The Sick Beauty Trapped the Gentle General of the Zerg

I really like this book. I felt very comfortable reading it. Jun Ming gave me the feeling that he is an earth sign. He will find ways to solve problems when encountering them. He is flirtatious, gentle to his lover, and considers his lover's feelings very much. He is a typical guiding lover. I really love this book and it gives us Atal a sense of security. Atal makes me feel that he is innocent, sensitive, very insecure, very cautious, wants but dare not ask for too much, which sometimes makes people feel cute. It's sweet but a little bit sharp, but it's not a problem because the two protagonists are very sweet. Ahhhh, this book really touched me! ! ! ! The writing style is also very good😍😍😍😍😍😍 I love this book so much. ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

Why is the rating of this book so low? ! ! ! ! ! ! The writing is really great! ! ! ! It's the best Zerg novel I've read. Many of the Zerg novels written by Red Persimmon are really stiff and have a strange flavor. They are too sweet and sweet, so that the plot and many parts are unreasonable. But this one, I came in for the ending point, and I finished it in one day. Well, I actually saw it. Zero into two points and twenty-four, and then leave my comment, the protagonist did not misunderstand Shuangqiangtian, other CPs are very to my liking, an unexpected pair, the rebel leader and his little male insect, I originally thought that their relationship would be difficult, painful and full of misunderstandings, but it was not at all, in what I thought When I wanted to be abused, I was stuffed with candy. In the end, the author's thoughts made me understand that books also have lives, and love between men and women also exists. After all kinds of pain and suffering, they never let go of each other. There are not many descriptions, but I still shed tears when I read it. The story of the male protagonist's younger brother and the female insect's former comrade-in-arms. It also made my eyes wet when I read it, the two-way redemption, the interaction between the protagonists is full of love, there are not so many twists and turns in the process, the world view is complete, there are not so many brain-burning plots, and many pitfalls have been filled in. It is a book that I love, and the layout is also great. Thank you to the author [blowing kiss]

Delicate, different from many plots of the same type, it is a process of slowly opening your heart step by step. I hope it will be like this later and never collapse. (I am scared of collapse) The author has updated it a lot.

It's clear that most parts of the emotional line are connected, but the progress is very slow. I've already seen more than half of it, and the protagonist is really about it. And it's because of the stimulation of the differentiation period. Otherwise, I wouldn't know it would be the Year of the Monkey and the Horse. I prefer to watch Beloved, or the two-way arrow comparison. Thick, in my opinion, this book has a thicker arrow of attack vs. Receiving, but it is much better than those novels about pure pampering, because I feel that the wife is very attractive (look at some novels, blindly doting on females, and the charm of females is lost)

It's so good to read. The author's description of emotions is very delicate. You can feel Jun Ming's care, love and redemption for Atal. He gently separates Atal from the darkness, and gradually allows Atal to accept Jun Ming's love and learn how to love others. It's just too little and not enough to read. I'm waiting for the author's follow-up updates! ! ! ! !

I really like this book, it's not that deep in my opinion, but it's memorable enough. It is also very different from the novels I have read before. According to the routine, it seems that Jun Ming should rely on his own uniqueness to become a leader who leads everything to change this deformed world. However, this novel has the power of the so-called supporting characters. Everyone cannot be defined. You cannot say that everything in this world is as bad as you imagine. There are always some people who have not been polluted and retain that purity.

I want to say that I focused on the main CP at first, and then I really started to enjoy the secondary CPs. The secondary CPs in my family are very delicious, and a sweet interaction made me twist like a maggot on the bed👉🏻👈🏻It can be said that the secondary CPs made me cry and laugh at the same time. I don't watch that kind of sadistic stuff (so I skipped the part that the author marked "be" in a big way, forgive me!!!), But I finished reading the story of the deputy CPs without any regrets. It was really sweet and sour, and I felt sorry for every insect, but in the end, I lived a good life! This is the life they should live! You have to give me sweetness! Later, in the big photo of our main CP and the female and male fathers, I mentally included Dundun in it! After all, Dundun is also a very important member hehehe! (Dundun is so cute, I want to take it away) ps: What if you find out? The content of this comment is so similar to a paragraph in the book circle. Don't doubt my family, I copied it from Gagaga and I wrote it all myself! Why copy it? ! Finished spreading flowers! My family is destined to see you in the next book~~~

I've finished reading it. It's well written, the plot has ups and downs, and it has a suitable rhythm. Overall, it's very good. There are no setting problems or basic errors. It's pretty good. But speaking of it, I think the main character is a sick beauty, so I could have made her body a little sicker. The entire story should have been untouched except for the beginning (I know she got better later, but the main character is coughing, and Atal's heartache wouldn't be nice). In addition to this, there is the issue of traveling through time and space. 1. The male and female fathers accepted this directly from the beginning. 2. More space could be added to write about the scene at that time. 3. There is a slight sense of separation (it cannot be said to be split, or I think it is not particularly necessary). Overall, the writing is good. Please keep up the good work, the author [currently working on the manuscript]

