Absolute Zone Zero: Holding Twelve Talismans, Betrothed to Elaine

Well, generally a more exciting book My overall evaluation of this book is not high, but not low either. Overall, it is still a good novel. There is not much to say about the plot. After all, it is a second-generation book. However, since I have not said how I have played JuZero, I have not heard much about those giant crabs behind you. If they are not the things in JuZero, then your plot is pretty good, because with the addition of this thing, I don't feel there is anything awkward. Instead, it can reveal the protagonist's strength. Otherwise, the protagonist will be too strong, and the book will not be worth reading. Then there is the character image. In fact, there is nothing to say about this, because there is this character image in the game, so it is very simple to describe the characters in it again, so the character image is very full, so you can only look at the character image of your protagonist, but to be honest, the character image of your protagonist cannot be said to be full, because for a normal protagonist, first of all I can kind of see it, for example, the bad ones are the kind of people who only care about themselves, or they have a sense of justice and a sense of loyalty. These are all things that a normal protagonist should have, so your protagonist must have a more prominent emotion. Otherwise, if you read too many novels, you will feel that it is not so prominent and cannot leave a deep impression. Finally, there is the description technique. Your description technique is actually quite commendable. It goes without saying that there is action description, and then there is appearance description and environment description. To be honest, there is also description, but not too much. There is also language description, but not much in fact. But I have hardly seen psychological description, so I need to focus on this part. The recommendation is to write more descriptions of appearance and environment, because if a person appears, no matter how many times he appears, you can describe him again. As long as you do not repeat the description, it can reflect the character's heart at that time. In this way, there will be a sense of alternation and confusion. The above is my comment, okay (๑°3°๑)

Author, we must have goals and directions as human beings. As a reader, I will give you a goal first. I will update 1 million words first. I think my request is not excessive at all [smile]. Don't force me to kneel down and beg you [cry], otherwise I will have to support the book [smile]

I really like watching this type. I wonder if the author can publish an issue with Lingmei as the heroine in the future. The novel has a single heroine and a harem, but I just like Ling as a person [smile][smile][smile]

It's a great fanfic that gave me a different understanding of JueZuZero. The plot in it is very popular. At the same time, the author should pay close attention to it. There are a lot of typos and some paragraphs have repeated words. I am also looking forward to the scene where Cao Yu and Ai Lian get married in the finale.

Not bad, it would be even better if she could really step on me with disgust.

It's so beautiful that I can't sleep at night [crying]

Good content. I like it very much. I highly recommend it. Don't let this book stop being updated.

En... I haven't read this book for a long time, because I have a habit of reading the table of contents after reading a few chapters, because the table of contents will reflect the content of the chapter to a certain extent. When I saw the table of contents after the tenth chapter, it said something like campus military training, it was a bit weird. After the way of death and waking up and leaving, I knew that the old routine was coming. Just looking at the table of contents, I guessed it, saving people, leaving, waking up, pretending to be slapped in the face, the routine is a bit vulgar, the author's writing is not bad, it is good to read

The author hopes you can work hard, I will keep it for a while (give you a little flower) (gift)

To be honest, I can't appreciate it, maybe because of my own reasons. But in terms of writing alone, it's still very good.

Why don't Bankai's toys have a mobile Ultraman armor? [Think]

Can two chapters a day be enough? [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] It's so short [crying]

Author, I advise you to read Chapter 10 immediately today. Don't force me to kneel down and beg you.

The personality is a bit broken, but it's good [laughter][laugh][laugh]

Brother, please update again. I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body now. I feel uncomfortable if I can't see them for a day.

Ai Lian's hair falls like an ink waterfall, her tail is like a dark flame swaying gently, her eyebrows are like sharp blades, her legs are like jade strings, her pupils are like broken stars in the abyss, her hands are like warm jade, and her armor is like frost. No matter life or death, I will always be loyal to Ailian until death.

I came here from the previous book, so I must support it.

Even though he is invincible, he still beats Hiroko

Yes, but not enough [smile] Really short [smile]

A bad start but very good [Like][Like][Like]

So cool, the plot is good! ! !

Beautiful, I like it very much

Ah, can there be a few more chapters? Don't make me kneel down and beg you [crying]

The author is so good at making jokes, I was so funny, so sweet

I hope there will be more books with a single heroine, Ai Lian.

It's a campus love story set in Zero Zone, which is quite exciting to read without thinking.

Very beautiful, so beautiful that I can't stop watching it

It looks great. I am a novice at Zero Zone. The plot is similar to the game. It saves a lot of time. It is friendly to novices. The plot is simple and easy to understand, and the fighting scenes are exciting! It's just a little bit less, I can't see enough Combat Rating: 5 Sweetness rating: 5 Update speed rating: 3 Character Rating: 4 Overall rating: 4 Not bad, but the ending was a little rushed

The character creation is very realistic. The plot is very good

I cried when I saw the ending