HP Miss Heartbreaker and Ambitious Boy Riddle

It's great. Someone finally suppressed Riddle. Many book heroines either supported him or had the same goal. Anyway, no one fought back against him. I like how the heroine has stimulated and deviated from Riddle's expectations many times, including the fact that the heroine's own values are similar to mine. She is not a virgin, but also humane and kind. And the grades are good, and the inner activities are normal, that is, the thoughts are not too out of the ordinary, and it does not make people feel dark. I have no suggestions for the work. It is enough for the author to continue to maintain the current state. It's beautiful. Please come and interact with me. It feels so deserted😁

The old enemy CP is too easy to beat! ! ! ! ! ! Riddle, who is emotionally cold, is hard to get emotional to begin with. The author has done a great job in shaping his character, which is very appropriate. He is vicious, arrogant and inferior, cold-blooded and lonely, longing for love but despising love. It is rare and valuable to have an old enemy who can accompany him, whether it is love or not. Even an old enemy has become a powerful medicine to heal him. It is better for two people to compete with each other than to move forward alone. He pretended to everyone, but would reveal his anger in front of her. Two people will guard each other, fight each other, secretly observe each other's performance, compete with each other, and lock each other in a sea of ​​people. He would see her boasting without hiding his smile, and would unreasonably demand that she not leave him behind. Will hear her accident looking for her location with a blank expression. She will uncover his scars, she knows his vicious thoughts, she will be with him but she will still choose to save him. I'm looking forward to the day when Riddle realizes that he is emotional. The author must write it well. I have high expectations for you. We must continue to shape Riddle well!

It's really good to read. The author's psychological description is very delicate. He narrates and comments from the perspective of the heroine, which makes the whole story full of cold humor. Haha. The tone of the entire article is cold, but there are always some flickering warm spots under some detailed descriptions. It is very comfortable to read, like reading a heavy but interesting memoir next to the fireplace in the Slytherin lounge. By the way, I want to ask, is the character of Charles the second male lead? The main reason is that I really like this character. After all, Tom is a bit too dark, and the heroine I think is actually a kind-hearted and awkward little eagle hhh, and she is also very smart. I really like the author's Ove. I hope my wife will give Charles a good ending (?) I really can't control this kind of character. I also look forward to the subsequent love and death between my daughter and Tom hahhh

I feel like Riddler's portrayal has a more normal growth pattern compared to other books, rather than being born a super hero (I'm fed up with those villain settings like super heroes), so Tom, the bad boy with bad nature, is particularly cute. The heroine is also very special. It is rare to have a normal outlook on life. The mutual understanding between the heroine and her mother gradually increases, which makes people feel warm in their hearts. The characters are very comprehensive, from family to classroom to dormitory. Charles is also my favorite character. The calm little lion who looks the same on the inside is really cute.

Written in the style of a life memoir, the plot is smooth and natural, and some relevant magical knowledge appears from time to time. The heroine is a native wizard, unlike other books where the heroine travels through time. Da Da is very good at character creation, and the characters are vivid and three-dimensional. This is the most satisfying book I have read so far. It is basically impeccable. If you like this type of book, you can read it with your eyes closed. [Full]

It's great. Although the CP is Tom, it's not like other novels where it only revolves around Tom all day long. At the same time, he portrayed the characters very vividly, which is in line with the colors that should be expected for this age. Mainly the characters' personalities and the language are very interesting. I think the author wrote it superbly

It is a first-person perspective novel in the original style. It does not have the problem of overly focusing on love and not focusing on the characters. The writing style is also very good and it is refreshing and enjoyable to read. . . It's just because there are so few people that the ratings are confusing. The old enemy is going to become his wife!

It's not OOC at all. It's a very good book. It has a superb sense of fatal pull between old enemies. Both sides want to put the other to death. There was no groveling, kneeling and licking Riddle, and then having a sadistic love affair. Or maybe he is arrogant and thinks he can change Riddle, and then falls in love with OOC. Moreover, the abnormal love of my parents was very good. They could not give me too much love and care. They were stubborn and could not express themselves. It felt like a wet coat to me.

To be honest, it's really hard for me to come across an HP article that makes me follow it for so long. But this book written by the author is different from any book I have read before. The heroine did not appear in the world for redemption or to meet Riddle. She has her own parents, family, and complicated relationship changes with her roommates. Everyone is very real in the author's writing. The heroine will long for her mother's hug and feel overwhelmed by her ability to read minds. She came to this world, she came to us, not for someone, but to be herself. The author jumped out of the original plot of HP, so readers can see the huge magical world through the text. Not only is it magnificent and magical, but also how terrifying the decaying society is. There is strong oppression (school bullying, etc.), And there is also silent resistance (Ernie, he really made me cry to death!) Personally, I hope that fan fiction is not just about taking readers through the plot, nor is it just about satisfying readers' regrets, but it is about enriching the characters and the world in the book. It is to attract more people to know and fall in love with HP. Finally, I would like to praise the author's writing power, it is terrifyingly strong! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

It's nice to read, and the author's writing is very smooth. There are no logical contradictions and it's not embarrassing. The writing is quite comfortable to read. Unlike other HPs I've seen before, it's either very awkward or seriously OOC, and it feels like it's covered in skin.

Can I say, it's really well written! ! ! ! ! There are no emotions that come out of nowhere, all emotions are traceable, whether it is family, friendship or love. The male and female protagonists (especially the female protagonist) have independent personalities and thinking, and the characters in the book are very full. If you like sapiosexuality, please read it, why is it so rated! ! ! !

