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This is one of the more exquisite books in Tomato. But it seems like they said they were going to close it down. Change the platform and kick it.

Personally, I think part of the reason for the low rating is that the author explains too much, which sometimes makes it uncomfortable to read. However, I like this kind of novel with less violence, and the logic is reasonable, so I won't be able to put it down after reading it. Come on [Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript][Working on the manuscript]

I think it's quite to my liking. It's a family story, and it's written in great detail. As the author said, the protagonist's improvement in strength is traceable and can be felt personally. It's not the numbness of Shuangwen's strength-increasing style (although it's really cool), nor is it the Wulinggen waste wood flow (I can't say that there are no good articles, but it's really hard to find that kind of quality, and I personally don't like the kind that has too many early hardships) or the family nanny flow. There is really no need for Chun Chun to fly with the family. There is also the longevity flow, which has a lot of emotions, but lacks a bit of flavor, maybe because we can't live forever, after all there are limitations. Regarding my feelings about this book, I think it can be rated 8.7-8.8 Now. Although not many people have persisted in reading this book, I have read a lot. After reading it, I felt that it met the ending in my heart and ended it. Or it would be a pity to keep it until it suddenly tastes boring and throw it away. After reading a lot of refreshing articles, it is good to have a little more brains🧠. The details are remarkable. For example, the impressive ones are that the qi-training monks of the Nascent Soul Sect are called human beings. I think this is a change in the pattern; and the logic of the composition of the killer organization is very well written, giving low-level monks a way out and making a lot of money. For high-level monks, who would refuse an organization that obtains information and has multiple vests? I hope that the story will be stronger in the later period, and the layout will be larger. Others can plot the protagonist to break the situation, or the protagonist can plot. Strength and strategy coexist, which will be wonderful. I have read the latest chapter of "Blood Killing Secret Realm". The layout and breakthroughs are indeed very good, but I am looking forward to a more amazing plot, with twists and turns and far-reaching plans. The kind of story that readers can remember for a long time, passionate and interconnected, the author's plot in the atmosphere, I really want to see it!

Although I just watched it, I rarely see good and self-defeating settings in Tomato. Be encouraged! There are too many various settings introduced, which is a bit annoying. The detailed introduction of realm, cultivation and other settings makes the plot incoherent and difficult to watch. It might be better to correct this problem.

It's good to read. This is the best family fairy tale I've ever read on Tomato. It's not too toxic and has no cliche plot. It's well written. Especially since this book seems to have multiple female protagonists, it is particularly well received. I really can't understand the story about family cultivating immortals. A man would like a female protagonist without a female protagonist. Is this still a man's story? Is this still a family story? Which man doesn't want to have several women? That's just limited by modern laws and the wallet in his pocket. From ancient times to the present, many saints have been unable to avoid it. Those who don't have a single female protagonist should be female channels.

It's pretty good-looking, and there's really nothing poisonous about it. I heard the author say in the chapter that many people don't like the heroine, but I think it's pretty good. It's not like talking about powerful heroines in classic novels, or heroines with particularly deep backgrounds. It feels more realistic. It's also more relevant. Maybe my cultural level is not high and I don't know how to express myself. I prefer something that is tangible and tangible, and it doesn't give people a dreamy feeling. The overall experience of the protagonist is also down-to-earth. I like the writing very much. Finally, cheers for the author! ! !

The basic writing style of the whole article is solid and logical, the plot is mediocre, has no ups and downs, and is not very exciting. It seems like reading a daily novel. It can barely be called excellent, and the various details are perfect. However, the whole article feels too bland to me, and it feels like reading a daily novel. Other mortals cultivating immortals is somewhat enjoyable, but not too boring. Although there are almost no boring ups and downs in the whole book, it is better because of its solid writing skills and complete system and details. It is very stable, but it is also very dull.

Five-star praise. To be honest, the score is low. The details of the characters are considered above average. The cruelty of the world of immortality is written out. The evaluation is four stars. The combat power has not collapsed. 4 And a half stars. There is no heroine in the front. The character of the protagonist is calm and not as speechless as Tang. Five stars. The overall evaluation should be around 9.2-9.3.

For the time being, it seems that the writing is quite good, and the comments are also very good. Looking at the detailed comments, it can be seen that the author is writing seriously. I give it a good review.

It's okay. I think the real score is above 8.8, And the author also added a lot of explanations in the novel. You can see the author's intentions and it's very comfortable to read😌😌. I hope the author can update more.

One thing to say, the content is very rigorous and the author's writing style is very good. Although it is a slow family development novel, it does not make people feel boring. He also listens carefully to the readers' opinions. I have been reading novels for almost ten years. There are not many novels that are so eye-catching and attractive. I guess it will be popular, but there are not enough to read! ! ! ! ! ! ! Can the author add a few more chapters [I'm about to cry]

