When the Fog Lifts, You're Gone

The writing is good, the article is as beautiful as prose, praise, praise, praise

It's just not divided into paragraphs. The story is okay and the writing is good. The dialogues need to be divided into paragraphs. It's so dense that it hurts my eyes.

This is my first time writing, so the writing style may be a bit childish, but fortunately the plot is good. Although the number of words is not many, the story is compact, so it is still worth reading. Please support the novice author.