Comprehensive Comic Doomsday: Starting from Daily Life to Conquer the Heroine

It's actually pretty good, but it's just like writing a composition. A composition is different from a novel. A novel is to write a paragraph in a composition into five or six chapters in a novel. That is to say, it is written very carefully and from a third perspective. This does not look very good. It is better to use a first perspective. Then the character's language and dialogue should be richer, and the actions should be more detailed and smooth. Come on!