The Tender Kite Returns to His Embrace

This book is like fine dog food mixed with glass slag. If you don't choose too much, it's worth reading. The author's strengths are outstanding. His writing style is good and his language is humorous. From time to time, the writing is interspersed with some characters' remarks, which act as seasonings and always make readers laugh. The plot is also twists and turns, creating the excitement that a book should have. These are all worthy of praise. But the shortcomings are also obvious. Some characters are weakly portrayed, and the plot advancement is reasonable but unreasonable. Take Pei Ziyan as an example. The book assumes that he and Shen Yuan once fell in love, but the author did not describe how they fell in love or how much they loved each other. This makes the plot of the two people getting along very awkward. The setting makes sense, but is very abrupt. There is also a palace banquet in the same place. The author in the previous article did not depict Shen Yuan caring about the refugees in his hometown, but only eating, drinking and having fun while thinking about escaping. During the palace banquet, Shen Yuan suddenly lamented the suffering of the people's livelihood, which was neither in line with the character nor out of place. It is normal to use settings to promote the development of the plot, but what is more important is the explanation and verification of the settings. You cannot add settings and use them directly to push the plot, otherwise readers will definitely be [angry]. I also hope that the author can keep up his efforts and write better articles [Top post][Top post][Top post]

The heroine is the legitimate daughter of the Hou family. After her mother died, she brought a token to Beijing to recognize her relatives. However, she was deliberately sold into a brothel. She met the prince who was drugged and pretended to be a wealthy businessman. She coaxed the hero to redeem her body. In the process, the hero fell in love with her. He tried to escape several times but failed. The hero did not know the identity of the heroine. When I was young, I wanted to marry the heroine, teach her chess, calligraphy and painting, learn about the capital, and visit the bookkeeping shop, so that the heroine could subtly understand and adapt to the life in the capital and the East Palace. As a result, the heroine dumped her because of the male protagonist, and even ran away with money. The male protagonist felt like he was defrauded of money and sex by a scumbag. The heroine is very studious and is a growth-oriented heroine. She has a strong will towards the light and loves money. She wants to make more money from her father, save a dowry and find a marriage. Later, she meets the hero at a palace banquet and is scared to death. Haha, the hero realizes that the heroine is not enlightened, so he slowly guides the heroine to grow up quickly, spends time cultivating feelings with her, and makes her fall in love with him unknowingly. The male protagonist is very gentle and gives him a sense of security. The female protagonist is cute and adorable. She likes to have secret love affairs with the male protagonist. She is cowardly and well-behaved. She is very good at spoiling and bullying others. She is very clever and often makes the male protagonist feel very upset. It is quite beautiful.

Although I have just started writing this book, I can feel the pull between the male and female protagonists, and I am looking forward to the next plot direction. Come on, author! I want to see the heroine escape and the hero and heroine reunite [Adoration]

Personally, I think it's pretty good-looking. Although the heroine is not very powerful, she has a positive outlook on life, is motivated, and has a bottom line. She is also a normal ordinary person. She has no golden fingers or strong help. She has to rely on herself. She feels very flesh and blood.

There is no time travel, no system, and no cheats. I really like this kind of pure romance. The male protagonist is affectionate and resourceful. He is a bit sinister and surrenders when he meets the female protagonist. Most of the time, the male protagonist is a gentle person. The heroine is simple and kind but not a brainless white lotus. She knows what she wants. After reading this novel, you will feel sorry for the heroine's experience, and you will be immersed in the love of the hero for the heroine. Both the hero and the heroine have their own charm.

So far everything is good, here are some suggestions: The plot can be sped up appropriately. The heroine still needs more growth. It would be better to arrange more important events to test her, which will also help her to act opposite the male protagonist in the future. Now, I'm afraid the female protagonist really can't be the male protagonist's comrade-in-arms or good wife. This situation is very dangerous. There is another bigger question: Theoretically, the heroine should be grateful to the hero, because the hero redeemed her and helped her out of the sea of suffering. But emotionally, the relationship between the two parties is very abnormal. It is similar to friends rather than husband and wife. It is a situation where the body has been trained, but it is okay if you don't think about it carefully. The more you think about it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. It can only be said that there is no perfect love after all. A big event is coming. I hope the heroine can grow better after her revenge.

This book is really funny. This heroine is a wonderful person. [Sending Hearts] There is a timid sense of joy that belongs to ordinary people. There is nothing earth-shattering, nor any dramatic twist, but just the development of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very comfortable. I don't know why it's only around seven o'clock, [face covering] My favorite book friends, please join me and get five stars [eating melon] Oh my god, I beat the old master to death with random punches. Could this heroine be the legendary natural fool who specializes in dealing with all kinds of sinister, hypocritical, and scheming people?

It's pretty good and quite sweet. In my opinion, the male protagonist's concerns above are the responsible thing to do. Without God's perspective, I would not know that the female protagonist wants to escape. Only by considering it carefully can we treat the female protagonist as a human being. It is normal for the heroine to always want to escape. The path she chooses is the best one she can choose. The reader knows that the hero is reliable, but the heroine does not. The heroine is very insecure. Don't say anything unrealistic or impossible. Everyone knows that the novel itself is not a product of reality, and this is a female channel. Treat the female protagonist well and keep yourself clean.

Super good-looking. The heroine had a humble status in the early stage. Her mother died of illness, a natural disaster occurred, and she was sold into a brothel. However, she did not want to meet the prince who came to provide disaster relief and was plotted to be poisoned by love. She became the antidote for the prince, and then gradually won the prince's heart. The heroine was ambitious and very sober. At the beginning, she only I want to escape from the brothel and go to the capital to find Grandpa Hou. From the beginning, the heroine has grown up little by little and loves to learn. The hero is a love brain. Ever since he knew that he fell in love with the heroine, he has been planning to make her the crown prince. It is a very beautiful Gong Duquan story [send heart] [send heart]

Very good. Although Shen Yuan is in jail, she still maintains an active pursuit. She is occasionally clumsy, but she is also very smart, but she sees the problem from a different perspective. Xie Huaishen is a persistent and courageous person, so he always pursues what he wants and gets it. He, he is indeed a good match. Shen Zhizhou and Xia Qianxue separated because of their youthful enthusiasm and love without considering the cruelty of reality. They should have never regretted falling in love, but they just regretted that they failed to consider everything comprehensively at that time. Liu Xunfang lives a very free and easy life. She pursues whatever she is pursuing at the moment, does not care about the world, and lives for herself. Gu Huaijin and the seventh princess had a twist of fate. They were originally good partners and could even become a couple, but they had to separate due to estrangement. They were like flowers that would not bear fruit. They were beautiful but easy to fall apart. They were not wrong. It was just a cycle of cause and effect. The extra episode gave a good result, and the bright and passionate love of the seventh princess was fulfilled.