Blue Sky and Dark Rain

I have watched the first case now. It's quite good-looking, with smooth logic and smooth writing, without the clichés that are common in online suspense stories. But there are some shortcomings that I hope the author will pay attention to in the next book. One is frequent flashbacks, such as "At this time, what xx said echoed in his mind." Novels are different from film and television dramas, and text is different from images. Flashbacks in film and television dramas have a visual impact, so they can make people immerse themselves in the emotional shock of the characters. However, the impact of text is much weaker, so only using it once or twice in the most critical places is enough. There are a lot of flashbacks in the article, and they are often divided into long paragraphs, especially the part where Li Yi and his son met Ye He for the first time. It is repeated several times. Not only does it not have an emotional impact on people, but it will dilute the original tension and sense of substitution because it is too wordy and lengthy, disrupting the narrative rhythm. Another is that there is no interval between frequent scene switches. For example, at the very least, large blank lines, symbols, scene transition prompts, etc. Often the previous sentence is still talking about A and the next sentence jumps to B, but the author has no obvious distinction prompt, and people always have to be stunned for a few seconds before they realize that this is a scene change. In short, I feel that the author likes to use the expression techniques in film and television dramas. Maybe when he was writing, he had presented it in the way of film and television dramas, but he forgot that readers cannot see the pictures. Readers can't directly see the scene changes you make on the screen, and your frequent flashbacks are not just one or two very informative shots on the screen, but long and repeated paragraphs of text. This results in the fact that the content of the book itself is not bad, but it always feels strange when reading it. There are also some minor language problems that can be avoided with more checks in the future. All in all, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. It is a rare good suspense novel on Tomato. The story style has its own characteristics, and the inner shaping of the characters is not just superficial. I hope the author will continue to work hard in the future and look after you [blowing kiss]

It's a very good book. The logic is clear and the most important thing is that there is little nonsense. It's worth reading.

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There are very few people who write criminal investigation reasoning seriously in Tomato and it is very difficult. Good luck, author.

It's very beautiful. The first Ye He attracted me extremely. It's also a pity, and I hope he can live the life he longs for in the future.