clear, which is okay.

The writing is really good. The reborn Jiang Yu is very sweet and warm. When combined with the plot of the heroine Lin Qingye being imprisoned and killed after being abused in her previous life, the novel has a unique flavor to read. It is very exciting. The background of the world of cultivating immortals is also well taken care of. The names of various places, exercises, and magic weapons all fit the background.

It's a very good book. It was very sweet in the early stages of reading, but in the later stage it felt so uncomfortable. I'm not a very advanced person, so I wanted to read some stories about Xiaotian and the two female protagonists [crying] Now these two are making me feel uncomfortable, but it's very well written! ! ! !

It's really well written. Holy shit, I've always watched "Bian Married" before. This is the first "Bian Bai" I've watched. I thought I wouldn't get used to it, but this book is really well written and I enjoyed reading it [shy]

The first part was still not to my liking, so I almost gave up because I wanted to see something sweet. In fact, I can give the character more wisdom. I hope to see delicate and gentle emotions, rather than the thoughts of a sensitive little girl who keeps everything in her heart. The level of the book is very high. It is the highest level of all the books I have read recently, and it is far ahead. The echoes and contrasts between the plot and the details of the content all reflect the high level of creation. The plot is also concise and complete. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it, and it is by no means a large-scale hydrology.

Let's give it 7 points, it's a level that can be seen. It is not easy to write a book. There are many inexplicable plots in the article. It feels like the writing is as if there is no outline. From the middle on, it is a bit unclear. Every thought comes out.

I have finished the previous book, I really like it. The author returned my tears and made me cry while reading it. I will continue to read this book. The previous book is finished, and I can only imagine in my mind that they will return to modern times and get back together, ah ah ah ah ah, it seems like I'm watching ah ah ah ah [I'm about to cry]

The author's writing style is really good. He is my favorite author. I like to keep up the good work. In fact, the author's emotional descriptions are particularly delicate. That is, there are relatively few descriptions of fighting in Xiu Xian's novels.

It's so beautiful that I must support it, but can the author use less tools? Shen Yuan originally said that I am stupid if you want to give me a knife [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I like it very much, especially the part about whether you like my body or my soul.

Well written. And it's not the same pattern that I'm tired of seeing, I like it even more.

The whole book looks good, and the world setting is strange, but the rest of the book doesn't look particularly amazing, especially the explanation of the first reincarnation is not very clear. Overall it's a good book.

I finished watching it at 4 a. M., My heart and the muscles in my hands were aching [crying], it was so beautiful! ! ! [Like] I'm following the author's new book

Look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good, look good