The Illusory Path to Immortality

The author's writing is quite good, and the plot is okay, but there are a lot of typos, and the sentences are not smooth and confusing, so I lost interest in reading it.

It has the flavor of a fairy tale, and I especially like the creation of characters, it's great [smile][smile]

The further I go, the better my writing style, and the characters are, 👍👍👍

I haven't watched a traditional fairy tale for a long time, hahahaha, I suddenly thought it was very interesting.

It feels like what I see is that both the protagonist and the author are growing up, step by step from the beginning to the present.

The concept is very good and the writing is good. So far I haven't given up [learned]

After the plot unfolds later, it looks really good 😄😄

Keep up the good work, the novel is very interesting

There are no shortcuts to the real article of cultivating immortality, only one step at a time 👍👍👍

Each character has his or her own characteristics, so far it's okay, I hope it won't be unfinished