Pokémon: I, Xiaozhi, Am No Ordinary Trainer.

The author must have more female protagonists

The plot is great and I like the character of the main character. Moreover, the author's writing style is good and he has captured the charm of Pokémon. The author writes all his own plots and the writing is very good. There are many female leads, some of whom I don't even know [face covering], but I'm a fan of Zina anyway. I beg the protagonist to write more stories about Serena.

I have read a lot of Pokémon books, and it makes sense that I have never surpassed Mr. Lu. [Pause face][Pave face][Paoke face] They all write about anime, but the anime is so long, and I have to go through gyms one after another and the daily life is so long that I don't want to read or read anymore, but there are some books It will be gone as soon as you keep it. I don't know if it's because the timeline of writing anime directly feels too slow. Teacher Lu mainly has his own plot and the theatrical version will go through it quickly. If anyone wants to take the same path and Zhu Yu is in front, it will be easier to compare it to death [face covering]

Good-looking, clear logic, not invincible at the beginning, and not written in a fantasy beast-control style

I feel like it's a pretty good Pokémon fanfic in Tomato, but there are some parts that can still make people feel uncomfortable, such as the beginning. But overall, it's still readable. I'd like to give it a five-star encouragement. The further back you look, the more uncomfortable it becomes

This book barely scores an 8. I also read the author's previous book. It's better than the previous book because it doesn't have so many reverse sequences and is less brain-consuming. However, the storytelling of this book is not as strong as the previous one. The plot is too bland. Still not strong enough. You can sort out the story of the last book and improve your writing skills. If you re-release it, it should be popular. Because there are many authors who do this

It's a good start, it's very new. It's not like those fanfics that all start the same, and it doesn't follow the plot of the anime. As long as the poisonous points are not so serious that it makes the story unreadable, it's good. After all, there are fanfics without poisonous points. Even anime has poisonous points. It's okay as long as it's not too outrageous.

Among the many fanfics I have read, the quality is quite high. Come on, try to keep it up.

It's a very logical story. It has the basic plot of the original text but is rationalized and normalized. It fits my ideas quite well. I've watched more than 60 of them so far. It's pretty good.

My favorite author is Mew, and Gengar Kirby. There is also the original work of the protagonist. He probably doesn't have any special abilities. Can you arrange it for the protagonist?

If I could travel to the Pokémon world, my iconic Pokémon would be Digimon, and then I would open a Pokémon breeding house and hatch Pokémon in the room every day.

Five stars can be given before chapter 20, and a maximum of four stars can be given after chapter 20.

I have read more than 100 chapters so far and it is still good. It's a pity that there are too many Pokémon that have been collected. [Thinking] Some Pokémon have not appeared for a long time after being collected, and their strength has improved a lot when they appear again. There is no specific training process and it feels too rushed. Without the training process with Pokémon, I always feel that I am missing a lot of bonds.

I've finished reading it. Updates are too slow, but it's interesting and lacks some emotion.

I hope the protagonist can conquer Suo Cailing later Still heterochromatic

Let's change the summer camp to be when Ash is 15 years old. When receiving Pokémon, Ash said he would get Pikachu for three years. If Ash is 7 years old in the summer camp as written above and 11 years have passed since he became an adult, how could Pikachu not be at the gym level?

It's okay, keep it up

So far it's pretty good

Is there a Pokémon Horizon?

Come on, Haji

I like it very much, very beautiful

Come on, come on, come on

Very good, well written

I watched the author enter the palace [laughing evilly]

A good book, but can the author build a skirt?

It's interesting, but there are too many deliberately arranged Pokémon.

No little blue? Will there be Meiyi or not?

It was okay, I caught a marsupial and a Slowpoke [blowing kiss]

Does the author have Mei and Touko?

Although there are some mistakes, it is really good, but will there be Mei and Touko later?