The Pokémon Journey Begins with Shiny Yogurt

It deserves a recommendation. Don't read the short introduction and get low ratings, or run away because the protagonist is a beggar at the beginning. After actually reading it, you will feel that this is a bit like an invincible novel, pure and refreshing, and the rating is low only because there are few people. 1. The author has appointed an artist to draw the image of the protagonist for you. There is also a picture of the protagonist and Xiao Guang. Everyone has to come in and take a look at this, right? 2. The author is obedient and active enough, why don't you come in and have fun? 3. You can enjoy CP with candy, and the progress is slightly closer to reality, and there will also be plots that are in line with fantasy. This is good, right? So, come in and take a look, you won't suffer. 4. In fact, you can feel the improvement in the writing style, and the author listened to the advice of the big guys and small guys who came in to give pointers. Everyone felt comfortable and happy, and the author's writing style has improved again. This kills two birds with one stone.

This is one of the few "Pokémon" books that I like to read. First of all, the author did not unintentionally praise the protagonist and how powerful his elf is {nor did he steal Xiaozhi's elf, and the author has a good read of Pokémon. The plot line can be seen in any episode, and it is also linked with the theatrical version. Currently, there is no subjugation of mythical beasts (maybe the author will not write like this). If you like to read this kind of article, you can read this book} Secondly, he integrated well into the interaction with Xiaozhi (bonus points for this, plus one star) Then this book has a heroine named Xiaoguang, but he has never been able to tell because of the character of the protagonist (straight male). The author mentioned it in the plot, and you can see it when reading the book. If you like Zhiguang, well, you don't have to worry about it. After all, the author really can't write emotional lines now (and maybe not in the future). In the end, in my eyes, the protagonist can be the king of the ground system. Another thing is that you can also interact with the author more when reading this book. He likes to interact very much.

The book is good. The overall rating is about 4 stars. One star is added to encourage the author! Advantages: Character portrayal, Pokémon portrayal, and plot foreshadowing are all smooth and have appropriate jokes. Disadvantage: There are a little few illustrations in the article (Pokémon + characters). Since there is a heroine, it would be better to increase the sweet daily life between the protagonist and the heroine. Or it is almost time for the protagonist and the heroine to leave the protagonist group and embark on the road of travel for two people! The plot progresses a bit slowly... There are still some minor issues that I won't mention!

It's so beautiful. Can you give me a Shiny Pokémon or a mythical beast for the protagonist? For example, give Arceus to the protagonist, which will make it look better. Then I ask where the heroine went?

I personally think this book is pretty good. I think these are the only advantages. First of all, I personally don't like books with mythical beasts at the beginning. And it doesn't count that Invincible loses when it should lose, the author's thinking is quite clear. Secondly, the main plot of this book is consistent with the TV series. The author himself has really watched it seriously, not Yun, which makes me, who likes the original TV series, feel more comfortable watching it. Finally, the writing style is constantly improving, and readers' opinions are also listened to, which is quite interesting every day. I think there are two main shortcomings. One is that the emotional scenes they are talking about are really not very good, and the other is that the character descriptions are sometimes stiff (the second one is my personal opinion). There are two things that I would like to mention that are not shortcomings. Sometimes the punctuation marks are wrong, which makes people uncomfortable to watch. There is also the hostility of the protagonist towards Zhulan. I can't see it very clearly. It's a bit vague and the explanation is not clear enough. Of course, this is just my personal opinion

I selected a Pokémon article for an hour and read 20 chapters carefully. Although it is mainly about daily life, the author writes the battle part better than the daily part. In the next book, the author can try to have more battle proportion. The audience for daily articles is still too small compared with the enjoyable battle part. The writing is quite good. So far, in the 20th chapter, the collection of Pokémon has been a bit fast. I hope that the pace of collecting Pokémon can be slower in the future. Also, does the protagonist really have enough resources? Young Gilas gave a long and fast death. As for Yuanlu Shark, raising a demigod is very expensive. I don't know what to do next.

