He Entered the World of Immortality Indiscriminately and Became a Crazy Critic to His Senior Brother Bai Yueguang.

I have been reading this book for a long time, but I feel that this one is pretty good. At first, Xiao Yuyu just wanted to complete the task, but later he worked hard to protect his senior brothers and sisters who were like family. When faced with saving them, and continued to use the spells, he would hurt himself or even endanger his own life, he drew the charms without hesitation. Ji Zhi is not like other male protagonists who are cold and cold at first. He is reborn, but he cares about his senior brothers and sisters very much and will cook for them. He is afraid that someone will hurt them and does not want them to repeat the ending of their previous life. The impression given to me by the Yinshan disciples is that they care about each of them and are willing to pay the price to make their lives better. The change in Xi He is the most obvious here. The contradiction in her body is easy to feel. After all, her identity is indeed embarrassing in this world of immortality. It looks pretty good so far. I hope that the writing will get better and better, and that their complete story line can be developed normally and continue to be updated. The most important thing is that I hope it doesn't end unfinished! Big cheers for the author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's beautiful and big, and it feels like a group portrait. Everyone's personality is different. Everyone in the Yin Sect is really sincere. From the beginning, the heroine just wanted to complete the task to later on, she really took every brother and sister into her heart. It felt very good. The heroine finally found her own family. Come on, come on, come on, come on

Serialization is a pain in my life,,, but it's really good. I couldn't find a good book. I clicked on this one by accident. It's really good. Good luck.

It's so good to watch, especially the heroine. The story of how she ascended to the next level just after becoming a master. This is the first time I've watched it [laughing and crying]

One word: absolutely! It's just that there's a little bit of it [I understand]

I'm on the wrong side again!!! It hurts, it really hurts, but the plot is still very good, the content is very novel, and the writing is also very good. I look forward to the future. I have a question, in the story line without the heroine, how did the last elder accept a disciple? Only by accepting disciples can one ascend. If the elders in the previous life did not ascend, why were only the disciples the ones who died?

This book must be a potential good book [crying] There is no traditional bloody plot, the protagonists are all sober, and the descriptions in some places are really good, the atmosphere is full, and my eyes are moist when I read it. The male and female protagonists have upright views, and there is no machismo or egotism... They are both kind and brave good babies who will stand up and take risks for the sake of friendship. The book covers the protagonist's growth experience for a long time, and does not get entangled with some vicious characters for several chapters. Everyone is working hard to cultivate and protect this world of cultivation. Everyone in the protagonist group is well-shaped and has complementary personalities. Although the senior brother is not good at words and the senior sister is prone to self-doubt, they were all cured later. The senior brothers and sisters are also protecting the heroine [crying] It's not just the protagonist. The story of some of the supporting characters also made me feel sad. For example, the younger sister of the demon clan leader and the general, I almost thought they could have a very good friend [crying] And when it comes to the emotional journey of the male and female protagonists, both of them have mouths and will express their love without feeling aggrieved. The heroine is also a very smart baby. She can come up with some unexpected ideas every time. Everyone must be well and soar together, and let the rating of this book reach 9+ [top post] It made me laugh bitterly, and sometimes I would laugh inexplicably because of some small things, but when I think about it, I feel sad. This book is actually a bit realistic. Without qualifications, you can't practice. When I saw Xiao Tan leaving, my heart clenched. Why was he the only one chosen? [I almost cried]

It looks good. I want to gain weight.

Good-looking package good-looking [Adoration]

Really good-looking, innocent and innocent

Good-looking👀Good-looking👀Good-looking

Take a good look, take a good look, love it, love it [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, I love the author [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

Come on, I've been short of books for a long time, and finally came across this one😭The heroine has her own thoughts, she's not a saint, she's very courageous, I like it very much.

This is awesome, fellow veterans, I won't lose money if I invest in it. Come on, the author, I must finish it. It's really good [crying][crying][crying] It saved my recent book drought. I don't dare to read it too fast, because I'm afraid I'll have to wait for updates after finishing it [Adoration][Adoration]

It's good to watch, and the way the male protagonist cares about the female protagonist unintentionally really poked me. Sweet, the female protagonist also has her own upgrade path, and she is not just following the emotional line with the male protagonist. Worth seeing! !

I think it's quite good, but I don't dare to read it too quickly, because I really rarely feel it. I recommend +1. I feel that the author is very careful in writing, but I hope he won't perfunctory me later. To be honest, this book is really good. I don't dare to rush it, and I'm even more afraid that the author updated it overnight after reading the comments and died suddenly... The character I like the most in this book is the third senior brother... That's the killer. I also like the second senior brother and the fifth senior sister... Just don't write for them again. It's so miserable... But if you like to watch good things, watch more... I like to watch more. The characters have distinct characteristics, and all of them are at the peak of their appearance. The third senior brother is really a character I particularly like. Wow. Can the author describe the appearance of the third senior brother more clearly to me? Leave some room for my imagination.

Update quickly, it's so beautiful [love][love][love]

It's really beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! Come on big

It's so beautiful, but it's just not enough [crying] [crying]

Very very beautiful

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Why does this book come with its own music? , The book is no longer available when closed, and the book is available again when opened.

Nothing bad so far

Update soon! It feels a bit like a group portrait. In fact, I feel that the name will mislead many people. I suggest that the author consider changing the name.

Jujuju looks great! Everyone has their own characteristics.

Very, very beautiful [blowing kiss], please give it a thumbs up to the author

Ahhhh~ I believe this book written by the author is super, super good! ! ! ! !

The rating shouldn't be so low. It's great to watch. I just beg you to say goodbye. The plot is brilliant.

It's so beautiful, but why is it not finished? It's so heart-breaking. Looks good. Recommended to watch.