Quick Transmigration: Turning the Tables on the Mary Sue Plot

The first world is quite good. Although the character creation is slightly flawed, the flaws are not concealed. The second world is more chaotic. Is it considered a double cleansing to separate body and soul like this? Also, the heroine's affection for Lin is too deep. It feels a bit deliberate. In the other two worlds, Lin has grown up a bit, at least not so useless. This is just my personal opinion.

The scenes were on point, but there was no kissing, hugging or lifting.

To be honest, it's a little uncomfortable to watch, it's just that kind of feeling, but overall it's pretty good. I can still watch it and keep working hard. Author [Chigua]

If you want to go through it quickly, it's best not to drag it out for too long in one plane 😘 The emotional line in the second plane is too messy, so what is the situation with the original male protagonist? Isn't it because of Shuang Jie? There are so many situations involved, the whole plot is too messy. I hope you can comb it again. Can you give me more sugar? 🤔

The plot has twists and turns and is attractive enough. Although there are some parts that I didn't understand clearly, it looks good overall.

Okay ~ looks good and recommended ~

I really want to watch the extra, but I don't mind if it's not available. The author's writing is pretty good, 😘😘

First give me a five-star review [Chigua]