I Inherited Seven Stunning Disciples at the Beginning, I Am Invincible

The male protagonist is not a sheep tail, he has already won too much Before you look, my advice is to run. When I saw Chapter 211, I was immediately poisoned and died. Ran away.

Originally, the rating of this book should be about four points, but here it is 🍅, and I won't ask too high for a free book. In my opinion, the author wrote it very well. The protagonist forged the identity of the heroine's master and thought he could hide it, but in fact it had already been seen through. And the reason why they didn't reveal it was also very good. They wanted to protect the senior sisters and did not want them to part ways. They were also extremely disappointed with the original master, so they accompanied Lu Yang in this scene. The only drawback is that there are too many heroines. Seven heroines in a harem novel will be enough. If you write too many heroines later, your description of the emotional lines will not be so good. After all, you cannot guarantee that every emotional line will be written so well. Just like the emotional line of the senior sister, except for the more written in the front, there are basically no opportunities to appear later. This makes readers who like the senior sister think, if they can't see their favorite heroine appear in dozens of chapters, they will inevitably want to abandon the book. Finally, to summarize, what is currently known about the heroine is as follows: the original seven apprentices (one apprentice has not appeared yet, and another is a minor, and is expected to be taken down in the future), an eighth apprentice with the Chaos Sword Body, an empress apprentice who collects mirrors, the Nangong Grand Elder, and another member of the sect. A peak master (I forgot his name), the sect master, two saints, one big and one small, from the Yaochi Holy Land, and the princess of the Fire Phoenix Kingdom (tentative, this one just appeared, it's not clear yet). I don't know if there are any missing, but I can list 15 of them. Do you think you can really write it well? This is the only poisonous point in my opinion. All in all, this book is worth reading. The protagonist is not said to be aboveboard in doing things, but at least he can feel clear of conscience when he is done. He does not say that going to some romantic place feels like returning home. He can say responsible words to a woman he has been frivolous in. In short, compared with most male protagonists, this one is considered good.

Yes, yes, the needle doesn't stick. The only drawback is that the speed is too slow. Maybe the author just pressed the speed to save his life. Before, he drove too fast and was hacked. Alas, it's a pity that I didn't see it [laughter][laughter][laughter]

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It's okay, the setting is quite interesting, but there are indeed some poisonous points. Although it's not a big deal to me, an old Shennong [laughs crookedly], some people may indeed find it uncomfortable. As for the plot development, the author is indeed constantly patching and filling in holes, but after all, this subject matter is indeed difficult to control, so some people may still find the logic confusing. But overall, it feels okay

Although the protagonist is full of loopholes, he has a fearless attitude and the disciples can still face the enemy who killed their (master) father and continue to live without incident, and then fall in love with him at the speed of light, which is a bit southern. But it was revealed at the beginning that she was not the real person. The theme of actors' bureau is still very novel and very interesting.

This novel is an absolute five-star masterpiece! The plot is compact, the suspense is endless, and it is dizzying. The characters are vivid, the character is full, and the emotional description is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. The author's writing style is smooth and elegant, making people feel like they are in the situation of the story. The plot of this novel is full of ups and downs and makes people want to put it down. The author's clever conception makes people marvel. Reading this novel is an unforgettable spiritual journey. It not only allows us to immerse ourselves in the storyline, but also allows us to draw wisdom and insights about life from it. In short, this novel is a masterpiece worth reading again and again. I highly recommend it to friends who like reading.

I have been short of books for more than half a month. After searching for such a long time on Tomato, I finally found a book that is suitable for readers like me who like fast cars. It is really fast [Love][Love][Love][Love] Sigh... I didn't expect that the author would use various reasons to not accept girls in the future. I always thought it would be quick, but I didn't expect to accept two girls until now. The author didn't listen to the readers' opinions. There are already many people who have opinions. Although I really like this book, but in this case... I'll drop one star first.

At first I thought it was an old-fashioned novel, but it turned out that Shen Qingqiu, a god-level reversal, knew how to use his tricks, and then my family was attracted by this book. I can't comment too much on the male protagonist. In short, the time traveler is very possessive, and any girl who appears too much will want it. However, this article does not have the instant sense of sight like the stallion novel, and all the female protagonists have different personalities, especially There are eight apprentices. The emotional lines and plots of each heroine are well written. They are not the same, but there are too many plots. After seeing more than 500 chapters, I don't pay much attention to the plot. I just want to watch the emotional lines and the moment when everything comes to light. From chapters 500 to 900, I skipped through chapters except for the main plot, until From Chapter 930 to Chapter 940, I saw what I wanted to read, and I am satisfied. I was afraid that you would update Chapter 1000 before all the chapters are exposed. Fortunately, I read it so late, otherwise I would have felt uncomfortable. This book is a harem novel, with almost 15 female protagonists. Not to mention other things, it is just eight apprentices. The author writes it very well, and the warmth of the eldest apprentice Rou, the charm of the second apprentice, the unparalleled coldness and softness, the pride of Situ, the brave pursuit of love by the sixth apprentice, the cuteness of Weaver Girl and Hongying, each has its own characteristics, it is really beautiful. I haven't read the book so seriously in a month, but there are too many plots. In order to read the climax of chapters 930-940, I skipped about 400 chapters, five-star recommendation

