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Not bad, not bad. The star in this book is very healthy. He can run and jump. He can also fly with the wings of wind. The other stars are so envious [laughing evilly]

The previous plots of Inazuma were very frustrating [laughing and crying], especially the Mondstadt chapter was a mess, with all kinds of disgusting people killing fools and ladies, and the God of Wind running out to save them, and then all kinds of disgusting people PUA let Xing work [vomit] After that, when fighting the Wind Demon Dragon, any random Abyss monster of a cat or a dog , was able to block Xing's life-destroying energy attack [laughing awkwardly] and stabbed Xing through with his backhand... No, bro [laughing awkwardly] What's your level? The Abyss can't even take down a small world bubble like Teyvat that uses elemental power. How dare you touch the Destiny Walker who uses imaginary energy? [Vomit] The Abyss is so awesome. Doesn't Nanook have to kowtow to you when he comes? [Laughing and crying] Even if you want to save the life of the star, you don't have to engage in such a disgusting plot. [Awkward laughter] The plot after that is not easy to evaluate. Ina Wife just started to enjoy killing [Admiration] Do you like to play conspiracy and make me sick? Do you like to use official language to make things difficult for me? Just grind them into powder and beat them into a pulp [laughing] Is it disgusting to see stragglers coming out? Still want to clear your name? Directly hacking to death [laughing] This kind of plot is what everyone wants to see [laughing] I specifically named the doctor, and I also want to capture the star for experiments [laughing], I hope it doesn't die too easily, it's best to capture it and take it to World City to entertain it [laughing]

Xing Bao is really energetic, cute and handsome [Sending Hearts]. So far, except for the fact that the Abyss Apostle can transfer the power of destruction at the beginning is outrageous, the other parts are pretty cool and cool. Xing's character is also very consistent with the game [Sending Hearts]

Simple Star and Simple Paimon. Who is eating until he or she is half to death? The character is well written, he has a basic understanding of human nature, and he often does inexplicable things. The combat power is a bit lacking, but it doesn't matter. Overall, it's very good. Just update it regularly. I'm still writing. The worldview has finally crossed over to Bengtie. This is the case with many books. The one about Genshin Impact is about Bengtie, and the one about Bengtie is about Genshin Impact. Why is the rating so low?

My evaluation of this novel is very good. Because what comes to this world is not the sky and the moon, but the stars Xing is not like Xiao Huangmao whose full strength is sealed. Xiao Huangmao without power can only be forced to be a Huangmao camera, and Paimon will not be just like a pendant like in the original work. The star has the power to reject everything, and Paimon gradually possesses the power to protect the star and becomes more mature and sensible. Therefore, this book will be more realistic, and some plots will not be like those in 12+. Readers who come to comment can give it priority After all, Xing is like a newborn, a person who has just begun to take on a human form and understands human nature. There is no distinction between good and evil (she was only a few months old), so she won't be polite when she makes a move. And the "villains" in it will be more ruthless, and of course the end will not be too good. But what I feel most good about is the plot created by the author himself (should it be created by himself? After all, I only read novels and don't play games. I have read a lot of novels, but many of them contain the author's own personal products, so I am not completely sure) Very good This novel is really good

So far, it's still pretty good-looking, much better than the random crappy orange writing in the original work. That's right, when will the Star Core Demon know that he is playing with the power of destiny and that he is meeting the Star God? @ [Your fine taste] [Your fine taste] [You fine taste] [Your fine taste]

It's really beautiful. To be honest, I have always liked Paimon as a traveler companion. After all, the traveler cannot always be with Paimon, so as a lonely pioneer star, he can be their well-deserved best partner! They support each other, tolerate each other, share blessings and hardships, and both of them tend to be pure children in mind. This kind of friendship is really warm It's really good. The protagonist Xing and Paimon are restored very well. I hope the author can keep up the good work. Come on!

Ouch! This is the protagonist! This is how the protagonist should be treated! Long live the Bank Bat Man! Long live the little raccoon! Long live the Star Core Spirit! Long live the trash can! ! ! !

It looks good, but I still feel a little uncomfortable watching Xing Bao in Genshin Impact [facepalm] Without real friends like Yue Yue and Dan Heng around me, and without the train as my place to go, I feel so lonely inexplicably.

I feel that there is a high probability that the star that hunts will be a bow and arrow or a pistol. I even feel that the author can create an original star that hunts. Wind attribute/hunting, basic attack (wind attribute attack damage), combat skills (strengthening the basic attack to increase the number of damage, and perform multiple wind attribute damage according to the consumed combat skill points), talent (every time we cause a wind attribute damage to the enemy, we will obtain a patrol skill) Order, the Order of Hunting can replace the consumption of achievement points) The special skill is "Chasing the stars, chasing the moon, penetrating the stars!" (When releasing the skill, you will gain 12 points of the Order of the Hunt, and gain a defense-ignoring effect for 3 rounds!) Even the protected traffic light will be penetrated and damaged! [Sneaky smile] Can you write some other content before the main plot is released, such as some side plots and event plots, or write side stories, to transition a little bit, and then wait until the next main storyline of the game is revealed, and then write the main plot [top post]

Don't listen to other people's nonsense. This book is really good and the plot changes are perfect. It's not like some people can't do things. It's true that you can do anything.

At first, I only read the title of the book. I thought it was a Nanping novel with a confusing setting. I saw it several times and didn't click on it. Today, I accidentally clicked on the wrong one. When I saw that the main character in the introduction was Xing, I immediately became interested. The writing is very good. Keep up the good work! ! !