The tenth issue of irregular evaluation: Half Immortal Grass Advantages: Strictly speaking, this book can be called a fairy tale of tomato immortality. The setting is strict and reasonable, and the description is rigorous and comfortable. It is suitable for those who like traditional immortality, semi-group portraits and step-by-step novels. It is very comfortable to read and recommended. Disadvantages: It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it, and has made explanations and annotations in various places, but it is indeed somewhat redundant, or it affects the perception. After all, no one likes to read several paragraphs while reading. Some explanations can only prevent some people from making mistakes or are meaningless. For example, the three casual cultivators who visited the city and became permanent residents became stewards. It is really unnecessary to explain it here. What I said above is really because writing a novel is a long-term job. You can't do it all at once, then falter or end up exhausted. There is no need to explain too much about some unnecessary things. In other words, make notes, note 1, note 2, and then put them at the end of the chapter for explanation. After I wrote it yesterday, I thought about it again and again, and I feel that I still need to say it again, to encourage the author, and to say more good things. After all, it is rare for authors to update three times a day. Advantages: grass jelly. This book is worth reading for book lovers who like cultivating immortals and family. There are really too few books like Tomato, especially this kind of traditional cultivating immortality novels that have been upgraded little by little. The descriptions are very popular. I have been shopping on Tomato for so long and found two traditional immortality novels without obvious poisonous points. This one is more popular and will have a larger audience. It is also the fairy grass in the immortality novels. The author has also devoted a lot of effort and effort. It is worth reading. Points for improvement: Strictly speaking, the shortcomings of this book are nothing. I can only mention two points that some people may take seriously. The first is the protagonist Taoist couple, because the early description may be annoying to some readers, but don't worry, the protagonist will not lick her in the later stages of growth, and the author may have intentionally weakened her, so that at least she doesn't have much to read now, and it doesn't affect any perception. The second thing is that everyone often says that the author spends a lot of time on explanations that don't matter, but that's just for the early viewing. By the beginning of chapter 60 or 70, there's basically no such thing, and it's all placed at the end, so it doesn't matter. I've said everything that needs to be said. As for the poisonous points or shortcomings mentioned by others, it's up to you to judge for yourself. Seeing that so far, there are only ten books recommended in book reviews, this one is really worth reading.

It's really nice. In fact, I personally don't like group portraits, but this book is really good. It's not as direct as Shuangwen, but it's just the top. It's pretty good. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Don't be too eunuch and don't end it. It's OK [Sending Hearts]

It's a bit long-winded, but! ! ! It's getting better and better later on. It's a very good fairy tale novel. It doesn't have any disgusting plot. I didn't expect to see this kind of thing in Tomato. It's cool later and it's great. Keep up the good work [laughing][laughing]

At present, it seems that the work is relaxed, and the daily updates are acceptable. I am satisfied. I hope the author can stick to it and don't give up halfway. I would like to give you a five-star encouragement.

Yes, the logic is clear and the writing is excellent. I deliberately added more because I was afraid that new readers would not understand. The author is still very active. [Like][Like][Like]

I give it five stars! It's definitely a work with attitude, thumbs up! In terms of plot, it is neither bloody nor clichéd, and the logic is rigorous. The world view of the novel is reasonably constructed, and the author is constantly improving the details. I guess the author may be a fan of Master Road.

Personally, I think it is very good. The characters are written with flesh and blood. In addition to the most important thing in the world of immortality, the supremacy of strength, the pseudo-rules of the world of immortality (the rules of Nascent Soul vs. Jindan, Jindan vs. Foundation) and the game of the same level of forces (not a palace fight with no nutrition) are written very realistically.

To be honest, among the novels I have read for so many years, this book has no loopholes in its logic. It has all the pitfalls that should be buried. The characters are three-dimensional and the plot is compact. Although you can roughly guess the follow-up, it is full of sincerity.

In my opinion, this book is very rigorous in Tomato. There is no brainless plot and the quality of fairy grass. I hope the author will continue to maintain it!

It is a rare traditional fairy tale with a world view and excellent writing. It is very comfortable to read even without a system. The author handles the plot well and is not cliche and casual. It has been well received and I hope you will continue to update it! It's toxic, but it doesn't hide its flaws

It's okay, it's a bit traditional fantasy. Maybe I've read too many cool articles. In fact, it's not bad for the author to let the protagonist have fun occasionally. It's a climax of the plot [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more] [Please update more] Updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates Explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's ok, it's my favorite type, and it's well written, but the protagonist's abilities should be written in a more systematic way. Various branch abilities under a large framework, instead of looking for a skill here or a magical power. I wrote that there are currently no supporting magical powers and spells for Pure Yang Body, and there is no complete set of physical development around it.

Regarding family cultivation, this book will most likely rank first. There may be room for improvement in describing the scenery and laying out the artistic conception. There are no shortcomings in other aspects. So far, I have not skipped a word in this book. I feel that as long as there is no interference from some "readers" (except some fools, and maybe competitors), this book will pass the nine points.

This novel about cultivating immortals has reasonable data and self-consistent logic. Each family has its own wisdom for survival, and even a monster group has its own way of continuation. It is in line with the natural survival of the fittest and the survival of the fittest, and it also has its own wisdom for survival. Don't brag or be slanderous, if you keep it up it will definitely be a rare and rare wine

The content is good, the plot and story are quite reasonable, and the author's explanation is a bit too much. If you haven't read this kind of immortality novel before, it is suitable for consumption. The updates are also quite stable, three updates a day, 10,000 words, not bad [like][like]

It is a very good book about family cultivation. The author's writing is very logical. Many places have easy-to-understand explanations. For new readers, it is a novel that can be read without thinking. The author will lay it out for you. For old bookworms, this is a novel of rare quality. It is not brainless, has logic and ideas, and can be read with confidence. This kind of book tomato is quite rare, take a look and cherish it

The reading is smooth, the protagonist has a clear personality, and the plot arrangement is relatively reasonable. In terms of combat effectiveness, the increase in the fire attribute of the spirit body has not been shown currently. It is basically described as a benefit to the basic realm. I hope this aspect can be strengthened.

It's not toxic and very realistic. The most important thing is that the author has a very upright attitude and writes this book very seriously. It would be better if it could be updated five times a day It's a pity that it's blocked

So far, it looks okay. The author's theory and system of the novel about cultivating immortals are solid. The plot is advanced step by step, and the update progress is fast and guaranteed without being blindly aggressive. However, I feel that the character creation of the protagonist or supporting characters does not have many distinctive features, and the details are slightly lacking.