This book is pretty good. In fact, I really read it as a sweet article at first, but as I went on, I found that it has its own special place. It is not a simple world background that is imposed on it. It has origins and logic. The most important thing is that I saw something that shocked me, that is, the author was promoting and protecting the environment. At this moment, this book in my mind is not just a mindless sweet article, it has a more profound purpose. However, this article also has shortcomings. It does not describe the action too much and lacks a sense of picture. There are not many words that make people feel beautiful. The psychological analysis of the protagonist is there but not very complete. I feel that Jun Ming's character is not fully displayed. Moreover, the character of the general, the protagonist Shou, became too fond of talking, and in the early stage, it seemed that it was easy I just accepted his hero, with not much entangled psychology, a little less ups and downs, and not more prominent. The protagonist hated those males at first, and hated marriage. Among them, the setting of the cold protagonist Shou is not very obvious, so in general, the author's portrayal of the protagonist is not comprehensive enough, but overall, for a sweet story, it is already settled, and it is recommended to watch it! ! ! [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

I really like this book. Although there are still some things that make me uncomfortable, but for the most part, this book is very good. The flaws are not hidden. There is one thing that I guessed wrong at first. I can only say that it is awesome. Hahaha. I really didn't expect that the timeline can be played like this. It's beyond my expectation. But this book is great. The point is that all the sub-CPs are he. Unlike other authors, they are not keen on the sweetness of the main CP. The sub-CP Tianlei also has a trouble-making mode be/he (explain, the trouble-making mode = he is not as good as be, forget it, have to continue, one female and multiple males! It is not easy for two people to fall in love but fall out, and they will be in unrequited love for a lifetime, etc. It's a heart-wrenching operation, who knows what I've been through for so many years [face covering]) In addition to the main CP, I prefer Jisha, the enthusiastic puppy. Their relationship doesn't have many twists and turns. The twists and turns are the process, not the relationship. In this regard, I like the main CP better. The main CP is slower to warm up and pulls the process. It's so confusing to the extreme. I tend to favor the protagonist and control his attributes, so I subconsciously tend to favor the other side. Yixun and the pair also have some twists and turns in their relationship. They don't feel very happy. Unlike Junjun and the others, I still prefer Jisha. His love is pure and passionate, but all the deputy CPs are fucked! Rush! This book can be read by those with more offensive attributes. Forget it by extreme control, you will definitely not be able to stand it. Overall, it is a very good book. I hope it gets better and better ~ [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Blowing Kisses]

Nice! ! ! I like this contrast. The beauty with Northeastern disease is so joyful. When she opens her mouth, she says, "Wow!" My wife's wings are really cool, my wife's looks are really cool, my wife's clothes are really cool, it's really funny, the author will update more! ! !

[Working on manuscript] It's great. I've read the latest chapter of this book, and I feel that it's not about the career line, but about the emotional line. The author's writing style is also very delicate in describing the relationship. The ambiguous atmosphere between the two people is particularly good, very sweet, and they respect each other. If you like reading about the emotional line, you should be very happy to read this book. I read it without skipping a chapter, but it is not updated. I want to see their happy daily life with little bug cubs [laughs]

This book is really worth it. For the time I spent, there will be some critical comments in the early stage that will affect your viewing. It's OK if you don't read it. The plot is really great. Every couple of CPs are super brilliant. The relationship between the main CP is also step-by-step. It's really good. Jun Ming is really well shaped by the author. He is a very good person. He takes relationships very seriously. He doesn't want to start with Atal in a hurry, so he has been waiting for Atal. Atal himself is also a very good person. He will not resolutely join the rebel army just because this society is too harsh on females. He will resolutely join the rebel army when he overthrows the king's rule. There are also efforts made by other vice-CP males to improve their mental strength. The personal charm they exude really makes me unable to take my eyes away [almost crying]

It's super good-looking. The protagonist was sent to Blue Star by his parents and became the leader of mankind. In the final duel with the Zombie King, his mental power collided and opened a rift in time and space. He unexpectedly returned to the Zerg race (not in the same time and space as his parents after thousands of years). Guiding Lover Saigao, the main CP and the deputy CP are both very good-looking and each has its own characteristics. Main CP: High Attack and Low Defense Male × Shy Female (Sick Beauty?) Deputy CP 1. Loyal Dog Male × Sunshine Female (Paranoid? Fishing System?) 2. Gentle male insect × arrogant female insect (little spoiled man? Leader of the rebel army?) 3. A pair of female-female lovers (sincerely protecting each other) Lightning protection, the last few chapters include the plot of raising cubs The difference in the ratio of males and females in this book is a conspiracy, and it will gradually get better in the end.

Great author, I want to tie you in front of the computer, it's so beautiful [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

It's good to watch, the main CP is awesome, the secondary CP is even better, and there aren't too many sadistic points in the whole story. Except for one chapter of the extra chapter, all the members Be and Hervalius made me feel bad, the rest is okay [I learned it]. In addition, Dundun who likes to raise cubs is also very cute [admiration], and I actually want to see Jun Ming and the others can freely travel through time and space to see their male and female fathers [shy] Also, most of the holes dug in the article have been filled in. Only the former male protagonist of Hervalius is not mentioned later and how Luochuan became the king's female slave is unknown [what]

It's super, super, super good-looking. Because the relationship between Jun Ming and Atal has subtly affected the two pairs of deputy CPs, Jisha Hebarius and Yi Xunsai Xu Yaoqing, so that they all live well. I'm really glad that they don't end up like Atal going to Blue Star in the extra story! ! ! !

