Show Off, and Then Meet a Cold Female Boss

Although it seems to have nothing to do with the main plot of Conan at present, it is also good to read as a suspense novel. I look forward to the follow-up. By the way, is the heroine Xiao Ai or Nakajima? I personally like Nakajima stocks, there are too many female leads in Xiao Ai, let's try something new.

I don't give a score of 10 to a book I wrote myself.

I watched half of it, 5 points! The disadvantage is that it is slow, and it is like a torture for me to learn English. The other one is that he doesn't know the heroine and hopes not to speculate in stocks. Although I may be a bit of a scumbag in reality, it's okay to be single and ambiguous. After confirming the relationship, I have to be more specific. If I buy stocks, I will study with my female boss! Although it feels like Xiao Ai, after all, Chapter 0 is Xiao Ai Wouldn't it be better if this book was separated from the Conan worldview? I don't know, but from some details I think, such as the special scene in trance, it has a very cinematic feel, the author's writing is fluent, and he also likes to dig holes, such as where is your money, where is your father, etc. It's great The author can try to create a world of his own

The writing is quite good. I have seen many Conan fans who cannot write case reasoning, but it is rare to encounter a Conan fan who focuses on the case. The writing style is very visual, and the case will not be boring. At present, it is a qualified mystery novel. The protagonist has been portrayed quite well without being involved in the relationship network of Conan's protagonist group. However, the part that belongs to the Conan fandom has not yet begun, and I look forward to the plot after it is integrated into the original plot.

The previous little plot is very good, and the portrayal of Nakajima Yukino's character is also okay, at least not annoying (the protagonist does not look like a maniac when he sees a woman). Of course, I would not recommend Shiho, and Shiho is the best. If it is a female protagonist, I still like Shiho. Maybe many friends will be bored and tired of watching it. I feel that the key is that there is no good quality heroine Xiao Ai's Ke It's caused by too many humanities in Nantong (to be honest, most of the female protagonists written about them are just the same. The novels I read basically don't have female protagonists. Of course, I have collected most of the heroines of Xiao Ai. I like Xiao Ai so much, but, I have to take a break after reading for a while. Those books describe the protagonists in the same way). If there are good fan novels and the female protagonist is Xiao Ai, I feel that the results will definitely be good. As for my feelings about the author's description technique after reading the author's comments, there are only two words, awesome. I feel that the biggest advantage of that description method is the character description. Basically, there will be no stupid plot. The plot will be extended with the characters as the core and anchored by the outline (this is how I understand it). I feel that the biggest feature is the characterization, which is really popular. Come on, author, the heroine Shiho is the best. Of course, both Nakajima and Shiho have ways to ensure that the characters do not collapse. I will tell you my thoughts. For example, Nakajima, the heroine Shiho, is a pure boss, just like the girl in the first part of "Welcome to the Supremacy of Strength Classroom" (I forgot her name, I feel that the character is pure The heroine is not a heroine as we understand it, but a heroine in a female video, a character who has the same protagonist template as the male protagonist). We can arrange a growth template for her to become another protagonist and grow up with our male protagonist. Then Shiho will be an undoubted girl. Hehehehehehehe. If Nakajima is the heroine, Shiho will become Haibara as an adopted daughter. Although it is said that this daughter is a childhood sweetheart, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha (tell me why the male protagonist and Haibara feel similar to Conan Xiaolan in this situation, an illusion, it must be an illusion) Undoubtedly, the former method may be better to develop Nakajima as the protagonist. Of course, these are suggestions. The author should not write too much. After all, I have only found two good-looking Conan fanfics, and both of them have no heroines. One has hundreds of thousands of words and has about 300 chapters. One of them has been discontinued (I don't like to read discontinued books and completed books). Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you.

It's pretty good. I support the author. I hope the heroine is Shiho and has a childhood sweetheart setting. I don't know if Shiho is still smaller in this book, and I really hope that the protagonist will not recognize that Conan is Shinichi, because many Conan fandoms now write about the protagonist knowing that Conan is Shinichi, and also knowing the identity of the phantom thief and learning the disguise technique from Kidd or cooperating with the phantom thief.

It's well written. I hope Nakajima is the heroine. Xiao Ai is a bit tired from having too many heroines.

At present, it is not enough as a Conan fan (there are very few plots related to Conan), but as an independent mystery novel, I am willing to give it a high score.

[Shy] This is my first time reading a Conan fanfic. The author's plot is really interesting, and the protagonist looks like me. He doesn't usually dress up much but has a natural charm that exudes. His words and deeds always attract girls to look back. I am often surrounded by a group of fangirls fighting for me. However, I have no interest in these boring feelings and wholeheartedly pursue the road of power. I don't think there is any need to mention the blood and sweat in the process, because to me it is like a paved road and I just need to keep moving forward. My friends around me always say that I look like Jotaro, but I think he may be imitating me. There is nothing that can hinder me on my path, because there are very few opponents in this world who can cheer me up. [Shy][shy][shy]

