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It's rare to find such a reasonable novel. When you encounter benefits, you don't just rush forward blindly. When you see a beautiful woman, you don't feel like you haven't seen a woman in eight hundred years. The fighting scenes are a little bit poorly written. The biggest shortcoming is that there are too few. Please add more. I need to read it up [Thinking][Thinking]

It's a very nice and huge modern cultivation system, each discipline is very complete, and the descriptions are quite detailed. A growth-oriented protagonist who forgets this and that in the past, but later learns to be an adult. The various human relationships and intrigues are quite interesting to watch. The special award in Modern Battlefield is the best. It's almost enough to read Chapter 666 in one go. After the protagonist reveals that his top-notch combat power is almost invincible and everyone wants to support him, it becomes meaningless. Moreover, the other world has also fallen into a cycle of grabbing, grabbing, killing, killing, and the ending can basically be seen at a glance.

Come on! Not enough👀, the writing is so beautiful I don't want school beauties. What kind of obsession does a male channel have with school beauties? It's better not to have a female protagonist in this school beauties. After all, it will be over once the two world pearls are discovered. Don't test people's hearts.

I read the current chapter after reading it for two days. I can give it a six-star out of five for the subject matter. Tomato is a novel urban modern fairy tale. The description of the two worlds is also very good. Will the two worlds be integrated in future plots? Quite looking forward to it. The author's writing style is okay, four out of five stars. Personally, I think the protagonist still needs to be careful about the relationship between friends. Some group portraits can enrich the book. Finally, let's talk about the poisonous points. First, the large amount of reselling resources in the two worlds of the protagonist will cause poisonous points. For example, in the early stage, he earned 10,000 spirit stones by selling talismans. Could it only cause small characters in the Qi refining period to chase them? Second, the function of clone is too high, it can do many things in place of the main body, and it will become a poisonous point later if you are not careful. I'm still looking forward to the author's subsequent updates. Overall, I feel pretty good about it and it's worth reading.

It's pretty good-looking. I don't think it's a hard lick. Why are there so many people spraying it? I feel like it's a small boutique in Tomato. I don't know why so many people spray it. The rating is also slightly lower. Come on, author.

The writing is good. Keep it up and try to write five million words. It won't be a big problem, right?

The plot is smooth, well-conceived and witty. The protagonist's IQ is online and the whole process is a battle of wits. There are many foreshadowings and pitfalls, so it is worth reading.

Let me first state that this is a review written after reading more than 1.4 Million words. The writing is really good. One is a normal world of cultivating immortals, and the other is a city where spiritual energy is revived. Throughout the whole process, both the protagonist and the supporting characters are intelligent, and the details are in place without any delay. It's a relatively cool story, and the male protagonist has never experienced any major setbacks so far. I hope I can keep writing well. I have basically stopped playing games and read novels for eight years. This novel surpasses 99.5% Of online novels. It is very good.

This book feels good. Unlike the previous books, you can see the protagonist. It feels more like the growth of the author. Like many previous books, you can understand a lot of things when you are only 18 years old. Things like human relations and sophistication are outrageous. The protagonist comes from a not very wealthy family. Many things should be like this. I don't understand. I have to go through a lot of things to understand step by step. Moreover, the protagonist's cheats are not that outrageous. The protagonist has a lot of resources, but he also works hard. But sometimes the author may not be rigorous in connecting the front and rear, but I still support the author and hope that the author can write better and better and become more mature.

The best thing about this article is that it accurately wraps up the collective memory of the college entrance examination and university in a fairy-tale shell, making it easy for readers who have just experienced the college entrance examination or have just entered university to relate to it. The author has a good grasp of the plot and mood of the two stages. He is most likely a sophomore or above majoring in computer science. This familiarity with campus life allows the setting of "testing alchemy, weapon refining, and formations" to seamlessly correspond to real-life physics, chemistry, and mathematics. There is no sense of dissonance in reading, but it feels like "it turns out that professional courses can be so romanticized." The highlights of the article are very prominent: First, the idea is novel, breaking away from the traditional fairy tale of fighting monsters and upgrading, with the dual core of "examination room/academic studies, and survival in another world", which is not only in line with the life experience of student readers, but also full of freshness; second, it is full of imagination, and the setting of "traveling between two worlds" expands more possibilities for the story, making the cultivation of the fairy world and the growth of the real campus form a clever echo, which is full of attractions. If we talk about minor shortcomings, it is that some of the plots are a bit long-winded, which slightly dilutes the main rhythm, but the flaws are not outweighed. Overall, this is an excellent work with both resonance and imagination. It is especially recommended to readers who have deep memories of college entrance examination and university life. It is easy to read their own struggles and confusions in the fantasy of Xianxia.

