When Naruto returned from Dragon Ball and brought some "souvenirs":
Facing the Otsutsukiura style, Naruto and Sasuke danced a strange dance, becoming one, and their combat power increased dramatically.
Metkai opened the seventh gate, exploded again, and kicked out a blow that surpassed the eighth gate.
Reader comments
I can't say how well written it is, but the subject matter is good.
A suggestion: After all, I am looking forward to merging with Sasuke as mentioned in your introduction and becoming Uchiha Naruto and Uzumaki Sasuke. Let Sasuke practice Qi as soon as possible.
I have seen the latest chapter, and so far there are no problems except that the character is too different from the original work and the setting of Kaio Fist is confusing.
It looks good and I like to write it quickly! ! ! !
I can't say how well written it is, but the subject matter is good. A suggestion: After all, I am looking forward to merging with Sasuke as mentioned in your introduction and becoming Uchiha Naruto and Uzumaki Sasuke. Let Sasuke practice Qi as soon as possible.
I have seen the latest chapter, and so far there are no problems except that the character is too different from the original work and the setting of Kaio Fist is confusing.
It looks good and I like to write it quickly! ! ! !