(No system + stand-in messenger + rebirth + jokes + single female protagonist Xing Ye)
(This is my first time writing a book, so I will update it as I see fit. Please bear with me if there are any mistakes)
Li Ming (tentative name) was reborn in the world of Star Railway in an accident, but the tragedy is that he took the place of Boss Ni (Diavolo) and suffered the fate of reincarnation and death. The only good thing is that he got the boss's stand-in [Crimson King] and all his battle memories.
The only thing that can reverse his fate is the [Insect Arrow] that exists somewhere in the universe, and he will survive under the name "Diavolo"
Reader comments
If Xing and Diavolo were together many years later, when Xing knew that Diavolo had a daughter,
False Star: What? You even have a daughter? You actually deceived my feelings, hum, I will ignore you.
Real Star: Husband? Like it more. [Sinister smile]
The description of the battle (Battle of Bucciaratin) is very good, and the daily plot is also okay, but some specific names (simply put, the relationship and emotional control between the characters are not particularly good, sometimes making the plot seem abrupt) and the characterization of the plot are not enough.
The author still has to keep writing [blowing kiss]
If Xing and Diavolo were together many years later, when Xing knew that Diavolo had a daughter, False Star: What? You even have a daughter? You actually deceived my feelings, hum, I will ignore you. Real Star: Husband? Like it more. [Sinister smile]
The description of the battle (Battle of Bucciaratin) is very good, and the daily plot is also okay, but some specific names (simply put, the relationship and emotional control between the characters are not particularly good, sometimes making the plot seem abrupt) and the characterization of the plot are not enough. The author still has to keep writing [blowing kiss]
Cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool, cool