Immortal Cultivation for Eternal Life, Starting With Marrying a Young Maidservant

The writing is very good. For someone who has read more than 7,000 hours and 3,000 books on Tomato, the writing is closer to reality. It is just like that, but my life is really good. Some comments want to directly cheat on the spot, and it will probably fall apart after 20 or 30 chapters. Overall, this novel is very well written, with an eight score upwards. It's just that the writing in the early stage is indeed flawed, but don't worry too much about the details. I am still happy to read it. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. I hope the author will work hard and give me some suggestions. The author should not add too much chaos and complexity, such as spicy strips and fun objects obtained after practicing with his wife. Or you can write about it based on your feelings and highlight the work. Use it, otherwise it looks a bit weird, like getting a mobile phone, etc., And there is no explanation in the follow-up. If you can change it to a spiritual mobile phone or something, you can write if you have ideas, but I think the trick the author opened is very good. If you want to change it, you can't add some unnatural things. The focus is on the protagonist's encounters, mainly about emotions and opportunities, and plug-ins. It has basically been finalized, and it is getting better slowly. In other novels, as soon as the protagonist grows up, the world structure will change. Either the family is destroyed here or there is a big crisis, and the world must be saved. It doesn't have to be like this. This book is not in line with the mainstream, but the writing is really good. Only those who can read forty or fifty chapters are suitable for this book. Good luck to the author! Since I'm so serious, I'll add another chapter tomorrow, hehe! 😏

The writing is very good, don't judge life span, the power of love is unlimited. Although birth, old age, illness and death, love, hate and separation are normal in the world, I have already read novels. What's wrong with taking care of readers?

The plot is simple and profound, the artistic conception is beautiful, and the author's writing style is exquisite

OK, ok, very good and recommended. Welcome to come and join us.

It's pretty cool, keep up the good work

Not bad, I quite like it

It's okay, I hope the protagonist can be more ruthless

In summary, give the author a thumbs up👍🏻

The book is very good, the details are not bad, and the pace of progress is also good. There are only 79 chapters of this brooding stallion without mechanical routines. It is considered a solid foundation. The world will be bigger and the characters will be richer in the follow-up chapters. Thank you to the author. Come on, keep up the good work.

As a harem novel, although there are some poisonous points at the beginning of this book, I can bear it and get over it. I hope the author will read more. The male protagonist attaches great importance to love and justice, and understands the ways of the world; although he was a bit sloppy in the early stage, he must avenge himself; although the article has some loopholes, it does not affect the general reading. I hope the author will continue to work hard and portray the emotions of the characters more deeply, and don't abandon the book or stop updating it😘