A very good novel, especially the reasoning part, where you can feel the author's plot control and persistence in details. And at present, it seems that the author is borrowing Conan's world view to create a new story, and it is a good story. The plot of the first volume is excellent, with clues and clues running through it. It is a good story worth savoring. But I still have some problems while reading. The first is that the distinction between the original names is not very high. At the end of the first volume, even though I read slowly and am familiar with Japanese culture, there were several times when I couldn't match the characters with the cases and went back to find them. For readers who are used to fast-paced reading, There will be a certain reading threshold (I hope that later readers can try to think while reading, at least they need to understand the truth of the case after the author explains it, otherwise they will lose more than half of the fun of the book. It is better not to think hard about the puzzles. This threshold is too high, and I sincerely admire the author's wonderful ideas). The second is transition. In fact, it can be seen that the author likes "silky" transitions and seamless transitions. However, the information-carrying capacity of text is too low compared to visual information. Such transitions will be confusing at first glance. Perhaps some markers can be used to allow readers to respond to the transition. The third point is actually somewhat similar to the first point, that is, there are too many and complicated characters. The deletion of some characters' scenes will not greatly affect the fullness of the plot, but now it will make people a little confused and affect the reading experience. But overall, it is still a very good book. The plot, characterization, and description are all excellent. Good luck to the author💪💪💪!

An interesting Conan fan. It doesn't stick to the plot of the original work at the beginning, which is a bonus. The first volume also maintains Conan's style of "the answer is on the surface of the mystery" throughout the whole process. All the characters appear in the text and are more logical than the original Conan work (laughs). The murderers' committing crimes follow the unique literary style of detective films and are not lacking in drama. The above are the advantages of writing whatever comes to mind. The disadvantage is that Officer Nakajima's emotional line is indeed relatively flat. As a mature woman who has escaped the flat-chested curse of the fanfic "Yukino", you have to stand up (make a fist)

Writer, The number of words in your assignment is not enough, and the updates are also unstable. You have to change your attitude towards homework. Read

This is an excellent fanfic that is not very related to Conan's own cases. The author Sang is an excellent story constructor. He does a great job of stringing together seemingly unrelated cases. Please cheer him!

The update is too slow. The book that was published in September last year has only been updated to 100,000 words.

Good news is found in a good book, bad news is a seedling

The plot design of the case is pretty good. The characters speak and do things, and the character image and social environment created are more like those in China. There is no need to forcefully use Ming Ke's skin. It feels very disconnected. It would be better if it was simply set in China, or similar to a domestic case-solving story.

It's pretty good. The author is really attentive. So far, the plot design is quite reasonable. But relatively speaking, the relationship progresses a bit too fast. The overly complicated puzzles and reasoning process are also a bit boring for people like me. I hope I can save Mingmei, or even take her in. It would be better

The plot is innovative, and it is not just about following Conan's butt to solve crimes. The protagonist's character is well written. As for the heroine, I'm optimistic about the protagonist and her boss. Although Shiho has very few scenes at the moment, the article also stated that he and Shiho have known each other since childhood, and it is revealed between the lines that he is interested in the protagonist. I hope there won't be any emotional outbursts in the future.

Five stars but can you post the big cover?

There are not many Conan fans who can create original cases.

Good luck, good luck, I hope Shura Field will come as soon as possible [laughing evilly]

Just curious who the heroine is? Both people are very good

If the author were to open a small theater alone, it would undoubtedly be a chapter with a score of 9.9, But most tomatoes are impatient. If everyone had read the first volume, at least the book review would have a score of 8.5. However, it is indeed slow to update, almost to the point of death, because when a large chapter like Conan fanfiction has nothing to do with the original text, the only meaning is the interaction between the protagonist and Nakajima. Summary: The climax at the end of the volume is too late. Maybe with more emotional lines (whether it is Haiyuan or Nakajima), there will be many fewer people who keep books (abandon books). The most important thing is to hope that the author will update more and faster.

Although I haven't written much so far, it's still relatively good-looking. I hope the author can keep updating in the future.

An article with a good writing style and an appropriate distance from the original work [currently in preparation]

It's pretty good. Although I don't know how to cut into the plot of Conan, I still have to choose something. The heroine is not determined yet, but it still seems possible.

It turns out to be an original plot about solving a crime, which is a bit interesting, and the case is very thoughtfully written. The protagonist is Shiho Miyano's childhood sweetheart. He was born in an orphanage. His adoptive father was a detective who disappeared. After graduating from college, he was admitted to the police force. He has no idea about the original plot of Conan. What a pity eunuch. . . The beginning of the third case is not well written, and it violates a taboo of detective novels. The narration in which the deceased's daughter appeared gave a false description. The daughter was worried that her mother's description was actually false? ? ? As a result, it felt ridiculous when the real murderer pointed at his daughter later. The language and demeanor can be true or false, but the narration and description in detective novels must be true. If you write a false one, it will give people a bad impression. . . Can you please change the previous paragraph of the narration? In fact, the case is well compiled. Original text: In the distance, intermittent barking came from several brightly lit villas. She hesitated for a moment and chose to cover her ears with her hands. She hates dogs, she hates the group of wealthy businessmen nearby who think they are superior, and she even hates her mother, who considers herself a new rich and chooses to abandon her ancestral home and move here. But I have been unable to contact my mother recently. As a last resort, she had no choice but to put aside her grudge, and after finishing reviewing the first draft of the paper, she came here from Dongda University.

It's really amazing that you can combine the case with the main plot without being abrupt. As long as you maintain this level, author, I will keep following you for updates. Just check for yourself and see if there are not enough updates [shy][shy]

This book is very good-looking. The only flaw is that the author is too slow in updating. He only writes 1 or 2 pictures a day. What do you do with it? [Anger]

Still very beautiful