This is my favorite of all the Zerg I've seen. Everyone's character is very distinct, and the writing is also very delicate. There are a lot of foreshadowings in the plot, and there will be explanations at the end. Overall, this is really good.

1V1 dual male protagonist G, time travel + Zerg, the main CP fell in love at first sight, then got married and then fell in love. Their relationship is a long-term relationship, and there are quite a few sub-CPs. They gradually fell in love with each other, and the plot was also pretty good. There was no misunderstanding between the two, and the ending was successful.

It's so good. When I first added it to my bookshelf, it was because I had finished it. I happened to be reading about Zerg. I had no intention of opening this article today and I almost didn't want to read it because there were 300 chapters. Who knew it would take me a whole day to read it? It's really beyond my imagination, especially The part where Jun Ming travels through time and space to see a male and a female father really made me shed tears. The deputy CPs are also very interesting. 👍🏻🎉🎉🎉I read it without missing a chapter. It's so beautiful 🌸🌸🌸Everything must be reversed when it comes to extremes, but love lasts forever. I look forward to the author's next book.

It's very interesting and very logical, and the scenes described are very realistic. In particular, articles like Zerg originally belong to the interstellar world and the future world. I think it is very good to be able to describe it in such detail and comprehensiveness. However, I personally don't like it. Maybe it's because the two protagonists have relatively little emotional description and no interaction. I personally might prefer articles that move a little faster. But every article has its own differences. This is just my personal opinion.

It's been a long time since I felt like I was left with something unfinished, and I couldn't help but want to know everyone's ending and stayed up all night to read it all at once. Every pair of CPs cried a lot, especially Hervalius who felt so sorry for him. It was really gratifying to see him getting better and better in the future.

It's really good to read. It's not like other books at the beginning. [Laughing][Laughing] I think it looks really good. [Laughs] Every article has its own characteristics. I really like this article and the characters in it.

Awesome! I dare say that this Zerg novel can beat Tomato 80% of the time. The plot lines and emotional lines of the three pairs of CPs are very clear and develop naturally. Of course, we readers will naturally be moved by the stories between them when reading such a book. The author Baobao also laid a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, and it seemed just right when it was released again in the later stage. But what moved me the most was actually the theme of protecting the environment [Love] Whether it was "Blue Star Ten Thousand Years Ago" or "The Zerg Era Thousand Years Ago", both humans and Zerg have paid the price for what they have done. The advent of "blood rain" is actually the self-protection mechanism of the galaxy. When I saw this setting, my eyes really lit up. The dilapidated "Garbage Star" was actually the "Blue Star" of the past. Who could have imagined this? I believe that somewhere we can't see, under the leadership of Jun Ming and others, Blue Star will definitely regain its previous vitality, the Zerg will also establish a society of gender equality, and the two baby bugs will grow up in a loving family and in a normal equal society🤗🤗 I also believe that in real life we will always protect the earth🌍Mother, our motherland is constantly writing new green miracles🤗

It's so well written. It's great to have such a delicious meal when I first came into contact with the Zerg setting. It's a pity that I don't have much food [grievance], but it doesn't matter. I can read it slowly. The days waiting for the update are also very meaningful. Come on [make a face]

The best Zerg novel in my opinion. Hurry up, hurry up! Make Atal the female king! [Sneaky smile][Sneaky smile]

Wow ah ah ah it's so beautiful. It's just the beginning. I'm looking forward to the follow-up. I clicked in mainly because I was rushing to finish it. I couldn't stop it. Hahahaha. I'm looking forward to the follow-up! Come on, author👏!

I like it. I really like the CP between Thorns and Hervalius. The male insect that truly grew up from the Zerg society brought a beam of light to Hervalius. Although the author did not describe Hervalius too much, the insect with the same name as the protagonist is very different. Wherever I go, I can imagine Hevalius being so proud and confident, but in the end he was so tortured that he even forgot his own name. Fortunately, there was Jisha. Fortunately, there was Jisha, otherwise Hevalius might really have died. I watched the main plot at first and it was very sweet. Later I saw Jisha and Hevalius and I was taken away. Although they didn't have much scenes, I really watched it over and over again.

It's great to watch, but the pace is a bit slow. I like the character of the protagonist, but there's so little! [Please update]

This is really good. I just started reading Zerg novels recently. This is the most rigorous and reasonable logic I have found so far :(, and the deputy CP is also very good. The story plot has regrets but is also very satisfactory. Jun Ming's view of love is really evil [face covering] Suddenly I remembered that the babies should avoid lightning. The words spoken by the characters in the early stage are occasionally a bit old-fashioned. Reading the comments, it seems that the author has written ancient novels before, so he can't change it. But it will be much better in the later stage. The babies of thunder avoid themselves. In the early stage, I really wanted to laugh when I saw that kind of sentence. It was very funny [face covering]