Time Traveling Moon: I, Black Rock, Am Actually the Larvae of the Beast?

In line with the principle of not blindly giving five stars, I carefully evaluated it and finally chose to give it four stars. Let's talk about the advantages first. I am currently writing the third volume. I think the original plot parts of the first and third volumes are very good, and the rhythm is well controlled. At the same time, one of the characteristics of Xingyue is the strict setting. I personally only watched the Fate series, so I don't know much about it. But based on the feedback in the comment area, there should be no loopholes, and there are no poisonous points. It can be regarded as inheriting a fine tradition. It can be seen that the author also has his own thinking based on the original settings. For example, the Chinese part and the identity of the protagonist are all very good ideas. They have been extended but did not collapse the world view. It seems quite comfortable. The ability part is simple and easy to understand. People who have never understood Black Rock Shooter can easily understand this book. It is written in detail and takes care of outsiders. It is not too rigid and it is reasonably integrated into the world view instead of forcing two combat power systems to fight. Except for the fact that the battle after the Holy Grail War chapter was boring because of its incredible combat power, it didn't have many crashes. The only flaw, or rather bad point, is the part towards the end of the first volume where Sakura is forced to be stupid. The second volume, this volume roughly explains the setting of the protagonist, but except for saving the doctor at the end, there is no change from the original work. Sakura and the protagonist joining Chaldea have no substantive effect, nothing has changed, and there are no outstanding points in the plot. The protagonist's participation rate is very high, but the solutions are all solved by Fujimaru Ritsuka, who can actually solve them by himself This problem is handled very poorly. It is basically no different from the original plot in which a person is forced into the plot. Moreover, it is very stiff to put all these things on the protagonist... In terms of look and feel, it actually feels more natural than directly appearing as a surprise soldier at the singular point of the end game. Of course, some issues about the identity of the protagonist have to be narrated again. In addition, it is too forceful that the protagonist forgets the plot he knew in his previous life. He is forced to forget it in order to advance the plot. How could he have forgotten so completely? He was an inhuman existence in the first place, and he was not very young. How could his memory be so poor? However, after reading the third volume, I don't know whether this is a poisonous point or a deliberate foreshadowing left by the author. In fact, I want to give it three stars. The impression of the second volume made me give up on this book for a while, but now that I have read the latest chapter, I feel pretty good. I have almost forgotten the poisonous and disgusting feeling before, and I am interested in reading it. Moreover, I think the three stars of "average" are too harsh. In fact, this book is quite good, with some outstanding points, above average, so I give it four stars. I don't know if the author is really seriously ill and has difficulty moving. I hope it's just a novel setting. If I really hope that you will get better one day, I also hope that you can continue to bring us better works.

The first chapter is finished and sprinkled with flowers! Invincible Literature, however, has more plot than combat power. The protagonist's travels and experience of discovering himself and beasts in the first chapter are even more lamentable about the entanglement of human evil and human love. Rather than saying that the first chapter describes Ma Tao's experience, I personally prefer to say that it is the awakening process of human love. I'm really looking forward to the author's future performance and reminders for updates.

Very good novel that made my caress spin, Love Camelot

Can the teacher update ten times a day? If that doesn't work, can the teacher send me the address privately☆ Don't worry, I won't do anything... At most, I can just stand behind the teacher with a small whip and urge the teacher to write (๑＞ڡ＜)☆[busi]

Good-looking, no ambiguous male partners, good-looking group

After reading the first two volumes, I was actually a little confused, because before the Seventh Singularity I always thought it was a female Ritsuka, but suddenly I noticed that it was always him and thought it was a typo. Later, when I wrote down the details, I found out that it was a male Ritsuka. The above is a digression. As a fic, it is good, but not very good, because it basically follows the original plot. Even with the existence of Kuroiwa, there have been some changes, but the general process has not changed. Sakura and Illya often become invisible. In addition, it is basically from Kuroiwa's perspective and a lot of plot skips, which makes the progress very fast. The first part is over in two volumes. However, the third volume should be an original volume. I heard from the author that there will be alien gods in the future. The first two volumes are well written but lack real originality. I don't know if the third volume will be good.

The author must not stop updating like the National Games book [crying] Although the current data is not that impressive

Oh my god, why is this old director so bad? [Laughs evilly]

Author, I only have one request. Please write at least 600,000 words. Is there a book club?

The author should be a super senior Yuechu player. For example, I didn't understand the Absolute Warcraft Frontline when I watched it, and I don't really understand those settings [laughing and crying]. I only know that divinity is a debuff.

The writing is very good, praise the rock temple!

After fighting the mainstream Holy Grail War and the Absolute Warcraft Front, after completing the Burning of Humanity There is also an original quest to find the seven holy spears. Go back 14,000 years ago to build a holy sword to drive away the star soldiers, and start to shape the protagonist's personality. Maybe someone will freeze it later? Human nature is so miserable 233

Super pretty! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh not enough! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Among the fans of Xingyue Nitian, she is relatively normal and good-looking.

It's good to watch, and the plot is well detailed. Although the protagonist claims to be not good at using his brain, he is always calm and rational, which is very appetizing. [Eat melon]

It's so cool to write, the heroine is almost invincible, and the rest should be basically the author's original lines, but why did it stop updating!

Please keep writing.

Not bad, highly recommended China chapter is a bit boring

How do you feel now? [Sinister smile]

Come on, author, I hope I can update it soon, and I hope you can keep at it [Like]

I just happened to be re-watching Fate recently and saw such a high-quality fanfic. It's great [like] [like] [like] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It's beautiful. I haven't read a Xingyue novel like this in a long time.

Just two words, beautiful!

It's really good, I like it

Not bad oh oh oh

Nice looking, to my taste

It's a pretty good book, but it's a pity that I'm not very interested in Xingyue

It's so beautiful. Why is it updated weekly? [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Fgo is an unquestionable fan masterpiece. Although there are many private designs in it, the reason for the private design is that the original design is not clear in the first place. In one sentence, it looks good.

It's ok, it's very nice, cheers to the author [Like][Like][Like]

It's so beautiful. Come on, author.