Zenless Zone Zero: Twelve Talismans in Hand, Engaged to Ellen

Well, generally a more exciting book My overall evaluation of this book is not high, but not low either. Overall, it is still a good novel. There is not much to say about the plot. After all, it is a second-generation book. However, since I have not said how I have played JuZero, I have not heard much about those giant crabs behind you. If they are not the things in JuZero, then your plot is pretty good, because with the addition of this thing, I don't feel there is anything awkward. Instead, it can reveal the protagonist's strength. Otherwise, the protagonist will be too strong, and the book will not be worth reading. Then there is the character image. In fact, there is nothing to say about this, because there is this character image in the game, so it is very simple to describe the characters in it again, so the character image is very full, so you can only look at the character image of your protagonist, but to be honest, the character image of your protagonist cannot be said to be full, because for a normal protagonist, first of all I can kind of see it, for example, the bad ones are the kind of people who only care about themselves, or they have a sense of justice and a sense of loyalty. These are all things that a normal protagonist should have, so your protagonist must have a more prominent emotion. Otherwise, if you read too many novels, you will feel that it is not so prominent and cannot leave a deep impression. Finally, there is the description technique. Your description technique is actually quite commendable. It goes without saying that there is action description, and then there is appearance description and environment description. To be honest, there is also description, but not too much. There is also language description, but not much in fact. But I have hardly seen psychological description, so I need to focus on this part. The recommendation is to write more descriptions of appearance and environment, because if a person appears, no matter how many times he appears, you can describe him again. As long as you do not repeat the description, it can reflect the character's heart at that time. In this way, there will be a sense of alternation and confusion. The above is my comment, okay (๑°3°๑)

Author, we must have goals and directions as human beings. As a reader, I will give you a goal first. I will update 1 million words first. I think my request is not excessive at all [smile]. Don't force me to kneel down and beg you [cry], otherwise I will have to support the book [smile]

I really like watching this type. I wonder if the author can publish an issue with Lingmei as the heroine in the future. The novel has a single heroine and a harem, but I just like Ling as a person [smile][smile][smile]

It's a great fanfic that gave me a different understanding of JueZuZero. The plot in it is very popular. At the same time, the author should pay close attention to it. There are a lot of typos and some paragraphs have repeated words. I am also looking forward to the scene where Cao Yu and Ai Lian get married in the finale.

Not bad, it would be even better if she could really step on me with disgust.

It's so beautiful that I can't sleep at night [crying]

En... I haven't read this book for a long time, because I have a habit of reading the table of contents after reading a few chapters, because the table of contents will reflect the content of the chapter to a certain extent. When I saw the table of contents after the tenth chapter, it said something like campus military training, it was a bit weird. After the way of death and waking up and leaving, I knew that the old routine was coming. Just looking at the table of contents, I guessed it, saving people, leaving, waking up, pretending to be slapped in the face, the routine is a bit vulgar, the author's writing is not bad, it is good to read

Good content. I like it very much. I highly recommend it. Don't let this book stop being updated.

Why don't Bankai's toys have a mobile Ultraman armor? [Think]

To be honest, I can't appreciate it, maybe because of my own reasons. But in terms of writing alone, it's still very good.