Konoha: Who Is a Good Person Living Together with Earthy White Moonlight?

It wasn't until I read this book that I understood the feelings of the Terracotta Warriors and Horses. It was so cool to watch Ying Zheng.

This Naruto fanfic is the best one I've seen so far. It's not as bad as it was at the beginning, and it's like giving a training device. The plot is also very gradual, and the protagonist does not develop rapidly from the beginning and then become a quarrel with the sky and the earth. It's hard to describe. In short, after you read it, you will be motivated to keep reading. I think this book can score 9.0 Or above.

In today's world where there are endless cool articles, it is a rare good book to be found in the trend of cheating and cheating. The author has his own outline of the protagonist's evolutionary strength. From weak to strong, you will not feel very invincible. It is logical and step-by-step. It is well received.

Yes, I am a bookworm of 10 years. To me, the portrayal of the protagonist is very delicate and real. This is not a mindless article! Very to my taste Everything was fine up to now, I've seen Chapter 143, but the movement speed of this White Zetsu is so ridiculous, it's comparable to the Flying Thunder God! The key is that this is still the most common Bai Zetsu! You can change it a little bit and make it something like reverse channeling (teleportation) or make this White Zetsu special. Otherwise, in the later stage, tens of thousands of White Zetsu can fool any ninja village. Later, poison was added, and Tsunade was hypnotized and controlled by Danzo. [Cover face]

This is good, I think it looks better than other Naruto fics... The front is fine, but the back is a little watery, it's all normal...

It's good-looking. The protagonist is a loser and rises up from a supporting role step by step. It's not like a systematic and brainless novel. It's logical and the characters' emotions are also very rich. It's a very good work by a Naruto fan that I've seen.

When I saw Kakashi-sensei in Chapter 91 recommending the team to participate in the selection with the One-Handed Seal of Reconciliation, I finally understood why I felt comfortable reading this novel. The life scenes described by the author are lacking in other Narutos, Kakashi-sensei's entanglement, the kind of entanglement and temptation, etc. Sexual expression is exactly the part that other types of Naruto novels do not have or dare not write or are too lazy to write, so it looks very dry, like a semi-finished butter dough, which is edible but difficult to eat for a long time. The author's is like a formed Ichiraku Ramen, with different flavors and worthy of long-term aftertaste.

This book is really getting more and more exciting as it is serialized. Multiple characters from two different time points interact with each other. Sasuke, who already has a kaleidoscope, is brought to an era before he was born. Obito, a hot-blooded person who has not yet darkened, is brought to the protagonist's future where Kakashi becomes Hokage. I look forward to the stories brought by the author.

It looks good and suppresses the main character's combat power. One use of the golden finger by the supporting character can produce more combat power than hundreds of times by the main character.

The plot is reasonable, the process is interesting, and there is nothing sinister about it. It's just that there are too few updates, although two updates a day are not bad.

Yes, there are not too many poisonous points [blowing kiss] [smirk smile] It's just that the heroine is so cute [face covering] I like it more [smirk smile]

Five-star praise. Compared to many Naruto fans today who either travel to the Three War stage or the previous stage, I still prefer the plot of the original work, maybe because I can see the growth of the protagonist group. At present, I personally don't think there are many flaws, the hooks given are not very powerful, and the characterization is not bad, so it is considered a slow-burning game.