I personally have two suggestions for the author, which I feel are very important after reading online articles for so many years. At least these two points can determine whether I am willing to read it. First, don't describe certain characters too emotionally. This will make the characters unreal and make it very awkward to read. Second, don't be too emotional. The excessive internal monologues and long series of chats are a lightning point for me. They will make me suddenly lose my desire to read because they are too boring and protracted. Although I don't know how to write it, these two points are the most difficult for me to accept apart from the plot, just from the perspective of my feelings for people.

Boy, your sword is too heavy It's not the iron that's heavy It's the grievances you bear from yesterday It's the life and death you fear tomorrow You always look back at those severed ties of love And always looking up at those powerful enemies that have not yet arrived But I forgot to take a look at the people in my heart The wind ripples and everything is twisted The wind stops and the waves calm, the reflection forms its own peak It's not the country that messes with you, it's your heart If your heart is for the people, this sword will control the world

There are Banguiras that I like, Bite the Land Shark and Metagross! The reviews are also good, it has a part of life, and there is also a battle interspersed! Not bad

The location is Sinnoh, and I have conquered the Circle Bear. Will I accidentally get peat blocks to allow the Circle Bear to evolve into the Moon Bear?

I feel that the writing is good. The author will respond that I like this kind of division without any champion/leader. It is all cultivated by one's own efforts. It doesn't matter whether there is a heroine or not. Anyway, I like Zhulan and Touko [Chigua]

There is nothing surprising about my current viewing. I would like to make a suggestion here and try to help some of Xiaozhi's elves evolve. (To clarify, help Xiaozhi's elves evolve: it means that there are no elves in the anime who want to inhibit evolution from evolving.) Finally, let me say hey ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑Come on, Kuroki

I almost forgot to rate the author [laughs]

Can Steel Armored Crow get one, even if it is not the main force as a scout or a mount, and then a cat or dog can get one (Zeraora, Lucario) [laughs] Any of these (Blue Flame Blade Demon, Eluredo, Zeraora, Lucario, Koga Ninja, Steel Armored Crow).

I work super hard, and I guarantee one ticket every day, okay?

It looks great, why is the rating only 7.4?

The plot is very good, there are original plots and modified plots. How can I put it, it is not too abrupt and has many advantages. The only shortcoming is that it is too long, but the author updates it too slowly, which is not enough to read. It is really not enough to watch. Can't the author update twice a day? We already update twice a day, why not update three times a day?

I think Sirona can be the heroine and Lilusa's super evolution stone should be almost arranged.

Very unique. Five stars encourage you to be optimistic about you. Come on, author, and write more.

Very good. Can you write more about the main plot? I can occasionally write a chapter or two for my daily life.

Super addictive, super good-looking, five stars is his upper limit, not mine [smile]

The main plot is still very interesting, and Banguirus also impressed me a lot, and it made up for a lot of regrets, and the plot is not abrupt. Although there are many typos, it is still very interesting overall. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

I still like multiple attributes. The main character's attribute is Dragon, Ground, Rock and Steel. I can capture a few more Dragon Steel Pokémon, Bankiras and Biting Land Shark, and the other four are support. There are too many assists, and the ones like Crimson, Green, Green, Sirona and Dandy didn't go out of their way to form a team like Sandstorm. I feel that in the Pokémon world, the strongest Pokémon are the Pokémon. The more you write, the better, and the more detailed you are, the better, because there is simply not enough to read. Carlos is the best. I hope to write as much as possible. Please let me enjoy it, Arigado.

It's a good book. The writing at the beginning is not good, but the second part is pretty good. I haven't finished it yet. What kind of spirits does the protagonist have now? The Shield Sword Monster (before cutting), Emperor Nabo (selfish), Sai Fuhao and Aluminum Steel Bridge Dragon are really cool!

Look at those people who say bad things. This is the author's first time writing. Do you want to read it? If you don't want to read it, don't interfere with other people's writing mood. Others disturbed the book I was reading [grievance]

The story of traveling with Xiaozhi to make up for regrets is very interesting.

Is it okay for the author to give himself a five-star review?

Good is good, why are there so many reviews?

Why is it that the author writes one picture a day? Isn't it enough?

Come on, come on, come on, come on