Pokemon: I, Ash, Am No Ordinary Trainer

The author must have more female protagonists

The plot is great and I like the character of the main character. Moreover, the author's writing style is good and he has captured the charm of Pokémon. The author writes all his own plots and the writing is very good. There are many female leads, some of whom I don't even know [face covering], but I'm a fan of Zina anyway. I beg the protagonist to write more stories about Serena.

I have read a lot of Pokémon books, and it makes sense that I have never surpassed Mr. Lu. [Pause face][Pave face][Paoke face] They all write about anime, but the anime is so long, and I have to go through gyms one after another and the daily life is so long that I don't want to read or read anymore, but there are some books It will be gone as soon as you keep it. I don't know if it's because the timeline of writing anime directly feels too slow. Teacher Lu mainly has his own plot and the theatrical version will go through it quickly. If anyone wants to take the same path and Zhu Yu is in front, it will be easier to compare it to death [face covering]

Good-looking, clear logic, not invincible at the beginning, and not written in a fantasy beast-control style

I feel like it's a pretty good Pokémon fanfic in Tomato, but there are some parts that can still make people feel uncomfortable, such as the beginning. But overall, it's still readable. I'd like to give it a five-star encouragement. The further back you look, the more uncomfortable it becomes

It's a good start, it's very new. It's not like those fanfics that all start the same, and it doesn't follow the plot of the anime. As long as the poisonous points are not so serious that it makes the story unreadable, it's good. After all, there are fanfics without poisonous points. Even anime has poisonous points. It's okay as long as it's not too outrageous.

This book barely scores an 8. I also read the author's previous book. It's better than the previous book because it doesn't have so many reverse sequences and is less brain-consuming. However, the storytelling of this book is not as strong as the previous one. The plot is too bland. Still not strong enough. You can sort out the story of the last book and improve your writing skills. If you re-release it, it should be popular. Because there are many authors who do this

Among the many fanfics I have read, the quality is quite high. Come on, try to keep it up.

It's a very logical story. It has the basic plot of the original text but is rationalized and normalized. It fits my ideas quite well. I've watched more than 60 of them so far. It's pretty good.

My favorite author is Mew, and Gengar Kirby. There is also the original work of the protagonist. He probably doesn't have any special abilities. Can you arrange it for the protagonist?