Fox Demon*****

It's a very good novel, but the author, as a sociopath, likes to interact with readers too much. A chapter can be photoshopped many times. How should I put it? I understand the author's desire for others to know why you wrote it this way. But it's just like when watching a movie, the director keeps whispering in his ears what the plot design is for, etc. There is also the issue of paragraphing. In fact, writing a novel does not have to be like writing an essay. You can write one paragraph and one section, and you can divide it into whatever you want. But it can be said that the author is very considerate of readers who have never seen the fox demon and the wind spirit show, and the description is very detailed. Today is the first time I read this book. I saw it on the recommendation website. It is the author's first book. Although the author is a newcomer, it is still very interesting. The main reason is that there is no need to explain anything in the text. If you are worried about others scolding you, you can criticize them or explain when the author has something to say. The author is soft and cute, Thank you very much to the author for reading this comment of mine, keep it up [laughs]

The author writes well. I have a small suggestion that I hope you can adopt. Can the author add brackets when explaining? Otherwise, sometimes it would be troublesome to find the text. I also hope that the author can reduce the number of explanations outside the text. When the author wants to write his own explanation, he can add parentheses. In this way, it will not be too confusing and can be understood at a glance. The text is still very good. I hope you can keep writing it and don't be too eunuch. I also hope the author can adopt the suggestions.

Don't always keep numbers!