I have only watched the beginning so far, and the setting at the beginning is quite good for the God of War of Pure Love. There are two poisonous points in this type of stand-in literature that always offend people: One: The female character is completely devoted to the original person. Even if you inherit this feeling and continue to develop it, even if the restrictions will not cause thunder in the future, you cannot regard this feeling as pure, because the foundation is not yours. Second: They are basically inserted into the book and have plots, giving people the feeling of being cheated on the timeline. However, the description of the female characters in this book is different from that in the book, which can negate the plot in the book. After all, the characters have different personalities. I will look at it later. If there are no major poisonous points, for the sake of pure love, the five stars will not be changed. Even if it is a running account, I feel quite satisfied with this setting. Well, after reading hundreds of chapters, I feel like the biggest problem is the protagonist's combat power. The settings here apply a lot of things, such as realms and various names, but the protagonist's combat power should not be like this. The emperor of Zhetian is already at his limit, so if there are people in the same realm who have the qualifications to become emperors, even the protagonist can only win by being very strong, and he will not be able to crush him until he reaches a much later stage. The problem is that the protagonist here has some secrets, immortal scriptures, and crazy returns of all kinds of heavenly materials and earthly treasures. By the way, the protagonist does not use this to buy materials. He can explain to his apprentice that he will return them after accepting them, but he cannot use them repeatedly. According to this set of procedures, it is basically guaranteed that the protagonist and the female characters have no shortage of resources and skills, and they use all the top-notch skills. As a result, the protagonist's performance is that he can fight a few in the same situation, and it takes a long time to fight and it is difficult to fight. For example, in the Tribulation of Sainthood, the performance of the five people beaten was actually average. The strongest one was the original Lu Yang, who claimed to have the qualifications to become an emperor. The problem is that the projection has not yet practiced the Sutra of Immortality, which means it is a weakened version. From the ending of the original book where he died on the road to immortality, it can be concluded that Lu Yang was originally fully developed, that is, between the emperor and the immortal. If he was not fully developed, he would be barely an emperor at best. Calculated in this way, the combat power of the protagonist Chengsheng Jie cannot beat the top emperor's son, at most it is the same. It's very abstract. If you use the highest level for everything, it will be like this. The highest level returned by the system will be immortal level. Then how will you become an immortal in the future?

Not bad, unlike other reborn masters and apprentices, the first reborn master and junior sister were taken in by the Son of Luck, and then the master, junior sisters and the Son of Luck killed the male protagonist. The second life came back, and then the master and his fellow apprentices, the heroine, awakened her past life memories and knew what the hero did for her, but they all betrayed and killed the heroine in the first life, so what's the use of regretting it. If the male protagonist does not return to the second life, then he is really dead. This book is not bad. The clothes and the apprentice know that it is not the master who likes him. It is equivalent to traveling through time in a fanfiction. Anyway, it's very good, but the author can stop giving away the heroine all the time. I know you want to express the pity of the heroine to make readers feel sympathy, but others don't like to hear this. You can also use other words to attract readers' sympathy. No one likes the heroine giving things away

The plot is very good and the characters are interesting. The only shortcoming is that there are too many female protagonists. I was confused whether to continue reading until I saw "Wait a minute, Fairy, let me explain" next door. . . . . Well, it seems that ten or twenty heroines are not too many. The next door almost has 108 heroines 😂 There are so many heroines that it's hard to remember their names

Five stars, I enjoyed watching it Secondly, the logic makes no sense at all, and it's hard to laugh at. Casual, daily life, the relationship with the female characters is well written, and the overall look is relaxed and enjoyable. Although the plot is too brainless, it is still very comfortable to watch.

This book is good-looking, awesome, and really non-toxic. Watch the second picture in its entirety. The author had some minor mistakes before, but they have been patched up now. After reading Chapter 2, you will feel that this book is not toxic, and after reading Chapter 6, you will feel that this book is not stupid. It's very normal, funny, and interesting. People who say it poorly actually haven't read it carefully until the sixth chapter. Refreshing, non-toxic. Harmless and no cow head can be observed.

I personally think it's quite good. I've read every chapter. There's nothing I don't accept so far. The emotional aspect is also remarkable. If you like harem-oriented content, you can read it. Maybe you'll like it [please take a closer look]

How many disciples have treasure hunting abilities? Apprentices with treasure hunting abilities should look for opportunities everywhere. It is the right way to lead eight disciples everywhere to look for opportunities and then come back and show off and slap them in the face. You cannot follow the original book, otherwise it will appear that you have no creativity. This is a big omission. Dong, and the apprentice must share weal and woe and slowly fall in love with the master, so that it seems reasonable. The process is to be chased by enemies, abandoned by the family for cultivation, etc. Every apprentice's experience must be quite miserable. Then you, the master, rush to the rescue.