It's been a long time since I've read a fanfic that really suited my taste. Many people think that the protagonist is too weak, too timid, and the pace is too slow. I think this is an advantage for me. I don't care whether the protagonist is really invincible or grows up quickly, so that many things can happen in his mind. Because the protagonist Goldfinger is destined to be invincible in the future, and the speed of his growth depends on his personal pursuits. As long as the story is logical and innovative, it is a qualified fanfic for me. The reading of this novel is very different from other novels (maybe it's because I haven't read it enough). While other fan novels are strongly involved in the growth trajectory of important characters in the original plot, they are also basically present at important nodes of each character, or there are obvious hints in advance that the story will change. However, this novel downplays the influence of the protagonist at important nodes. The following contains spoilers, please consider carefully before continuing reading. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Take Obito as an example, because in the original main line, the blackened Obito is indispensable, and the timeline where the protagonist is located is unlikely to affect the current blackened Obito, so the author cleverly gave the protagonist a golden finger, which can connect the parallel worlds of different timelines, so that all kinds of difficulties before and after the original plot can be solved in an all-round way. As of the latest plot, Obito from another parallel world brought his twin Kamui to the blackened Obito timeline where the protagonist is, and is carrying out a mission with the Naruto team who have just become genin. In the timeline of the Double Kamui Obito, with the help of the protagonist Goldfinger, Lin did not die, and Obito stopped halfway through his blackening (laugh), so I am looking forward to when the two Obitos meet, and Sunshine Obito uses his own mouth to escape and accuses the blackened Obito (it is interesting to think about it, after all, only you know yourself best, and you are the most qualified to teach yourself). Isn't this a replica of Naruto's favorite memory killing anime, haha. So if you find this interesting, you can give it a try. This novel may not be to your taste, but it will definitely not be bad.

First is the idea: five stars Writing style: 4 stars Plot: 5 stars Liqiang system logic: 4 stars Overall it's 4.5 Stars My previous evaluation was a bit hasty. There were too many poison points in the later stage. I couldn't hold on anymore. I split the Ten-Tails and gave it to Obito. That's it. I just want to give it 0 points.

No meat to eat, almost starving to death [Wrongful] Catch up to the latest chapter 502. If you want to watch Meat Eater, you can leave [Cherish it carefully]. However, leaving aside the acquisition of girls, the other plot content is still quite busy [Eating Melon]

I saw the end. I didn't expect that there were so few comments at the end. I personally think this book is okay. It suits my taste. It depends on each person's definition of coolness. This book just fits my coolness. Except for the ending being a bit rushed, I really can't find any faults. Maybe it's because the author wanted to finish it earlier. I can obviously feel that the pace of the later period is too fast. I don't think Otsutsuki needs to appear so early, especially in the past, Konoha, a world where Boruto didn't even appear. It feels like it's still too early. Especially the Konoha of the past. However, before Otsutsuki, through a series of operations by the protagonist, it was quite interesting to see that many of the original tragedies of Konoha in the past disappeared. The plot of Konoha in the future when Orochimaru went to the moon was quite exciting. I feel that it was a bit worse in the past. In short, this book also cost me a small week. I was very happy to read it this week. It is one of my favorite books recently. The early stage is really good. The protagonist collects various powers and becomes stronger through plug-ins. There is also the chakra growth in the early stages. I really like that setting. After the protagonist has various abilities, especially the eyes, and gives these abilities to his teammates, the fun of the book becomes less interesting, but there are still other exciting points. Overall, it is very good, thank the author. It is a good fanfic and a good choice for entertainment. After reading the previous plot, I feel like looking back on Naruto. I also imagined how cool it would be to pretend to be awesome in that world if I had a golden finger. It can be regarded as a dream come true for the former middle school boy. Even if you complain about this golden finger or door handle, it is still too explosive.

Connotative and high-grade, there are few horizontal works that can achieve the level of the author [laughing and crying] The most valuable and ordinary ninja talent, the ordinary golden finger, has the inner effect of writing a refreshing article. This type of conception and a lack of self-righteous attitude are what readers are looking for in a work of consistent quality both internally and externally. Realism and fun covering the emotional line hidden on the river surface are not only the requirements of the current environment, but also a rare goal and ability. It is definitely a top-ninth work. Among similar works about Naruto, it is a rare masterpiece. It is worth reading and highly recommended [laughs][laughs]

After reading it, I don't feel that there are any major flaws. Compared with the semi-invincible articles that have been popular in the system in recent years, it is much more difficult to write, but the author did not fail to write it. Both worlds are handled pretty well. What I am doing here is the same as the eunuch. In fact, it is because the author wrote too long for the early upgrade. I am only about 15 years old until the last chapter. Even if I have the intention to do that, I am powerless. So now there is no pressure on my strength, and I have begun to prepare for it, but it has been delayed for too long.

The author's writing is good and the plot is compact. Although the way of strengthening is to touch the door handle, which I have never seen before in my life, it actually talks about so many things around the handle. It is very interesting. I suggest Naruto fans to read it.