Nice! ! [Blowing Kiss] The theme of the heroine being a born Legilimency is really novel, and the scene opposite Riddle is also exciting. The character has no OOC, (personal feeling) the madness of Riddler is completely written, and the rivalry between the two is also very strong. Instead of taking the traditional redemption route, both parties have become enemies (at present, they are evenly matched in strength~), and I am looking forward to the plot in the future (How can the enemy be the wife? How can the wife be the enemy? Hehehe [shy])

It's really beautiful! I don't know if it's because there are so few people, why the rating is so low. There is a sense of dry humor and ridicule that I like very much and is very rare... Highly recommended.

It's great to watch! The writing is exquisite, the characters are vivid and concrete, and Riddle is particularly suitable for the personality. He is indeed the kind of ambitious and vicious arrogant little boy, but he is still a child, so he still longs to be loved and cared about. Eve also seems to be unable to express her emotions normally due to her family and being born a heartbreaker. Also, because heartbreakers are affected by other people's thoughts and emotions, it is difficult to distinguish whether the emotions they generate are self-generated. So I have been using her father's words as a standard to judge whether I am normal. Ou Fu's father is the only person in the family who can express love normally (Ou Fu is a bit like a calm genius psychopath. I like this character very much! And her silent complaints in her heart are sometimes very dark humor) (♥∀♥) But the progress is really slow. Has the author ever thought about how many chapters it will take to finish the book? Please update! Finally, there are Ove and Charles who are looking for the if line. Eve feels like a piece of ice soaked in water🧊, the kind that stays at zero but doesn't melt away easily, a rational Ravenclaw, a person who is almost driven crazy but is calm and rational at that critical point, and there are other things that pull her, an absolute genius (see the article) Off Duan read the same book as Riddle, but he discovered things that he had not thought of, and the ideas and innovations he put forward were better than him. She also said it was because of intuition. Riddle looked so jealous that she was so jealous. I was very happy. This is a genius! Off, please hit him more･◡･), Enjoying and pursuing knowledge, the pursuit of these makes her feel like she is dancing with the wonderful knowledge itself, but because of her talent (this is a double-edged sword, those who don't know are not guilty, but she who is forced to know more will always have to mix it out of sensibility? Or other messy reasons) I almost drove Oufu crazy. A rational and calm madman is a genius!! But Oufu makes me feel like she is not crazy in the general sense, but a rational and genius girl with a bit of mental illness (∀) The so-called genius means Oufu. I like you, Oufu🥰❤️❤️

It's very interesting. I don't know how the author wrote it. I prefer Charles and the heroine. Voldemort hopes that he can grow and change alone, discover the bright spots in the world and shine alone, without falling in love, and start his own career. Later, he and the heroine Charles will become spiritual friends and rivals, sympathetic to each other but guarding against each other. This will feel good.

God, I hope I can keep writing this book. I like this setting so much. This book is so in line with my taste. Oh my god, it has the feeling of a foreign masterpiece. Reading other Tomato books is a kind of pure reading. Reading famous books has a feeling of enjoyment. This book gives me the feeling that I am enjoying reading.

Super super pretty! ! ! ! (●ơ ₃ ơ)❤ I haven't seen such an interesting and novel article in a long time. I really like it😍I hope I can keep updating. The author must work hard. It's really beautiful, I recommend everyone to watch it! ! ! ! !

It's so beautiful that I can't think of any words to describe it [face covering]. It's really to my liking. I suggest the author directly update it to tens of thousands of chapters to become a legend in HP [cool]

I really feel that this book deserves 9 points or more. The description is great, delicate and elegant. When reading, you will have a wonderful feeling of being immersed in water. It fits the character, I hope the author will give her best [love] [send heart]

It's pretty good, but I feel like the author was a little slow in writing the big emotional lines, but the content is really high quality [Sending my heart]

Very, very good It's rare to see Tom like this. He had a great time eating. An old enemy is an old enemy. An old enemy cannot become a wife~ (Chanting)

I feel that the heroine is very intelligent and calm, the writing is very delicate, the characters' psychology and emotions are well portrayed, and the characters are vivid, especially Riddle, the heroine, Charlie, and the heroine's mother. Riddle, who particularly liked this article, felt quite distressed when reading it. From the author's perspective, the injustice Riddle suffered can be clearly shown. The characters of the heroine and Riddle are both somewhat contradictory and complex. It was very interesting to read, highly recommended! ! ! ! ! If you like Riddle, you must definitely read this book! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I love you, the author is great, please update as soon as possible! [Love][Love][Love][Love][Love]

I'm looking forward to the following plot, but I don't know when the love line will start. Come on!

The heroine was born a Legilimency, and reading Riddle's mind is super funny. Of course, our old enemy is the best match, and the one who understands you best is your sworn enemy. The writing style is very good, focusing on daily life, and the perspective focuses on the exploration and growth of the original heroine. After reading a lot of Riddle's fan stories, I feel a little emotional. What Voldemort needs is a doll that is under his control and attached to him, while what Tom longs for is an evenly matched opponent who can sympathize with each other.

It's rare to see a non-Mary Suliu who doesn't beautify the heroine Riddle and doesn't engage in dark Slytherin...

The book is quite interesting, and the heroine is attractive (perhaps because of her natural abilities?), But I also have some thoughts of looking for opportunities to offend her [anger]. After all, I don't really want someone who is both capable and can hear my thoughts. (Perhaps fear?)

The relationship between the heroine and Riddle is really different. The characters are not OOC at all, but they are not interesting enough. The author will update them more [sending heartfelt wishes]

After reading so many Tomato Riddell fan fiction, the only thing I don't think is OOC is that it's simply not enough to read the author. Come on [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

I really like the description of the psychology of the heroine and the Dark Lord in her school days.

The author, please keep writing! The writing is good, and it vividly restores Hogwarts. The daily relationship between Riddle and Eve is super interesting and funny. This is the best hp I have ever read. Come on! Big best! [Love]