Kaicunhu may have been a bit bad before going to Liyue, but it got much better afterward. Is the title "Batman and the White Fairy" or "Big Love Star Lord"? Gang Tianli is very happy, but Paimeng is almost gone. I am very unhappy) (

The writing is good, but some parts lack polish, and many moving parts are not well described. When changing some places, you can add more of your own stories to make them less boring or too similar. But the author's ideas are really good, and I was really moved when I read some parts, especially the part about the memory of Xumi's forbidden knowledge. It's very touching. Nowadays, novels rarely have such similar plots. Most of them only have scenes of the protagonist and important characters. I hope the author will continue to persevere. I like it very much. After reading the rest, I found that the plots are all original and very creative, but they still have the same shortcomings as before. In some places, the narrative is not comprehensive enough, and I always feel that the shortcomings are not expanded. The plot is very interesting, and I feel that the author is getting more and more into the state. The part where the protagonist revisits his old place and falls into nothingness is very well written. Come on.

It's pretty good. It's very good in fan fiction, especially Genshin Impact. It writes a different story in one context. It's either a clichéd plot that follows Huang Mao or Lily at every turn, or it has nothing to do with the Great Love Immortal. It's just for traffic.

It's a good fanfic, and it's quite interesting to watch Xing's adventures in Teyvat. And the plot transitions and unfolding are very smooth. An adventure belonging to StarHub Paimon! Looking forward to the author's next post!

[Face-covering] A star-core spirit that has begun to take on a human form in the true sense and has some understanding of human nature [Face-covering] The chaotic and good protagonist [Face-covering] will not have the kind of incident where a bunch of people jump out in front of the protagonist to output, and then the protagonist can't let it go [Face-covering]

This book deserves six stars. The plot is very comfortable to watch. Xing Bao has many highlight moments as the protagonist. He is really handsome! None of the other characters look OOC. The relationship between Baseball Man and the white fairy is also very warm. Paimon is no longer a bystander, but a friend and comrade who can fight with Xingbao.

Nice! The Great Love Star Lord has become a star god, can he still exert his power in other ways? At that time, according to the historical records, they will be sent to the Star God. They are pioneering, destroying, protecting, harmonious, and hunting. They are the number one combat force under the throne [laughter]

This sentence comes from the Latin "Per aspera ad astra", and the translated meaning is, "Looking for this hard journey to reach the sky." The first half of the sentence has the same meaning as "May this journey", and the second half also has the same meaning as "The End of the Stars". Moreover, this translation is indeed unique to Beng Tie. I can't blame you for thinking about it, and this sentence is indeed very suitable for the situation. Moreover, this sentence is very consistent with the spirit of space travel, and it is completely reasonable to think of it.

Very beautifully written. I've been through the Nata plot these past few days, and I feel very complicated. When will Xingbao arrive at Nata? It would be nice to save one more person [I'm about to cry]

If MiHoYo adapts Genshin Impact from this novel, the plot won't be so outrageous [Thoughts]

This book is already considered a masterpiece, the characters are invincible and not OOC, and it has an original plot that is not cliche. It is an absolute masterpiece. Then there is a big shortcoming --------- that is the name, like the one given by the new Tomato author from V1 to V3. The most important thing is that there is no prefix, which means that this book cannot be found at all when searching directly for Bengtie or Yuanshen. Even if you search according to the fandom and then search with a high score, you still can't find it (my personal experience). I still found this book through other people's bookshelves. Obviously the author has fan books about Naruto and Bentetsu in his own bookshelf. It is obvious that they all have prefixes, but the books written by the author have no prefixes at all, so this is a big shortcoming (it is understood that the author has also changed the title of the book) To sum up, the book is a good book, but the disadvantage is that it cannot be found.

Hey hey hey hey hey hey star treasure... The last few pictures have been seriously OOC and too abstract, so I will withdraw them first.

It's good-looking and breaks away from the original plot of Genshin Impact There are too many people making bad jokes in the comment area, which has affected the perception. I hope the author will not be affected.

This article about the master-disciple relationship is so touching! The moment Gan Yu put on her red-rimmed glasses, she knew her home was gone! [Crying] I want to say to Gan Yu in Original God: Go home often! Otherwise, when your home is gone, you will never be able to go back!

Author, I previously put my progress in the extra chapters. When I saw the update, I found that the latest chapters were still extra chapters, so I quit. It wasn't until I found out that there were more than 40 unread chapters that I discovered that the extra chapters and the main text updates were separate. I suspect that some readers are like me and don't know that the main text has been updated.

It feels good-looking. The character's personality is well developed, and the content is also very interesting. I recommend watching it. I was fascinated from the beginning and I kept watching and watching. I highly recommend watching this.

I don't know why many people say that the combat power has collapsed. When I first arrived in Mondstadt, Xing was just the Lord of Destruction, not an envoy. In Collapse of Iron, Cocolia could penetrate the Lord of Destruction with an ice spear. The strength of Cocolia in the second stage should be regarded as stimulating the core power of the Star. According to the previous plot It seems that I have not fully stimulated the power of the star core, and can only be regarded as a destiny walker of destruction. In terms of Teyvat's plot combat power, I think Tianli should not be regarded as an envoy, but should be regarded as the kind of strength that can explode stars (I don't know much about the plot of Genshin Impact, now My impression of the original god is still in Fontaine) I think the strength of the abyss can be considered to be able to compete with the laws of heaven. From the perspective of the Destroyer Lord who has not fully activated the power of destruction at the beginning, the abyss of this level may really be able to do what is shown in the plot (the above is just a personal People speculate) (Mainly, neither Genshen nor Bengtie has a clear description of the combat power, but I think they should all be on the tree of the virtual world. This is what I can guess based on the plot. If I am wrong, feel free to correct me [exploration] [exploration])

I think Xing is okay, just show off a little more [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]