It's great, I've read chapter 600. The author is very good at telling stories and evoking emotions, and is very familiar with Naruto. He is very good at exploring some minor characters and uncommon elements. He must have done a lot of homework. I watched it so much that I forgot to eat or sleep. It was originally supposed to be full marks, but unfortunately the space of the second creation often makes or breaks the original work. Although the previous chapters cannot be said to be flawless, they are very enjoyable. However, after connecting to the Boruto part, the look and feel of the work began to decline. The previous rhythm of both the main plot and daily life began to become a bit chaotic. Shippuden was directly compressed due to the butterfly effect. In the final analysis, we can only say that Boruto is still a heinous crime. Although Shippuden is not as exciting as the early days of Naruto, it is still much better than Boruto.

I have commented before and said the same thing. This is one of the few Naruto stories that I have read with reasonable logic. This is very rare. After all, anyone who has watched the Naruto anime can see that there are many places where logic is not very reasonable [eating melon]

There is no conceptual system, but there is a door handle used for unlocking and hanging like the system. Compared to system novels that distribute some powerful cheats by completing tasks, the cheats in this book are relatively small. Moreover, this book gives cheats to both time travelers and natives. This setting is relatively new. So it's pretty good and deserves 4 stars.

One of the better-looking Naruto fics, Golden Finger is reasonably strong and durable.

I have seen the homepage many times, but I never clicked on it because of the book title and introduction. It is really good to click on it today. If nothing else, it at least attracts people to read. The reasonable plot advancement is not bad. The supporting characters who participate in the main plot are not too strong and the descriptions are more in line with the original work. It is a rare high-quality fan.

The protagonist has a palace and can calculate how to gain benefits for himself, but he also values ​​friendship and is not cold-blooded. He will risk danger to save his companions. The most important thing is not the Holy Mother. I personally think it is a rare high-quality food in the Hokage area. Good luck to the author!

A very good fanfic. I am biased and refuse to read Boruto, so I can probably understand it when I see a lot of confusion in the later stages. There are some shortcomings in the later stages and the ending is a bit rushed. Maybe it's because Boruto is not finished yet and there are more characters (unclear). Unfortunately, there are no additional explanations, such as all the time. I want to see the evolution of One-Tail after swallowing the Nine-Tails and how Shukaku will be resurrected later on. There is no scene for the two younger brothers in the later stage, and the door handle is purely a plug-in without explaining its origin. The whole story is self-explanatory, and it is more of a group portrait. As for the emotional scenes, I can also understand it. This kind of harem is still single, and the two sides dance in the end, but the main reason is to avoid offending the readers. I don't have much to say about the advantages. The plot is very emotional. It presents a lot of extra content in the theater in the form of tasks. The strength of the protagonist group is gradually improved. At the same time, the characters of the group are very good. The two equal worlds are merged. The logic of the characters' behavior is basically online. There are no flaws.

Of the dozen or so chapters I have read so far, except for the first two chapters where the inner drama is too out of the ordinary, the rest are pretty good. Coming, coming! After 130 chapters, the bloodline of this book is finally pure [laughter] The last sentence of Chapter 190 really makes me happy! Well, Chapter 286 is a bit toxic to me. It even made me think that the author had been changed. I'm not sure. I'll give it another try. Around Chapter 320, it's extremely poisonous [smile]. For the sake of the rationality of the plot, the author has no problem, but the reading experience of the readers has dropped significantly. Around Chapter 330, I enjoyed reading it, and I'll make up for it.

Such a good-looking novel actually has all the elements I like in 7.5, That is, the protagonist, Kakashi is the second protagonist, and there is Nohara Lin, the two are connected in time and space, it is amazing. And there is no peeing spot

The ending is quite unexpected. It breaks out of the big log cycle and becomes an independent ninja world. It's quite interesting. The character creation is also pretty good. It's not invincible or systematic. You can completely see the character's growth, which is rare.

Saw Chapter 124. Someone has written about the interconnection between the two worlds, but this is the first time that Naruto is in the same world with different timelines and can continue to communicate with each other (not Dragon Vein). The angle is novel and the writing is good. There are no plots and dialogues that are too idiotic or novice.