To be honest, it is over 800. This is the first time I have seen such a high number. Most of them are below 100.

What a good book, what a good book, a combination of meat and vegetables, it's not tiring to read, I almost stood up after reading one of them [note]

This is purely my personal opinion. There are some spoilers. If you don't like it, don't read it. Don't criticize it. Now that I have read the Dragon's Nest part, I personally think that the President is pretty good and worth reading. Because it is not soul-piercing, it allows the seven disciples to cover up and see through the false master without revealing it, highlighting the dissatisfaction and hatred towards the former master. This reason is good. In addition, except for the four The apprentice appears relatively late, and the other apprentices have already interacted with each other. Although time is a blink of an eye for a cultivator, the other apprentices appear too quickly, which will cause some gaps in the readers. Moreover, the whereabouts of the four apprentices are not mentioned, and they must have been forgotten. In addition, the time points of some of the costumes were explained earlier, but as a time traveler who has read "The Immortal Rebellion" and has a system, you should come up with key information about the time points in advance, such as what the seven apprentices are currently doing. Also, the clothes are not very good. Even a powerful person in the holy realm who specializes in mystical arts should be able to cultivate part of the body, right? After all, the Holy Mirror is the emperor. Everyone has weaknesses, but they are not too weak. This is what I personally think is contradictory, because it has been said before that Lu Yang is smart and cunning. In addition, it is possible to have a harem, but currently there are too many emotional lines. It would be a bit confusing if you don't think carefully or make up your mind. There is also a state where the system feels dispensable. As a cheat, you should brush it more often, and the system does not give certain restrictions to prove that you can keep gathering until you are invincible. Because I have not written about the system's restrictions in the Dragon's Nest part, the protagonist does not seem to want to keep gathering. The products produced by the system must be high-quality. It is not easy to produce a few pills that have no side effects and improve cultivation [sneaky laugh][smile][sneaky laugh] In addition, I personally think that the title of the book is enough, and I may recruit more apprentices later, but it is recommended not to include an emotional line outside of the apprentice, which is a bit inconsistent with the title of the book. The second thing is the Dragon's Nest part that I'm reading. It's okay to be honest with people when you're working with people, but it's better to keep it mysterious. But the aboveboard appearance later confused me a bit. Am I afraid that others won't know? But I feel like it's probably not written well. I hope I can change it and add a new disguise before it appears. So far, there aren't any big problems. I will continue reading. I won't forget to review it later. I gave it four stars and then persuaded me to leave. I personally don't like wearing it and having to prove myself in the way of the book, but it's worth a read.

The writing is not bad, the setting is OK, the logical thinking is clear, the protagonist's personality is also OK, and he takes action when it's time to take action. There are many female protagonists, but they all have their own personalities. Overall, it is good and worth watching.

Yes, it is very comfortable to watch in daily life. Although the fighting scenes are not very outstanding, they are quite satisfactory in fantasy. By the way, let me add a few more words. There are still several disciples who are using their original skills. Don't you plan to strengthen them? [Chigua] [Chigua]

Wow, why do I feel so hot after reading the book [face covering]

Isn't it returned ten thousand times? Then when you gave him the skills, why did you not give back ten thousand times the cultivation resources he gave you? Can you only return them if they were made by him? "Author's explanation"...

Speaking of the author, this book has already written so many words. I have read it from the beginning of 200,000 words to the present. Why is it so difficult for the protagonist to explain to his apprentices? It's basically a different kind of deception for an apprentice, not to mention that there are many women out there as protagonists, so... Author, how do you want to get it back then, I guess it will be quite difficult! 🧐🧐But I personally think this book is still good-looking🤗🤗🤗 Also, there are still some poisonous spots in the front, but it still looks good if you can accept it.

I opened it to 111. The plot and emotion are very good at first, but basically the system presence is low. I personally feel that there is not much scenery written. Five-star reviews, good reviews, good reviews, looking forward to looking forward to looking forward to it.

I have read more than 100 chapters. You can read it when you are bored to kill time. The bad points are not big, they are just small ones. Anyway, you are reading free novels on Tomato. Just put your mind down and read. If it doesn't work, just leave and stop reading. Give four stars to encourage the author, and hope it will be better in the future. Just to comment, I'm a bit speechless about the subsequent plot. I've read Chapter 200. I really don't want to say more about the plot in Ten Thousand Dragons Cave. The author doesn't need to accept all the women. . . Let's take a look at the next plot later. I hope there will be fewer such situations.

Except for the fact that the author mentions sending girls over and over again, everything else is very good.

Realm: Moving Blood Realm, Wheel Sea Realm, Purple Mansion Realm, Dao Palace Realm, Tongxuan Realm, Transformation God Realm, Hexu Realm, Aspiration Realm, Supreme Realm, Divine Fire Realm, Holy Realm, Emperor Realm... (Will be adjusted if there are any changes)