After reading the review written by Jie Dan, I feel that it combines the modern world and cultivating immortals very well without talking about time travel. It may also be because I don't pay much attention to details, but the modern world with the main line of cultivating immortals is really cool, and the rhythm is also very good. In the foundation building period, the foundation building is not written to be weak or weak, nor is it particularly awkward, leaving enough space for the future Dan Jie and Nascent Soul to play.

@ It's very interesting. The protagonist is slowly growing up. The author's writing is very interesting, but sometimes there are some setting loopholes. I like the character Nie Xuan very much. I hope there will be a role for her later. The characterization is really good. Come on, author, I will always support it.

The overall feeling is that it has a broad outline, but there are many things that were forgotten at the end of the writing [awkward laughter], and the female character who has been portrayed for a long time died inexplicably, and the suspected heroine also appeared inexplicably and there is no progress yet. It can be seen that the author is very serious in writing, and I hope to improve the details to make it more reasonable.

The writing is good, and the characters' personalities are vividly described! The levels of practice are also very clear! This book will become popular if it maintains its quality! Come on author😊😊😊 Later, I felt that the writing became more and more confusing. The author couldn't control his outline. Later, I felt that the protagonist had to learn everything. It was tiring to watch. In addition to practicing, he still practiced!

It looks good! There are some points where the protagonist seems a bit naive, but not much, and it can't be considered poisonous. It's been a long time since I read a fairy tale on Tomato and read more than 400 chapters! If you read a simple traditional fairy tale or modern fairy tale, you will be bored, but I think this book balances the two worlds very well. I saw the latest chapter before and waited for the update, but now I can still read it again. I don't need to say more about this valuable content. Some negative comments from reading book reviews are that the male protagonist's feelings for Nie Xuan and Shen Lingnan have been foreshadowed for a long time. If it has not progressed yet, the second female protagonist is interested in the male protagonist, so there will be a bloody plot. Shen Lingnan's soul is bound and he can't go back to modern times. This is not a tool. The author does not arrange a corresponding plot in the follow-up. It is just more fun, and it also enriches the plot of another world. Personally, I think this book deserves a 9 points

Yes, it's pretty good in Tomato. I don't want to be a eunuch anymore, I have to stick to it.

Although there are many similarities in the beginning of Goldfinger, it seems acceptable to those who like to travel between the two worlds. The only uncomfortable thing is that the earth-like setting is not like the second earth planet.

I have read the latest chapter. Generally speaking, the subject matter is novel, the storyline is relatively compact, the male and female protagonists are relatively likable, and the characters have distinct personalities. Some of the plots in the early stage still need to be pondered. The author is not particularly experienced, but it is still a good book.

This is a story about cultivating immortality that travels between two worlds. The plot is not very exciting, but it is about slowly cultivating immortality, which is more daily life. Generally, I don't like this kind of novel, but I don't know why I read it. The story is good, I just want to see what happens to the pig's feet in the end~~~~ It's been more than two hundred chapters, and we have just begun to build the foundation. Brother, can you finish writing it in your lifetime after becoming an immortal~~~

This is the first time I read this kind of fairy tale that crosses two realms. It still looks very comfortable. The plot is reasonable and the text is smooth. After reading this novel and reading similar books, I felt that those books were almost boring. Overall, I feel very good

A very novel subject matter. This is the first time I have read a novel in so many years. Come on.

Not bad, except that the main character is a bit young, he really feels like a standard college student [laughing and crying]

It is a book that suits my taste very well. The writing style is natural and the protagonist is calm. Some people may think that they do not want a female protagonist (the relationship has not been confirmed yet), but this kind of natural love between two people is very comfortable. This is the first time I don't keep a book. I wait for updates every day and write another five million words!

This novel is so beautiful and worth reading

It's good to watch. It's the same as the movie I originally watched, "I Have a World of Immortality", and it's very watchable.

It's very good. I can see that the author really put a lot of thought into it. When I wrote the puppets and alchemy questions, I felt like I was back in high school.

The writing is very good, there are no bad points, and it is really interesting to read. I don't understand why the score is so low?

It's good to read, but it's written too comprehensively, which makes the level of improvement feel slow, but considering my age, it's not bad, it's relatively fast. Now I see chapter 666. I'm enjoying reading more than 660 chapters, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot.

It looks good, but I don't know if the protagonist will venture into that different world in the future. I hope the protagonist will fight more in the future.

Although the protagonist has the golden finger of the Two Realm Pearls, he is determined, calm, diligent in training, and has developed in an all-round way! I like good and solid articles with a strong sense of life and not just a slap in the face! It is recommended that all ears appreciate it carefully!